Reviews of Rebirth as an American Tycoon by Sayonara816 - Webnovel

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marcus_miles

IMPORTANT NOTE: This Novel is NOT a Wish-Fulfillment novel. It is more like a BIASED Opinion on American history. Character design: He has a super complex character, and you can't properly define it. Sometimes like a rabid dog and sometimes like a peaceful owner and other times like an opportunistic man (Tries to be one but is unsuccessful). I simply don't like his character. Mind my words, I don't like it but it is written well and proper. World background: It is very very chaotic ... Story development: To be honest it doesn't feel like much. The whole story is more of an opinion of the author than what the mc does with his knowledge. Writing: It is well translated, and it won't feel Chinese. Hats off to the translator. Overall: Wonderfully translated novel with a half mad and half scared main character, and most of the story is just author's opinion on the history of financial world.

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sandeep_hegde

This story is utter rubbish, there's no clear storyline. if you are bored and read this you will be bored even more There is no harem whatsoever That whole face slapping setup seems totally ludicrous & all of Mcs villains act like brain dead Even in 90s when he is well established and rich there are governments giving him trouble or some consortium causing trouble like everyone is after him which is just ridiculous they make it seem whole American govt. is dumb no one is that foolish to offend him that simply yet here we know that it lacks complete logic. Mc doesn't even form his own connection like with politics/capitalist he goes solo acting like stupid arrogant fool Mc says he just wants to enjoy life with beauties while making money but his actions speaks otherwise if he correctly managed just one or 2 companies it could last generations, but he goes for all companies then complains everyone gives me trouble just a braindead mc story is not worth it it's just unnecessarily bloated shit...

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Zo_Akai

I mean how can you give 5 stars, it's soo boaring i mean this Fanfiction its say Harem read up to 100 chap.... Still no lover etc... you know Mr author the story is not that bead but its boaring like add som romance or something in the middle for example he is in Hollywood an make him have 2 or 3 lovers. You make him care only his business an how he can make mone you know what i mean. This is good novel but boaring, atlist give him saxy secretary not old man hahahahaha

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Suroj_34

Good......... Love the story ... .... And delete all chinese elements.....................................[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]................................................

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A_cat_named_Dahlia

Great ff and very well translated. Tho sometimes it's very hard to know who's POV is it. Overall still a very good read. Thanks.

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Rey_Putra_4233

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nightjarr

I love the story and i like the way you translate it by getting rid of all the nationalism and racism. It's my favourite of the stories you're translating because it does not have as much sexual content and it's more focused on developing the story. Keep up the good work.

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Tumis
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Not recommended , unless you're very bored. Seems like a summary of events, bloated a bit (Like other chinese novels), add some more things, and sewed together. At least the author researched things, some obscure things. Though as is with this genre, plagiarism is to be expected. Lots of it. And face-slapping is normal in this story; MC does/offer something, others reject him, MC does another thing, and others be like 'Damn, shouldn't provoke/reject him'. And dialogue is rare. As for harem... Well, its like a casual fling; no serious relationship yet. And don't expect detailed romance scenes. Chinese novel don't have it. Oh, and translation quality. They're readable. And based on other reviews, translator is doing some editing. Though will not be the same quality if the original is english. Some wordings are weird, it's more likely because the original version is like that. Like, lost in translation, but make sense in the original language kind of thing

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Good story. Thanks for the work, translator. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Suroj_34

What happened new update why. want new chapter. .....===..............................................………………........……………...……………………………………….....

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Gabichu_Yeah

Excellent work by the translator, and you can really see the progressive improvement in the translations, which are of increasingly better quality.

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FiLL88

at the time of chapter 323. the translation and quality are great, but the content... since the translator cuts, merges, combines chapters, sometimes it is not clear what is happening at all, sometimes after reading a chapter you understand that you do not understand anything... in general, there is little about cinema and more about business, politics, and Mac's "weak waist")))

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GodOfReader

Thank you so much for your hard work in removing all the harmful elements from the novel. Your dedication has allowed us to enjoy the story in peace, without any worries or distractions. I truly appreciate the effort you’ve put into making this experience better for readers like me. Here’s a well-deserved 5-star rating for you!

