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i love it to read a Story in the world of eragon. Please continue to write the story, it's great and I'm happy to continue reading it
Fic is well written and the story is thought out. Got to see the beginning of the action and then the author went AWOL. if the story continues it'll be great if not, then you get a good what-if fic.
A really nice story. Eragon-Storys are rare. I really hope the novel does not get dropped.
I wasn't sure I would like this because of the stat screens. I would prefer fantasy to stay fantasy, but it seems to be more for the readers than a actual system. As far as anyone else can tell he just adapts and grows crazy fast. This is also one of the better written Eragon stories. Not to mention it has gotten further into the book than most. Eragon not being a sociopath or an overly emotional manchild is also refreshing.
You are doing great, your work is easily in my top 5 stories ever, fanfiction or orginal. Keep it up, its worth it. You found a perfect balnce, a world with magic and character that can flexibly grow, but not to the point of being too overpowered, and you can change worlds using magic if such thing happens. You have no issues with grammar, dialogues or storytelling. A gift to express your imagination on paper in such a way, that it can be delivered form pages to your reader head and create a decent image, both of background, and the isides of your characters.
OK... The Mc is the make or break of any story , especially transmigration/reincarnation ones . And this fanfic just proves that . Eragon here is essentially arrogant ; somewhat tolerable at the start but now he is just unbearable. So if you dislike arrogance and you don't have an obsession with getting women or looking good. If you don't like MCs gloating about how good they have become every few paragraphs, DO NOT touch this fic. There are other sources to get yourself irritated, no need to suffer here. My next problem with this fic is writing. The author has ok grammar, but grammar isn't everything . The prose in accordance to the source material and the setting is "out of touch" ,to put it lightly. All characters often use modern words , which absolutely obliterates any immersion for me. Finally the system interface is useless. The resistance displays are very vague . (This message is for the author , as advice)Please when you use levels for progression , provide a scale. How strong are elves? how strong is a human . What value does a level has? what does 100 lvl mean. Everything is scattered. And while this is very convenient for you, as it allows you to adjust things for *PLOT*, for readers its a dropper. My advice to the author is "Rewrite". Make the Mc tolerable . Fix the writing and sentence making . Fix the system for god sakes. #3 Stars Look I also want a good Eragon fanfic , and while I have dropped the fic (until its improved), I wish you all the best.
Love this fanfic? Got to say I’m realy looking forward to the fight between eragon and durza
I just started and I admit I'm not very enthusiastic. The main character reincarnates because it’s said he has very good karma, but his behavior suggests that if behaving like he does allows you to reincarnate, then I think 80% of the global population would have reincarnated into their favorite universe in their favorite character’s body. Additionally, he receives the memories of 14 years of life with his cousin and uncle, and yet he feels nothing for them! That’s not normal; memories shape who we are, as well as the emotions we feel. If he feels nothing, it’s possible he could be a sociopath. And finally, the way things are written... I must admit it bothers me a bit, but I’m not sure how to describe it. The description doesn’t immerse me in the universe; it feels like the story is set in modern times rather than medieval. But, well, since there are so few fanfics about Eragon, I’ll continue a bit, hoping that it improves.
great fic, i can't really find much to say about it other than the fact that it's a good fic, the main negative point of this fic is the MC's slimy and frankly childish character but the fic is still in its early stages so hopefully there will be some major character development, otherwise the mc's character might be a turn off for many people
Great Eragon story. Stayed up all night to catch up to ch 19. Can't wait for more chaps. I promise to be patient, though. Lol
So far, I am absolutely loving this story! I belive the author is doing a fantastic job of retelling the story with their own twist. The Grammer is great, the story updates regularly. I am greatly looking forward to seeing how this new Eragon tackles the challenges ahead.
A gem among so much mediocrity, don't miss it!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
a boring story nothing changes you have a Mc who care only for himself he cares only to level up is apathetic and arrogant every chapter and more and yea zero changes on plot
Genuinely one of the best fanfics I've read on here. Please don't drop. I've been giving you all my stones every day since I found this book.
Finally, a decent inheritance cycle series. Please don’t drop this. Every other one has gotten dropped and I really want to read one to the end. Great writing as well.
Thank you. Genuinely, thank you. I look forward to flying through Alagaesia once again.
The story is great please don't drop it and keep up the good work ............................................................... ......................................................................................................................................................
I love it. Id genuinely cry if this is discontinued. Up to chapter 12, and its looking bright asf. I really excited to see the story progress with a competent protag.
No suelo colocar reseñas antes de 50 capítulos, pero la verdad que la novela me da un muy buen sentimiento y sinceramente espero que no se abandona el proyecto.
Good stuff! Well written ! It's been refreshing to read this one. So far so good. Thanks
I Found Gold ................................................................................................................................................
I‘m really excited for the story. I like the slow start and hope u will continue this story. [img=update]
Author's shameless 5-star review. Some things about the story and plot, ~It's a The Inheritance Cycle fan-fic with good story building and strength progression from weak to strong. ~MC's strength will soar after a small time-skip which will be around the 5th chapter. ~There will be no harem. Happy Reading Everyone!!
i love it to read a Story in the world of eragon. Please continue to write the story, it's great and I'm happy to continue reading it
Fic is well written and the story is thought out. Got to see the beginning of the action and then the author went AWOL. if the story continues it'll be great if not, then you get a good what-if fic.
