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If he's going to start from scratch, why did we read so many chapters? I could understand if he did it in the middle of the story, maybe the main character would have gotten a little stronger by then but what's the point of starting over when the character is at their weakest it's like he didn't like the starting city and imposed 10-20 chapters on us so he could rewrite it
The novel is relatively good and deserves more attention. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Chapters one through about eighty were amazing. I was really enjoying the story's novel ideas. Lots of fun. However, after about chapter one hundred, it fell way off, and I didn't even bother finishing it.
worth a read.........................................................................................................................................................................................
The story has a nice pacing and it's interesting to read. I like the concept of the story a lot and the world building is pretty solid. Good Work!
I'm going to give it a five star rating because the overall story development is good, and it has nice pacing with an intriguing concept.
Nice work author i wasn't expecting the story to develop so smoothly, you got me hooked.
giving five stars because of only one reason the authors update regularly... I am tired of getting one chapter a day.. i want more
Very unique premise and interesting MC. The author uses a generic murim world and inserts his own new idea into it, making it an interesting novel which is very enjoyable. I felt my expectations were exceeded several times and the story did not bore me. It is written well and I am curious to see how it will continue from here
The concept is a bit new and intriguing. The story is decent and the character development is pretty good. It was a good read, waiting for more chapters!!
New reader here. The concept is good and overall story flow is decent. The only thing I'd say is work on those chapter titles mate XD. I like that it doesn't take itself to seriously though too many edgy stories out there (Including mine haha). I definitely see potential though good going. Hope it does well!
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
If he's going to start from scratch, why did we read so many chapters? I could understand if he did it in the middle of the story, maybe the main character would have gotten a little stronger by then but what's the point of starting over when the character is at their weakest it's like he didn't like the starting city and imposed 10-20 chapters on us so he could rewrite it
The novel is relatively good and deserves more attention. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Harem?.............................................. ..........................................................................................
Chapters one through about eighty were amazing. I was really enjoying the story's novel ideas. Lots of fun. However, after about chapter one hundred, it fell way off, and I didn't even bother finishing it.
worth a read.........................................................................................................................................................................................
The story has a nice pacing and it's interesting to read. I like the concept of the story a lot and the world building is pretty solid. Good Work!
I'm going to give it a five star rating because the overall story development is good, and it has nice pacing with an intriguing concept.
Nice work author i wasn't expecting the story to develop so smoothly, you got me hooked.
giving five stars because of only one reason the authors update regularly... I am tired of getting one chapter a day.. i want more
Very unique premise and interesting MC. The author uses a generic murim world and inserts his own new idea into it, making it an interesting novel which is very enjoyable. I felt my expectations were exceeded several times and the story did not bore me. It is written well and I am curious to see how it will continue from here
The concept is a bit new and intriguing. The story is decent and the character development is pretty good. It was a good read, waiting for more chapters!!
New reader here. The concept is good and overall story flow is decent. The only thing I'd say is work on those chapter titles mate XD. I like that it doesn't take itself to seriously though too many edgy stories out there (Including mine haha). I definitely see potential though good going. Hope it does well!
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
Why did they stop uploading chapters??? They don't plan on canceling it, do they?