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7rox
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Very well translated, and the update schedule is extraordinary.

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Tony_Pecoraro

He needs a girlfriend, that is the only thing I see wrong about this ff. Or atleast have some partners, it would make this ff more realistic.

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abhishek_korde

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Idealist

here I am. I have found the biggest hidden gems... kinda waiting so long to find this kind of novel.

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Episode_18

i hope this another harem [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Episode_18

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Artisan_Tales

I wanted to recommend to the translator that they translate I Am Hollywood, as, for me, it is the best webnovel with a Hollywood theme for a simple reason: it has almost none of the cheap Chinese nationalism that makes novels centered around Hollywood boring. However, I don't think it’s the best idea, as the author left it unfinished with a very rushed ending. Therefore, if the translator decides to translate it, my recommendation would be for them to continue it on their own when they reach the end. Otherwise, they would feel the same disappointment I felt when I reached the end of I Am Hollywood many years ago.

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MD_Toriqul_Islam

more more more..........................

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Slingshot

It's alright, i liked it, but there are certain places that still feels a bit meh. My advice? treat it as a comedy

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Vinod_kumar_7848

Please update more Chapters quickly please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

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MD_Toriqul_Islam

Great story, keep up the good work .....

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inkblackbull

i've been reading it nonstop and the updates also keep on coming. i can't justify myself not rating it at 5 stars.

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Billy_Agustian17

[img=Out of it][img=Cries][img=Out of it][img=Mad][img=More pls][img=Mad][img=Out of it][img=Envy][img=Speechless][img=Sigh][img=Good night][img=Loving it][img=Out of it][img=Feeling it][img=Speechless][img=Mad][img=In a daze][img=Cries][img=Relaxed][img=Envy][img=Out of it][img=Sigh][img=In your face][img=Envy][img=Out of it][img=Moneybags][img=In a daze][img=Moneybags]

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Dim_DimRos

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marcus_miles

IMPORTANT NOTE: This Novel is NOT a Wish-Fulfillment novel. It is more like a BIASED Opinion on American history. Character design: He has a super complex character, and you can't properly define it. Sometimes like a rabid dog and sometimes like a peaceful owner and other times like an opportunistic man (Tries to be one but is unsuccessful). I simply don't like his character. Mind my words, I don't like it but it is written well and proper. World background: It is very very chaotic ... Story development: To be honest it doesn't feel like much. The whole story is more of an opinion of the author than what the mc does with his knowledge. Writing: It is well translated, and it won't feel Chinese. Hats off to the translator. Overall: Wonderfully translated novel with a half mad and half scared main character, and most of the story is just author's opinion on the history of financial world.

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sandeep_hegde

This story is utter rubbish, there's no clear storyline. if you are bored and read this you will be bored even more There is no harem whatsoever That whole face slapping setup seems totally ludicrous & all of Mcs villains act like brain dead Even in 90s when he is well established and rich there are governments giving him trouble or some consortium causing trouble like everyone is after him which is just ridiculous they make it seem whole American govt. is dumb no one is that foolish to offend him that simply yet here we know that it lacks complete logic. Mc doesn't even form his own connection like with politics/capitalist he goes solo acting like stupid arrogant fool Mc says he just wants to enjoy life with beauties while making money but his actions speaks otherwise if he correctly managed just one or 2 companies it could last generations, but he goes for all companies then complains everyone gives me trouble just a braindead mc story is not worth it it's just unnecessarily bloated shit...

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Zo_Akai

I mean how can you give 5 stars, it's soo boaring i mean this Fanfiction its say Harem read up to 100 chap.... Still no lover etc... you know Mr author the story is not that bead but its boaring like add som romance or something in the middle for example he is in Hollywood an make him have 2 or 3 lovers. You make him care only his business an how he can make mone you know what i mean. This is good novel but boaring, atlist give him saxy secretary not old man hahahahaha

13d
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Suroj_34

Good......... Love the story ... .... And delete all chinese elements.....................................[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]................................................

