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it's very simple to warn minato the hokage you just put on his way to home-work a small walki talkie(check first episodes of naruto they used it there). than you say MINATO! to attract his attention he comes closer there is a white letter on top of it he takes it and reads it after that a small detonation seal destroys radio and a small seal to burn the letter. radio can be on side of the road planted by protag when he goes on this way by just going to the wall and throwing it through his pants. it can look like a brick he can before that show that he likes to walk on this road so noby will suspect him. by using walki talki and attracting minato at the exact time he comes closer you will have his attention. how you hide your voice? very simple deepen your voice and talk through a metal tube with double layered cotton. the content of the letter( you use of course newspaper to not show your penmanship and always do everyhting with gloves and a headcap so no DNA. - Dear Minato Namikaze, I write this letter with great urgency and a heavy heart, knowing that the contents may seem impossible, but I implore you to read carefully and take these words seriously. What I’m about to reveal is of grave importance—not only for you but for Konoha and the future of the Shinobi world. You are a man known for your wisdom and foresight, Minato. As the Yellow Flash of the Leaf and the Fourth Hokage, you have earned the respect and admiration of countless people. You have faced unimaginable challenges and triumphed with unparalleled strength, intelligence, and resolve. You are a man who values life, love, and the safety of your village above all else. It is for these reasons that I write to you, knowing you will understand the weight of my words. There is a threat looming over you, a masked man whose intentions will bring destruction to Konoha and unparalleled pain to your life. This man is no ordinary foe; he possesses powers that rival even yours. He will come for Kushina Uzumaki on the night of Naruto’s birth. He will seek to release the Nine-Tailed Fox, the Kyūbi, from her seal and use it to destroy the village. Minato, this man is the embodiment of cunning and ruthlessness. He knows when Kushina will be most vulnerable, during the delivery of your child. He will exploit that moment. I know this sounds absurd, but please listen. The masked man is an enigma cloaked in shadow. He wields space-time ninjutsu—a technique that may even surpass your Hiraishin no Jutsu. He is a master manipulator, capable of bending others to his will. Even the Kyūbi itself will fall under his control. His methods are brutal, and his goals are shrouded in darkness. If you do not prepare, his actions will shatter your family and the peace you have worked so tirelessly to maintain. Minato, I am aware that these warnings may feel baseless without proof. Allow me to speak of things only someone close to you would know. You once stood before the Sandaime Hokage and vowed to protect Konoha as if it were your own family. You have kept that vow through countless battles. Your love for Kushina runs deeper than the strongest seals you’ve mastered, and your hope for your unborn child is to see him grow in a world free from war and hate. You still carry the kunai Kushina gave you when you perfected the Flying Raijin. These are truths I know because you are a man whose actions speak louder than any words, a man who embodies the Will of Fire. But none of this will matter if you do not act. On the night of Naruto’s birth, Kushina must be guarded with the utmost vigilance. You must prepare for an enemy unlike any you have faced before. He will come when you least expect it, shrouded in mystery and malice. Place your trust in no one outside your closest allies, for this man is capable of manipulating even the most loyal of friends. Ensure that Kushina’s seal is reinforced and that her location remains hidden from all but those you trust with your life.
Not gonna lie, I binged this book (74 chaps) in an hour, skipping most of the fluff and I don't feel like I missed anything. The powers are straightforward, the logic is sound, the characters think, but there is no spark nor suspense so to say. This isn't a bad thing per se, but prevents this book from being a true masterpiece. Still better than 99.99% of naruto fanfics so a 5 star on webnovel is more than warranted. If this were Royal Road though, it would be a 4.5 or so.
you are writing well sir, but why are you writing conclusions we have to come to conclusions yet you are describing em, Patience, keep some things as mystery don't over explain yourself although I don't know about writing novels. take my advice and read "Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan" and make your work fluent
i quite enjoyed this book. i know it's still updating on patreon but will it continue to update on webnovel?
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I just finished your game of throne fantic and it waz great you should consider doing a house of dragon one as well:)))
I wish you good corn harvests, Lord of Crows. Now that there's some time left to enjoy this novel that you've been cooking for a while, as someone who has already read 4 of your novels, I'm already giving it 5 stars in advance.
Write the one-piece fanfic already author its more trendy and has a better world building cmon corn. Please where is the ONE PIECEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's corn man what else do I have to say? However I'm dropping it cause the plot is obvious after parents die trope yawn.
