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Hey, I just wanted to say you doing great with this fic hell I look forward to it every day. so keep saying thank you and doing great work. G.B.Y.
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Great story and amazing take on David without the dumb system cliche that everyone uses. The writing needs work but the story is pretty good structure with good character interaction and solid story pacing
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Honestly pretty good, other than how speech is handled. You can just out the character name before -, when they are talking and it would help alot if you can't use ""
There are very few cyberpunk fanfics out there, so keep it up, this fanfic has a lot of potential, my review for this is five stars. change and out
Nice read it has a good balance between romance, action and just chill with the girls. Maybe he should get a friend who can banter that will not end up wanting to get in his pants. I mean even guys who sleep around a lot tend to have a lot of friends. At least that’s what I think after 28h without sleep but it could also be the lack of sleep. Keep up the good work👌
The quality of the translation is... bad. But the story is good, is nice to have a David with a brain. Just... fix the quality, use Chatgpt or Grammarly.
This is better than I thought. This ff is first good cyberpunk ff I read. It makes me happy. . .
I've read a lot of cyberpunk stories and they all seem to go the same way. Either the (SI)David plays along like the show or he becomes O.P. and does his own thing. Then I started reading this story and I Hallelujah! A story that's completely original. Thankyou for this story.
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chefs kiss great read my only complaint would be the formating but it isn't so bad that it makes the story unreadable
the story seems really interesting, Cyberpunk fanfics are always welcome, especially about the anime, the author seems to have a good knowledge about the world he is writing, but unfortunately the good things to talk about end here, the dialogues are honestly bad to follow, the author uses only a "-" and writes the speech, does not say who is talking or what is doing, not only becomes boring to read, but it is also tiring, I have lost count of how many times I have had that Stop reading just to situate myself about who was talking at the time, and this was in a conversation between only two people, nor do I want to imagine the confusion that will be when there is a conversation between a group of people, another negative point is the protagonist himself, himself states that in his past life he was not used to hurting people, but a few minutes after transmigrating he casually kills more than 10 bandit on a mission, piles their bodies and even seems bothered, to finish the... Criticism, it is recommended that a reader have an prior knowledge about various things about the world, because history explains nothing about what the world is like, how things work or how they look.
Its good to have a cyberpunk fic after all the other ones were abondoned. It’s well written for the most part and intresting. I agree with the other review the dialogue is confusing. You don’t write dialogue like that.
its really good cyberpunk fanfic but god the dialogue needs to be worked on. for the most part I cant tell whos talking and other times some of the dialogue doesn't even make sense at times.
It's very good, the pace of the story is really good and taking into account that there are few cyberpunk stories, this is appreciated. The mc feels with personality despite not having much emotion, it is also quite original which is quite appreciated, the plot is different from other fics so there is faith that the canon will be broken and I hope it is.
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I love............ ...... ........................ ....... ....... ......... ...................... ........................................ .
Hey, I just wanted to say you doing great with this fic hell I look forward to it every day. so keep saying thank you and doing great work. G.B.Y.
