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When I first discovered this story I thought It be interesting new spin if you will an old tail so I started the first chapter... I'm sorry it wasn't a chapter it was an abbreviation of the chapters to come and the next one was the same and so was the one after that. then you finally get to the chapter that starts the story and you discover that it's also just pathetic. Great story idea just bad presentation my advice start over again and think it through this time.

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