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sorry for everyone that wanted a unbiased revewㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
I will not lie, I am not a fan of the “main character loses memories trope” and so in a moment of weakness, I doubted the all mighty corn. I have so far only been proven wrong. I beg for forgiveness and promise it will not happen again.
it's made by corn so it's automatically good and please just please don't make the Uchiha massacre happen
haven't started reading but I'll give 5 stars simply Because it's corn. Glad your back
It’s cornbringer’s work. Enough said. Shut up and read! It’s cornbringer’s work. Enough said. Shut up and read! It’s cornbringer’s work. Enough said. Shut up and read!
The story is good, the reading is pleasant and the MC is not op as soon as he is born, but I will only give it 3 stars because Shisui's personality is depressing and out of place. The author tries to make him similar to Gojo, he killed the character and is so unbearable to read that I had to skip all the chapters he appears in so I wouldn't stop reading this story. I can't wait for him to commit suicide soon.
Gonna wait till you either drop or finish this. But as I have read almost all of your other books I'll give this a 5 star any ways. Btw are you going to continue your marvel fanfic with gamer system?
ahhhh loved it so far, great writing quality, plot is good no probs so far
Guys come on it’s the almighty cornbringer he’s practically the goat of WebNovel if you don’t like this go checkout any of his many great fics he’s legit the goat 🐐
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. But truly the only thing to worry about with this guy is if he can finish what he started.
it's okay and too predictable, usual from this author at early chapter the story is somewhat good but quite later gone downhill. maybe it's too early, but for me beside from mc power that slightly interesting, other thing feel like cookies cutter orphan mc who have hidden power seek revenge for his family death.
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Very good so far, I never imagined a fanfic with Teresa's powers. I see a lot of potential in this story. [Recommend] [Recommend] [Recommend] [Recommend] [Recommend]
One of the best, what more I can say. Do give it a try, it is for every kind of reader, it is corn so yeah. Loving it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
a overall just really good book, i don't have anything that i could say is bad about it.
I'm very picky when it comes to Naruto fanfics but I strike gold with this one.
it's very simple to warn minato the hokage you just put on his way to home-work a small walki talkie(check first episodes of naruto they used it there). than you say MINATO! to attract his attention he comes closer there is a white letter on top of it he takes it and reads it after that a small detonation seal destroys radio and a small seal to burn the letter. radio can be on side of the road planted by protag when he goes on this way by just going to the wall and throwing it through his pants. it can look like a brick he can before that show that he likes to walk on this road so noby will suspect him. by using walki talki and attracting minato at the exact time he comes closer you will have his attention. how you hide your voice? very simple deepen your voice and talk through a metal tube with double layered cotton. the content of the letter( you use of course newspaper to not show your penmanship and always do everyhting with gloves and a headcap so no DNA. - Dear Minato Namikaze, I write this letter with great urgency and a heavy heart, knowing that the contents may seem impossible, but I implore you to read carefully and take these words seriously. What I’m about to reveal is of grave importance—not only for you but for Konoha and the future of the Shinobi world. You are a man known for your wisdom and foresight, Minato. As the Yellow Flash of the Leaf and the Fourth Hokage, you have earned the respect and admiration of countless people. You have faced unimaginable challenges and triumphed with unparalleled strength, intelligence, and resolve. You are a man who values life, love, and the safety of your village above all else. It is for these reasons that I write to you, knowing you will understand the weight of my words. There is a threat looming over you, a masked man whose intentions will bring destruction to Konoha and unparalleled pain to your life. This man is no ordinary foe; he possesses powers that rival even yours. He will come for Kushina Uzumaki on the night of Naruto’s birth. He will seek to release the Nine-Tailed Fox, the Kyūbi, from her seal and use it to destroy the village. Minato, this man is the embodiment of cunning and ruthlessness. He knows when Kushina will be most vulnerable, during the delivery of your child. He will exploit that moment. I know this sounds absurd, but please listen. The masked man is an enigma cloaked in shadow. He wields space-time ninjutsu—a technique that may even surpass your Hiraishin no Jutsu. He is a master manipulator, capable of bending others to his will. Even the Kyūbi itself will fall under his control. His methods are brutal, and his goals are shrouded in darkness. If you do not prepare, his actions will shatter your family and the peace you have worked so tirelessly to maintain. Minato, I am aware that these warnings may feel baseless without proof. Allow me to speak of things only someone close to you would know. You once stood before the Sandaime Hokage and vowed to protect Konoha as if it were your own family. You have kept that vow through countless battles. Your love for Kushina runs deeper than the strongest seals you’ve mastered, and your hope for your unborn child is to see him grow in a world free from war and hate. You still carry the kunai Kushina gave you when you perfected the Flying Raijin. These are truths I know because you are a man whose actions speak louder than any words, a man who embodies the Will of Fire. But none of this will matter if you do not act. On the night of Naruto’s birth, Kushina must be guarded with the utmost vigilance. You must prepare for an enemy unlike any you have faced before. He will come when you least expect it, shrouded in mystery and malice. Place your trust in no one outside your closest allies, for this man is capable of manipulating even the most loyal of friends. Ensure that Kushina’s seal is reinforced and that her location remains hidden from all but those you trust with your life.
