The story is in first POV and is quite intriguing. The characters are well-written and world development is very good. Amazing Job Author!! Keep it coming.
Athena is the female lead
Author here, Feel free to ask questions regarding the novel. Thanks for reading!!
No harem. Only Athena will be his waifu 😊
idk protagonist syndrome maybe
"Now!" I yelled as I stamped on the ground, producing a cloud of dust.
Fantasy · SunScar
I dont plan on making it harem. Its a single FML novel.
You know what, It was kinda dumb of me to include phones. I will change them into something more fantasy like a communication orb. Thanks
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Fantasy · SunScar
It meant the explosion sent his body crashing on the floor. flew was just a fancy word to describe it.
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Fantasy · SunScar
This is my first writing a novel so it will be interesting...
Deceit Chronicles
Fantasy · SunScar