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first of all, the grammar and naming of certain stuff is horrendous, this is a badly done wish fulfilment.. like instantly giving mastered 6 styles n all instead of him training it, and MC is bipolar or somethin first he says how he's gonna make luffy his soldier, then joins him and asks to be 1st mate(i don't mind joining luffy, since that's best for his system), and i honestly don't like how the MC acts either(just a personal preference)
I don't know why people are calling this bad I thoroughly enjoyed it and credit should be given when it's due. Yes I know they should be critical but at least have a good reason and not just say, "He joined Luffy in chapter 1 and so it's bad," Like???? Anyway I hope you write more and more I love this story
Please tag ‘harem’ if you are going to write about it. not everyone likes reading Harems and getting invested in the story and later facing trash plot like harem ugh...
The power ups are way too much, mf got all three haki while they haven't even reached Logue town. Also his attitude bro why are you even on the crew if you're gonna act like you're above the captain??? Also, harem? No warnings about that? Really had to drop after reading the part where he hugs nami during arlong Arc and whispers some embarassing stuff, actually made me physically cringe holy!
If you’re looking for a unique story with many changes to canon, then this isn’t the story for you. I’m only as far as Syrup Village, but so far the MC is Luffy’s vice captain, and he is the strongest in the crew by a wide margin. Although he flaunts his strength and doesn’t allow anyone to push him around, he also understands the necessity of letting Luffy and the others grow through their battles with Buggy, Kuro, etc. This story isn’t very original, but it is pretty funny and it’s an enjoyable variation of the original storyline through the lense of a reincarnator who enjoys the strawhat crew and wants to experience the world with them. It could never be one of my favorite fanfics, but it’s still quite a fun read and I’m loving it so far
Nice story so far Editor need editing for early chapter to more better translation Need more story dhdudkdhdhshzgshhasgshsbzgshsjsgsjbsbssbbsshhshzhzuzuzhzhzhzhzhzhzhzjzjzjzjzjznzhzhjzjanzbzhzjzjznznznznznznnznz
I don't understand why the reviews are so low. This fanfic is quite good, it's fast paced and probably but still is fun. It will probably be a short fanfic but that doesn't make it 'bad'. So, recommendable. But only for the ones that found quick paced and easy -going fanfics fun.
Got to know only now in chapter 104 that this book is going to have harem…there was no tag or warning. My time was wasted. I hate you author/translator. Absolutely despicable behaviour.
I didn’t enjoy it. He just joined luffy soon as story started. I don’t know if the storyline will change later on, but still boring that he joined mc of the story.
Interesting but what's wrong with the translation and naming sense like if not because I have watched one piece I wouldn't understand anything
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Мне очень зашло))) Сюжет хороший, идёт плавно. Нехватка в редакторах. Но читабельно. Продолжайте в том же духе [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Overall story quite good MC quite strong with current timeline But need editing for name (focus) Quite important for story in one piece Jdsksjsksjdjxjdjdjdkxjxjxhdjdkdkdkdjxdkkdkdkxkxkxxkxkxjxjxjxjxjxjxjkxkskskzkxzkkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkz
The story could be so much better if the translator didn’t make so many mistakes with names as well as writing ONE PEACE instead of Pirate King.
I mean does any story that one piece that has Mc join luffy crew and becom3 subordinate deserve a high rating. No. Trash. Had potential but author had make simp Mc for luffy
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first of all, the grammar and naming of certain stuff is horrendous, this is a badly done wish fulfilment.. like instantly giving mastered 6 styles n all instead of him training it, and MC is bipolar or somethin first he says how he's gonna make luffy his soldier, then joins him and asks to be 1st mate(i don't mind joining luffy, since that's best for his system), and i honestly don't like how the MC acts either(just a personal preference)
I don't know why people are calling this bad I thoroughly enjoyed it and credit should be given when it's due. Yes I know they should be critical but at least have a good reason and not just say, "He joined Luffy in chapter 1 and so it's bad," Like???? Anyway I hope you write more and more I love this story
Please tag ‘harem’ if you are going to write about it. not everyone likes reading Harems and getting invested in the story and later facing trash plot like harem ugh...
The power ups are way too much, mf got all three haki while they haven't even reached Logue town. Also his attitude bro why are you even on the crew if you're gonna act like you're above the captain??? Also, harem? No warnings about that? Really had to drop after reading the part where he hugs nami during arlong Arc and whispers some embarassing stuff, actually made me physically cringe holy!
If you’re looking for a unique story with many changes to canon, then this isn’t the story for you. I’m only as far as Syrup Village, but so far the MC is Luffy’s vice captain, and he is the strongest in the crew by a wide margin. Although he flaunts his strength and doesn’t allow anyone to push him around, he also understands the necessity of letting Luffy and the others grow through their battles with Buggy, Kuro, etc. This story isn’t very original, but it is pretty funny and it’s an enjoyable variation of the original storyline through the lense of a reincarnator who enjoys the strawhat crew and wants to experience the world with them. It could never be one of my favorite fanfics, but it’s still quite a fun read and I’m loving it so far
Nice story so far Editor need editing for early chapter to more better translation Need more story dhdudkdhdhshzgshhasgshsbzgshsjsgsjbsbssbbsshhshzhzuzuzhzhzhzhzhzhzhzjzjzjzjzjznzhzhjzjanzbzhzjzjznznznznznznnznz
I don't understand why the reviews are so low. This fanfic is quite good, it's fast paced and probably but still is fun. It will probably be a short fanfic but that doesn't make it 'bad'. So, recommendable. But only for the ones that found quick paced and easy -going fanfics fun.
Got to know only now in chapter 104 that this book is going to have harem…there was no tag or warning. My time was wasted. I hate you author/translator. Absolutely despicable behaviour.
I didn’t enjoy it. He just joined luffy soon as story started. I don’t know if the storyline will change later on, but still boring that he joined mc of the story.
Interesting but what's wrong with the translation and naming sense like if not because I have watched one piece I wouldn't understand anything
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Мне очень зашло))) Сюжет хороший, идёт плавно. Нехватка в редакторах. Но читабельно. Продолжайте в том же духе [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Overall story quite good MC quite strong with current timeline But need editing for name (focus) Quite important for story in one piece Jdsksjsksjdjxjdjdjdkxjxjxhdjdkdkdkdjxdkkdkdkxkxkxxkxkxjxjxjxjxjxjxjkxkskskzkxzkkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkzkz
The story could be so much better if the translator didn’t make so many mistakes with names as well as writing ONE PEACE instead of Pirate King.
I mean does any story that one piece that has Mc join luffy crew and becom3 subordinate deserve a high rating. No. Trash. Had potential but author had make simp Mc for luffy
it's pretty good finally something worth Reading