One Piece: Starting by Refusing Shanks

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Gered

Feel free to ask me anything, and I'll do my best to answer with what I know about this book. If you notice anything lacking in the quality of the novel, please let me know. I've tried to translate as free of Chinese elements as possible and have changed the Chinese names to fit One Piece characters. I'm always looking to improve, so if you spot any issues with the translation, I'd appreciate your feedback to help me enhance my skills. For this whole week, you'll receive chapters every two hours. I hope you'll support me so I can continue releasing two chapters every two hours next week as well.

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Knight_Noctis

From story to plot , everything is quite well written . But everything good with the story gets pretty much forgotten with the mc. He's not even a generic one. He's just a robot with no dreams or ambitions. His interactions are incredibly bland. And the system just slaves him around . That's another negative point of the story.

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Black_Night_69

well to be honest i found it really monotonous the mc only cares about alcohol and the sign-in also feel like he has no personality whatsoever and every character he meets tries to recruit him. besides those it is good if you don't have any other fanfic to read.

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DecayedTree

mc is like a depressed overpowerd teenager, and everyone around him acts as a conserned mom trying and failing to break him out of his depression. anyways good story, I hope it continues

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Gratiz_

This is really good. Mc is a traveller with a system. His system makes him interact with one piece characters to get rewards. In a way he is like Hawkeye - traveling alone and drinking alcohol (sake).

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manolohard

O MC é praticamente um robô sem personalidade nenhuma e escravo do sistema,tudo se resume a ele viajando para fazer login e beber sem nenhum propósito real,simplesmente pq o sistema manda

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DocAnubis

The translator is doing a good job at making the story more appetizing but it's soooo boring I have read a lot of Chinese fanfics but this one take the cake for the most monotone,boring,repeating story ever.whenever he goes to a new location all the npcs have the same dialog and reactions.

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binah

i shall read this fanfic with great intrest

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MarXox130

the translator is amazing but the history is trash Mc is complete apathetic have no goal or objective i don't know why such good translator is wasting his time with this kind of novel

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Nicolas_Bahamondes

The author does a good job with the writing and that is what hurts the most, the Chinese do not know how to make a good one piece plot, in short he is just a depressive child who one day woke up the system and began to obey. religiously, the protagonist has no charisma or self-esteem, he is just a robot that obeys the system, the interactions are so low and forced.

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Yanwar_Rizki

Personally, in my opinion, this story is not bad with the MC focusing on his goal of completing the task given, plus writing that suits me

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wisdomseeker

This fanfic in a nutshell .

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Celleborn

This story is interisting and all, but I getting tired of the MC personality, in the beginning was funny but now his bored attitude is getting annoying. At least have some sense of wonder, the dude travel to a fictional universe full of fantastical shit and call himself a traveler but in no point he seems to be enjoying any of it, he is just in autopilot going where the system point him to, he barely seems to care for the power ups he is getting. I not even saying that he should be a happy-go-lucky guy just give him a goal or something, show that he is traveler because he want to explore and see the wonders of the one piece world. Ok, final thing, please have any bartender deny him a drink, at least one person in the world should tell the 10 year old kid "no" when he enter a bar alone asking for booze.

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nemker

a well translated novel but a poor choice of a story, you can switch the mc with a stone, and i think it would be more interesting. hope to read your next novel 👍

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LucasPiccoli

A melhor fanficfion de One Piece que li em muito tempo, autor, não ligue para o que estão dizendo sobre o protagonista ser sem emoção, eu realmente gostei muito e talvez foi por este motivo que esta história me prendeu tanto. Resumindo, eu curti muito e espero ansioso por novos capítulos.

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MBenc_120

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CaioBR

Não é o melhor livro, mas é um livro bom o suficiente para passar um tempo e dar algumas risadas. Filling, filling, fillinFilling, filling, filling

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