Not gonna lie, I binged this book (74 chaps) in an hour, skipping most of the fluff and I don't feel like I missed anything. The powers are straightforward, the logic is sound, the characters think, but there is no spark nor suspense so to say. This isn't a bad thing per se, but prevents this book from being a true masterpiece. Still better than 99.99% of naruto fanfics so a 5 star on webnovel is more than warranted. If this were Royal Road though, it would be a 4.5 or so.
you are writing well sir, but why are you writing conclusions we have to come to conclusions yet you are describing em, Patience, keep some things as mystery don't over explain yourself although I don't know about writing novels. take my advice and read "Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan" and make your work fluent
i quite enjoyed this book. i know it's still updating on patreon but will it continue to update on webnovel?
[img=Your move][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Smitten]
I just finished your game of throne fantic and it waz great you should consider doing a house of dragon one as well:)))
I wish you good corn harvests, Lord of Crows. Now that there's some time left to enjoy this novel that you've been cooking for a while, as someone who has already read 4 of your novels, I'm already giving it 5 stars in advance.
Write the one-piece fanfic already author its more trendy and has a better world building cmon corn. Please where is the ONE PIECEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's corn man what else do I have to say? However I'm dropping it cause the plot is obvious after parents die trope yawn.
Reveal Spoiler sorry for everyone that wanted a unbiased revewㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
I will not lie, I am not a fan of the “main character loses memories trope” and so in a moment of weakness, I doubted the all mighty corn. I have so far only been proven wrong. I beg for forgiveness and promise it will not happen again.
it's made by corn so it's automatically good and please just please don't make the Uchiha massacre happen
haven't started reading but I'll give 5 stars simply Because it's corn. Glad your back
It’s cornbringer’s work. Enough said. Shut up and read! It’s cornbringer’s work. Enough said. Shut up and read! It’s cornbringer’s work. Enough said. Shut up and read!
The story is good, the reading is pleasant and the MC is not op as soon as he is born, but I will only give it 3 stars because Shisui's personality is depressing and out of place. The author tries to make him similar to Gojo, he killed the character and is so unbearable to read that I had to skip all the chapters he appears in so I wouldn't stop reading this story. I can't wait for him to commit suicide soon.
Gonna wait till you either drop or finish this. But as I have read almost all of your other books I'll give this a 5 star any ways. Btw are you going to continue your marvel fanfic with gamer system?
ahhhh loved it so far, great writing quality, plot is good no probs so far
Guys come on it’s the almighty cornbringer he’s practically the goat of WebNovel if you don’t like this go checkout any of his many great fics he’s legit the goat 🐐
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. But truly the only thing to worry about with this guy is if he can finish what he started.
it's okay and too predictable, usual from this author at early chapter the story is somewhat good but quite later gone downhill. maybe it's too early, but for me beside from mc power that slightly interesting, other thing feel like cookies cutter orphan mc who have hidden power seek revenge for his family death.
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Very good so far, I never imagined a fanfic with Teresa's powers. I see a lot of potential in this story. [Recommend] [Recommend] [Recommend] [Recommend] [Recommend]
One of the best, what more I can say. Do give it a try, it is for every kind of reader, it is corn so yeah. Loving it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
a overall just really good book, i don't have anything that i could say is bad about it.
I'm very picky when it comes to Naruto fanfics but I strike gold with this one.