A really nice story. Eragon-Storys are rare. I really hope the novel does not get dropped.
I wasn't sure I would like this because of the stat screens. I would prefer fantasy to stay fantasy, but it seems to be more for the readers than a actual system. As far as anyone else can tell he just adapts and grows crazy fast. This is also one of the better written Eragon stories. Not to mention it has gotten further into the book than most. Eragon not being a sociopath or an overly emotional manchild is also refreshing.
You are doing great, your work is easily in my top 5 stories ever, fanfiction or orginal. Keep it up, its worth it. You found a perfect balnce, a world with magic and character that can flexibly grow, but not to the point of being too overpowered, and you can change worlds using magic if such thing happens. You have no issues with grammar, dialogues or storytelling. A gift to express your imagination on paper in such a way, that it can be delivered form pages to your reader head and create a decent image, both of background, and the isides of your characters.
OK... The Mc is the make or break of any story , especially transmigration/reincarnation ones . And this fanfic just proves that . Eragon here is essentially arrogant ; somewhat tolerable at the start but now he is just unbearable. So if you dislike arrogance and you don't have an obsession with getting women or looking good. If you don't like MCs gloating about how good they have become every few paragraphs, DO NOT touch this fic. There are other sources to get yourself irritated, no need to suffer here. My next problem with this fic is writing. The author has ok grammar, but grammar isn't everything . The prose in accordance to the source material and the setting is "out of touch" ,to put it lightly. All characters often use modern words , which absolutely obliterates any immersion for me. Finally the system interface is useless. The resistance displays are very vague . (This message is for the author , as advice)Please when you use levels for progression , provide a scale. How strong are elves? how strong is a human . What value does a level has? what does 100 lvl mean. Everything is scattered. And while this is very convenient for you, as it allows you to adjust things for *PLOT*, for readers its a dropper. My advice to the author is "Rewrite". Make the Mc tolerable . Fix the writing and sentence making . Fix the system for god sakes. #3 Stars Look I also want a good Eragon fanfic , and while I have dropped the fic (until its improved), I wish you all the best.
Love this fanfic? Got to say I’m realy looking forward to the fight between eragon and durza
I just started and I admit I'm not very enthusiastic. The main character reincarnates because it’s said he has very good karma, but his behavior suggests that if behaving like he does allows you to reincarnate, then I think 80% of the global population would have reincarnated into their favorite universe in their favorite character’s body. Additionally, he receives the memories of 14 years of life with his cousin and uncle, and yet he feels nothing for them! That’s not normal; memories shape who we are, as well as the emotions we feel. If he feels nothing, it’s possible he could be a sociopath. And finally, the way things are written... I must admit it bothers me a bit, but I’m not sure how to describe it. The description doesn’t immerse me in the universe; it feels like the story is set in modern times rather than medieval. But, well, since there are so few fanfics about Eragon, I’ll continue a bit, hoping that it improves.
great fic, i can't really find much to say about it other than the fact that it's a good fic, the main negative point of this fic is the MC's slimy and frankly childish character but the fic is still in its early stages so hopefully there will be some major character development, otherwise the mc's character might be a turn off for many people
Great Eragon story. Stayed up all night to catch up to ch 19. Can't wait for more chaps. I promise to be patient, though. Lol
So far, I am absolutely loving this story! I belive the author is doing a fantastic job of retelling the story with their own twist. The Grammer is great, the story updates regularly. I am greatly looking forward to seeing how this new Eragon tackles the challenges ahead.
A gem among so much mediocrity, don't miss it!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
a boring story nothing changes you have a Mc who care only for himself he cares only to level up is apathetic and arrogant every chapter and more and yea zero changes on plot
Genuinely one of the best fanfics I've read on here. Please don't drop. I've been giving you all my stones every day since I found this book.
Finally, a decent inheritance cycle series. Please don’t drop this. Every other one has gotten dropped and I really want to read one to the end. Great writing as well.
Thank you. Genuinely, thank you. I look forward to flying through Alagaesia once again.
The story is great please don't drop it and keep up the good work ............................................................... ......................................................................................................................................................
I love it. Id genuinely cry if this is discontinued. Up to chapter 12, and its looking bright asf. I really excited to see the story progress with a competent protag.
No suelo colocar reseñas antes de 50 capítulos, pero la verdad que la novela me da un muy buen sentimiento y sinceramente espero que no se abandona el proyecto.
Good stuff! Well written ! It's been refreshing to read this one. So far so good. Thanks
I Found Gold ................................................................................................................................................
I‘m really excited for the story. I like the slow start and hope u will continue this story. [img=update]
Author's shameless 5-star review. Some things about the story and plot, ~It's a The Inheritance Cycle fan-fic with good story building and strength progression from weak to strong. ~MC's strength will soar after a small time-skip which will be around the 5th chapter. ~There will be no harem. Happy Reading Everyone!!
Where is author San the book is great why stop