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A_cat_named_Dahlia

Great ff and very well translated. Tho sometimes it's very hard to know who's POV is it. Overall still a very good read. Thanks.

28d
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Rey_Putra_4233

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nightjarr

I love the story and i like the way you translate it by getting rid of all the nationalism and racism. It's my favourite of the stories you're translating because it does not have as much sexual content and it's more focused on developing the story. Keep up the good work.

1mth
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Tumis
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Not recommended , unless you're very bored. Seems like a summary of events, bloated a bit (Like other chinese novels), add some more things, and sewed together. At least the author researched things, some obscure things. Though as is with this genre, plagiarism is to be expected. Lots of it. And face-slapping is normal in this story; MC does/offer something, others reject him, MC does another thing, and others be like 'Damn, shouldn't provoke/reject him'. And dialogue is rare. As for harem... Well, its like a casual fling; no serious relationship yet. And don't expect detailed romance scenes. Chinese novel don't have it. Oh, and translation quality. They're readable. And based on other reviews, translator is doing some editing. Though will not be the same quality if the original is english. Some wordings are weird, it's more likely because the original version is like that. Like, lost in translation, but make sense in the original language kind of thing

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Good story. Thanks for the work, translator. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Suroj_34

What happened new update why. want new chapter. .....===..............................................………………........……………...……………………………………….....

2mth
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Gabichu_Yeah

Excellent work by the translator, and you can really see the progressive improvement in the translations, which are of increasingly better quality.

2mth
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FiLL88

at the time of chapter 323. the translation and quality are great, but the content... since the translator cuts, merges, combines chapters, sometimes it is not clear what is happening at all, sometimes after reading a chapter you understand that you do not understand anything... in general, there is little about cinema and more about business, politics, and Mac's "weak waist")))

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GodOfReader

Thank you so much for your hard work in removing all the harmful elements from the novel. Your dedication has allowed us to enjoy the story in peace, without any worries or distractions. I truly appreciate the effort you’ve put into making this experience better for readers like me. Here’s a well-deserved 5-star rating for you!

2mth
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7rox
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Very well translated, and the update schedule is extraordinary.

2mth
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Tony_Pecoraro

He needs a girlfriend, that is the only thing I see wrong about this ff. Or atleast have some partners, it would make this ff more realistic.

2mth
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abhishek_korde

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍

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Idealist

here I am. I have found the biggest hidden gems... kinda waiting so long to find this kind of novel.

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Episode_18

i hope this another harem [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2mth
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Episode_18

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Artisan_Tales

I wanted to recommend to the translator that they translate I Am Hollywood, as, for me, it is the best webnovel with a Hollywood theme for a simple reason: it has almost none of the cheap Chinese nationalism that makes novels centered around Hollywood boring. However, I don't think it’s the best idea, as the author left it unfinished with a very rushed ending. Therefore, if the translator decides to translate it, my recommendation would be for them to continue it on their own when they reach the end. Otherwise, they would feel the same disappointment I felt when I reached the end of I Am Hollywood many years ago.

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MD_Toriqul_Islam

more more more..........................

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Slingshot

It's alright, i liked it, but there are certain places that still feels a bit meh. My advice? treat it as a comedy

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Vinod_kumar_7848

Please update more Chapters quickly please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

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MD_Toriqul_Islam

Great story, keep up the good work .....

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inkblackbull

i've been reading it nonstop and the updates also keep on coming. i can't justify myself not rating it at 5 stars.

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Billy_Agustian17

[img=Out of it][img=Cries][img=Out of it][img=Mad][img=More pls][img=Mad][img=Out of it][img=Envy][img=Speechless][img=Sigh][img=Good night][img=Loving it][img=Out of it][img=Feeling it][img=Speechless][img=Mad][img=In a daze][img=Cries][img=Relaxed][img=Envy][img=Out of it][img=Sigh][img=In your face][img=Envy][img=Out of it][img=Moneybags][img=In a daze][img=Moneybags]

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