The Fifth Hokage Is Naruto's Uncle

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Dienekes

Hey Guys! If you notice any grammatical errors or potential plot holes, be sure to let me know so i can refine my story. If you have any specific concerns or areas you'd like me to focus on, feel free to mention them as well.

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toonami_kurohime

THE AUTHOR DOES NOT QUIT THIS NOVEL IS FUN. AUTHOR FOR YOUR SECOND NOVEL PLOT THE PRINCESS TSUNADE OR HINATA SUMMON SESSHOMARU INUYASHA BROTHER with all his power of god dog more powerful that Kurama and Madara HERE THE TWIST THE SOUL INSIDE SESSHOMARU IS AN ANIME FAN MODERN EARTH..CMON AUTHOR THEIR NOT MANY INUYASHA NOVEL IN HERE..I HOPE THIS HELP YOU WITH LOVE ..THANK YOU FOR THIS NOVEL AUTHOR.

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Xiphos_Gladius_03

Nice start to the story! I still don't fully understand his abilities, as it wasn't exactly clear on how he used them, but other than that, it good.

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NIRO4

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79_amar

more more '''''''' good story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Passerby_Venne

This is a great story so far (13 chapters.)

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Ragnaz_Kelot

Interesting storyline with good potential [img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Osrok

Good story enjoyed it so far .

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_oinkchan

It's nice. Need more chapters. I like it. Approved by the Lord.

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Swikong

So far, it's engaging & interesting. Keep up the 👍 work & give it's deserving grand completion.

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Gamer_Tricker

good story thanks for the chapter that's a totally new path the ninja way all the best

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Nis74

Is this a translation, I'm pretty sure that I read this somewhere, the name and abilities of the characters are the same as that one so correct me if I'm wrong.

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Kay_smiles101

Pretty good first chapter. Can't wait for more chapters

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CoaldPlay

I think you should continue. It's progressing very nicely: you already have major plot points to continue towards: upcoming struggle with Kumo, being Hokage, then maybe a time-skip for the beginning of the Uchiha Massacre plot, then time skip to canon, their arcs. It's interesting how would he deal with Suna-Konoha economic tension, with him being the one who dealt with them in the previous ninja war. What's his outlook on them? How would he deal with Gato? How would he deal with Fourth Raikage. Also, I've noticed that you post almost every day. That's a very high tempo, even considering how short some of the chapters are. If you want to contact me personally, write to me on discord: coaldplay/CoaldPlay#4570

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Paradoxical_smile

Really a great fan fic, fun to read, no grammar mistakes. actually no mistake to point out. Very interesting story. hopefully autuor will will continue it for a long long time 😁

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DaoistFiZTje

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love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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CoaldPlay

This is what I like. This is what I want to read. This is what I want Naruto's fanfics to be. Refreshing originality combined with knowledge of the source material, a new adventure in established world, from the point of view of an interesting character.

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Shinoa_69

great story inspired but original plot !!

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omaidameeri

When are you going to update it. i love this novel already so please update it [img=coins][img=In your face][img=proud] safadfnheajksfnaih vea