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Great story and amazing take on David without the dumb system cliche that everyone uses. The writing needs work but the story is pretty good structure with good character interaction and solid story pacing
Cryptocurrency scams have increasingly become a pressing issue, with numerous individuals falling prey to fraudulent schemes promising easy gains. The consequences of such scams are often severe, leaving victims feeling disheartened and uncertain about the possibility of recovering their lost funds. However, specialized resources and experts exist to assist in these challenging situations, offering a glimmer of hope for recovery. One such expert resource is Lee Ultimate Hacker, a company renowned for its expertise in cryptocurrency recovery. Their team is adept at navigating the complexities of digital asset recovery, leveraging cutting-edge technology and a deep understanding of cryptocurrency transactions. This approach enables them to tackle the sophisticated nature of digital fraud effectively. Lee Ultimate Hacker's process involves a comprehensive analysis of the fraudulent activities, tracing the stolen assets through blockchain and other digital trails. Their expertise is particularly valuable given the opaque nature of cryptocurrency transactions, which can often make tracing and recovering funds seem like an insurmountable task. Many victims of cryptocurrency scams are initially skeptical about the possibility of recovery, believing that once their funds are gone, they are permanently lost. This skepticism is often due to a lack of awareness regarding the resources and services available to assist in such scenarios. Lee Ultimate Hacker stands out by addressing these concerns through a combination of technical acumen and personalized support, helping victims regain their lost assets. The experience with Lee Ultimate Hacker underscored the importance of seeking professional help when dealing with cryptocurrency recovery. It highlighted that recovery is possible, even in seemingly hopeless situations, provided you engage with reputable and skilled recovery services. while the world of cryptocurrency presents significant risks, effective recourse options are available for those who have been defrauded. Leveraging the expertise of teams like Lee Ultimate Hacker can provide victims with the necessary support and technical knowledge to reclaim their lost assets. As cryptocurrency continues to evolve, having access to such specialized recovery services offers a vital lifeline for those affected by digital fraud. LEEULTIMATEHACKER@ AOL. COM wh@tsapp +1 (715) 314 - 9248
Honestly pretty good, other than how speech is handled. You can just out the character name before -, when they are talking and it would help alot if you can't use ""
There are very few cyberpunk fanfics out there, so keep it up, this fanfic has a lot of potential, my review for this is five stars. change and out
Nice read it has a good balance between romance, action and just chill with the girls. Maybe he should get a friend who can banter that will not end up wanting to get in his pants. I mean even guys who sleep around a lot tend to have a lot of friends. At least that’s what I think after 28h without sleep but it could also be the lack of sleep. Keep up the good work👌
The quality of the translation is... bad. But the story is good, is nice to have a David with a brain. Just... fix the quality, use Chatgpt or Grammarly.
This is better than I thought. This ff is first good cyberpunk ff I read. It makes me happy. . .
I've read a lot of cyberpunk stories and they all seem to go the same way. Either the (SI)David plays along like the show or he becomes O.P. and does his own thing. Then I started reading this story and I Hallelujah! A story that's completely original. Thankyou for this story.
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chefs kiss great read my only complaint would be the formating but it isn't so bad that it makes the story unreadable
the story seems really interesting, Cyberpunk fanfics are always welcome, especially about the anime, the author seems to have a good knowledge about the world he is writing, but unfortunately the good things to talk about end here, the dialogues are honestly bad to follow, the author uses only a "-" and writes the speech, does not say who is talking or what is doing, not only becomes boring to read, but it is also tiring, I have lost count of how many times I have had that Stop reading just to situate myself about who was talking at the time, and this was in a conversation between only two people, nor do I want to imagine the confusion that will be when there is a conversation between a group of people, another negative point is the protagonist himself, himself states that in his past life he was not used to hurting people, but a few minutes after transmigrating he casually kills more than 10 bandit on a mission, piles their bodies and even seems bothered, to finish the... Criticism, it is recommended that a reader have an prior knowledge about various things about the world, because history explains nothing about what the world is like, how things work or how they look.
Its good to have a cyberpunk fic after all the other ones were abondoned. It’s well written for the most part and intresting. I agree with the other review the dialogue is confusing. You don’t write dialogue like that.
its really good cyberpunk fanfic but god the dialogue needs to be worked on. for the most part I cant tell whos talking and other times some of the dialogue doesn't even make sense at times.
It's very good, the pace of the story is really good and taking into account that there are few cyberpunk stories, this is appreciated. The mc feels with personality despite not having much emotion, it is also quite original which is quite appreciated, the plot is different from other fics so there is faith that the canon will be broken and I hope it is.
200 gems = bonus chapter 20 comments per chapter = bonus chapter 10 reviews = bonus chapter 3 patreon subscriptions = 10 bonus chapters