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The story is confusing, with a lot happening without any explanation; it's like starting to watch a series from season 7.

This fanfic can be summed up in one thing: lazy, shoddy work. They can't even spell basic names correctly. Naming Tsunade's brother Neiji? That's ridiculous.

I was expecting a different story; the protagonist knows the future, but the story follows him preventing Hiruzen from becoming Hokage so he can basically do the same things. The only thing he actually changed was the survival of the Senju clan, but overall he's no different from Hiruzen, only the name changes.

The story isn't bad, but it has a lot of inconsistencies that can't be explained simply by it coming from a more advanced world, because he acquires knowledge, not materials. It would be more convincing if he created technological things later, after having a solid foundation. As it is, it's like, 'he found everything on the street corner to assemble an AI with knowledge from 100 years in the future of another world,' which is uninteresting. His interaction with the characters is also very poor; it's like, 'he looks at someone with a fixed gaze and says, "Will you serve me or be my enemy?"' Then the person has to deduce what he's saying or what he wants. Basically, he's a leader without charisma, and the secondary characters appear once and then aren't mentioned again; there aren't even any comments about them. They're like disposable water glasses, except you only drink water from glass cups. But the idea is good; it's just the development that kills the story.

Tá aí uma fanfic que não vale a pena ler, mesmo que o MC reencarne na época de Kaguya ainda seria inútil, o que ele vai fazer? Cultivar por 10mil anos? Quando ele termina já acabou toda a história e seria uma totalmente nova talvez até sem ninja.

Just because someone has a negative opinion doesn't mean they're stressed. And in case you haven't noticed from my previous comment, I didn't like the story. It doesn't matter if Senju exist or not; there aren't any with the surname Senju. A Senju with Sharingan might exist, but their surname would be Uchiha the moment they awaken it. The existence of Senju without surnames doesn't change the rest of the garbage backstory of this fanfic.

But what about the romance? Reading a story without romance sucks.

Well, although it's a good story, there are flaws — and the worst one is the lack of determination in the main character. He feels like one of those protagonists who say 'women only get in the way of my training.' There are moments where being uninterested is fine, but he's like that all the time. It's as if his goal was 'I saved the world, now you guys go live your lives.' The part that made me stop reading was after chapter 200, when Cecilia asks about his intentions regarding their daughter and he freezes in fear. At first it's okay, there's a bit of comedy, but then three chapters go by and he keeps dodging the question like he doesn't care. Judging by how the story is going, he probably won't end up with anyone. There's no point in getting your hopes up about the next girl who's going to recover her memory — she'll just be another one he ignores and runs away from.