Damn, I Have to Marry the Strongest Antagonist at the Start?

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Sesame_Cookies

Hi Author here, Sorry for being late, 5 stars because I want this review can be seen, The Images of characters will be shown below this review, and I'm working on them. U can ask me anything you want below this review! Besides, as for the SCHOOL TRANSMIGRATION, I cut it off because I suddenly realized I didn't pay much attention to the outline, SO as for this one, I do a lot effort in the outline, U can see this is another adventure of Owen, And hope U love this one TOO~

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BloodPunisher

Writing quality is good but chatacters are 1-dimensional and world is unfurled as the mc progresses. Good for new readers or for time pass.... Too cliche for old daoists.......

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Louis_Zimmer

so its a good novel really good nice devlopment He IS a littel bit too arrogant For my taste and maybe He could schem a littel bit more and my bigest No IS the Harem Tag i am very sad about that i hope IT goes away in the Future 😁👍 sry For gramatic and yeah but all in all its a all its a good read

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Abid_Azzaky

this novel is good the only downside is the powerscaling is very bad

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novelmeister

An interesting concept for a novel. The writing style keeps you entertained, craving for more. I recommend you read this.

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Lucky0_0

ntr ? yuri? I hope not. .. ..... . ..

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undesignated

It's good but it definitely could have been better. The MC seems to keep making dumb decisions whether it is stuff like forgetting to use a particular power or wasting fate points. though the main problem Is the plot inconsistencies, specifically the power scaling. At the point of the story where I am at, The MC is going toe to toe with early platinum level beast/prodigies yet just the killing intent of an inexperienced gold level character (which is a stage below platinum giving an immense gap) he( the mc) froze up, seemingly clouding his decision making 😮‍💨. Anyway there are plenty more chapters so maybe the author had fixed the problem but sadly I can't continue. Thank you and it was kinda entertaining.

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Prithwy_rai

Overall worth trying but my biggest concern is the "HAREM" tag. Nvm please make mc fall for overpowering villainess only.....no fling or such ....both are so equally matched.

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BalsamicThunThighs

This has been bugging me more than it should have and I am sure I'm not the only one. Author if you don't look at comments, then I hope you take this one to heart and improve. Chapter 22 He's at 1850 Fate Points. He gains 4000 Points once he acquires the Queen Egg. 5850 Faint Points Total. Here's the weird part. He buys Order of Fire that is 600 FP Thats now 5250 FP. He then buys the Order of Fire Usage, Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell. He now has 1850 Faint Points left (says the chapter.) How is that possible? To give you an idea. Order of Thunder Usage is 2000 FPoints (Chapter 20 tells you so) Order Fusion Spell is 2000 FP (Chapter 19) We don't know how much Order of Fire Usage is but it's likely 2000 FP as well. Also when looking at the Status Screen it says he has the Order of Thunder Usage and Order Fusion Spell on Chapter 20. This is wrong. He only had 1900 FP during that Chapter and definitely didn't have FP over 1900 beforehand. I want to state This Isn't A Review on the novel. This is just me telling the author if you don't want people to drop your novel get the math right. Or better yet don't add in numbers if you keep getting it wrong. I do like your work don't get me wrong. It's just when you have minor errors like this, it adds up. I'll give a real review once I hit Chapter 100.

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o_Infinite_o

Review after 125 chapter This story overall a good read. Story had really good start.. i was expecting a good quality mc and a stable story progress .. but after few chapter it was literally ruined.. There should be a limit how much plot armour help a MC.. MC makes too many dumb decisions, not cautious, troublemaker.. because of plot armour he is surviving which is annoying to watch everytime.. similar to those chinese young master's stories.. also power scaling at this point feels like meaningless... ;')

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Ray_Bonavente_2245

one of the best novel so far that i read.

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Riabe

Interesting story... Love to read it... 👍

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SYED_AFAQ

author do you have discord ............

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NewandMoe

The plot is great and very interesting, but I feel that the setting for the leveling speed needs to be refined a bit more. Overall, author please doesn't drop this！！！

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Red_Skin_Duck

Overall a good read, and the story has a tight pace, but the powerscaling need to be refined a bit more. I'm also curious if the male and female protagonists will go their separate ways to level up. When will they be able to get married officially?

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DaoistD1ToKX

Dear Author thanks for this good novel . A little bit too overpowered Mc from the start, the first fight was really unrealistic. A well known prodigy who trains from ages and again some loser from an other world who effortlessly win against the hardworking genius. Really hard to digest it. Despite of that I like the novel. Good writing quality and characters. We need Madeline and the princess too in the harem. Keep up the good work. Thanks

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Gojou_Satoru_8212

author why have u stopped writing school transmigration

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Cancer_Reo

good pace bro... ..................................................................................................................................