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Write a reviewHonestly, I’m sad I got to chapter 541 and read the note and the end of the chapter saying that it would be ending soon. I um 😕 to put it sad because I thought this book could go on you know into a higher plain/universe later on after the current stage but my hopes got throwed out the door. Really really good book to read well worth buying chapters to read it. It’s just now that I only have 30chapters left I don’t wanna finish it since I know it’s completed and won’t be continued. The main male lead and female lead are awesome characters and after 500 chapters you kinda don’t wanna stop reading about their journey you know. Welp good book author you did an amazing job. 👍
started out good, but quite fast system is almost dropped out of existence, plot speeds up, but looses the point, and author seems to have pee fetish.
Beginning was fine but farther it going the more ridiculous it is and most with the clickbait names and bad translation.
This would have been a higher rating but in the layer chapters the author keeps changing She to He and vice-versa. So it's hard to tell who they are referring to at times. Also, at least 7 to 10 chapters keep repeating the same lines over and over. It appears to be notes of some kind and/or telling the story out of order. Providing unintentional spoilers. This really needs to be cleaned up.
Muy lento es desarrollo de la historia leí hasta el capítulo 234, además algunos escenas son muy infantiles, le falta accion como peleas las mayoría de sus peleas son patadas a la cara con una cara hinchada de una chica o la mano rota de un chico
Reveal Spoilerliked it very much at first. It's power system was soo interesting and I don't mind romance that much.but as the story goes it focuses on mc's childhood childhood friend so much it feels boring and mc,beside from physical training doesn't use his other powers that much that it feels like a waste of potential. I hoped that it would get better and I read 100+ chapters but longer i read more the disappointment 😞 .still because of the power system I read 200 chapters and this novel became the worst novel I've ever read.
the first chapters are uncomfortable to read due to the constant pedophilic comment written in them. world building is cool, but the way the MC comments about kids is disgusting and suggestive. I like evolution novels but I'ma have to pass on this one.
Adventurous as it is, this novel sucks later not with it's world building and story development nor the translation quality is bad. But there is just so many unnecessary notes or synopsis or fillers at the end of every chapters later on that is get annoying mid-way to your reading.
Hi! I'm a big fan of fast-food-type novels—by that, I mean novels that aren't super high quality but are quick and fun to read. That said, with this one, the fun isn’t quick or even good. The world exists solely for the protagonist, with 30 chapters of slow progression and poorly written storylines. If the first 10 episodes bore you, just know that's the structure of the entire book—at least up to chapter 30. A truly low-quality book.
The best way to describe this novel is bland. It started off interesting, but once the main character reaches the college arc (around chapters 100-200+), it turns into a typical young master face-slapping story. The MC is low-key for no apparent reason, despite not being particularly strong or even portrayed as OP. He just comes across as a frog in a well. The pacing is painfully slow. The first major plot point that was foreshadowed still hasn’t happened after 200 chapters—nothing significant happens in those first 200 chapters. Instead, we're stuck in a dull, generic school setting. There's also a ton of filler with random side characters endlessly yapping back and forth. Overall, the novel had potential, but the author leans too heavily on generic tropes to move the "plot" along. I kept reading, hoping it would get more interesting, but it’s so predictable that I can skip entire sections of dialogue and still understand what’s going on.
missing romance tag, 50 % of the book is romance, book cover shows a guy with two blades in wilderness, tags speak about adventure and action, its all misleading, 50% of novel is romance.
Translation is decent with a few errors that you can understand and gloss over. Sadly, I've read 90 chapters in, and all fights are one shots. No depth to combat, it's either instantly settled or "after fighting for 3 minutes, ____ won" Chapters are repetitive for word count. A punch is thrown, then six people gasp and react to the punch verbally, and half the chapter is gone. Author writes probably 15 chapters worth of words about female lead urinating on herself. Eventually there's rhyme and reason to it..but drug out too long. IMO not worth a read, pass.
started great, normal peonoun misteps , but once you hit ch 300+ it get rough to read, a strange "forshadow" that is just summarized mid next chapter with almost no transition into it making it easy to get confused. there are chapters and series of chapters that had the same set of paragraphs almost 5 times word for word. I suggest reading till ch 300 then dropping , sadly I won't be continuing myself anymore.
Started out somewhat ok that it got me curious on how this will develop. Before chapter 40, it is clear that this will be a very slow pace story. Honestly, I can't say much about this there than mostly areas where the author of this book or translator needs to work on, such as: - Proof read work before posting chapters - The interchange of gender is so annoying. - Reduces repetitions - I'm not sure, but I think before or past chp 100, the word count became terrible. The story itself have nice background and power system. But the way it is written, or rather, the translation, makes it annoying to read. It leads to confusion sometimes. The author also seems the have some weird thoughts. At least if you want to write lewd stuff, put a tag. I don't know if I missed that or not, but it makes it so unpleasant to keep reading this book.
I have read around 425 chapters. the story is good, steady progression. the reason I stopped reading is that the translation is terrible, especially in the layer chapters. it gets very confusing due to whole paragraphs repeated with slightly different wording and paragraphs seemingly out of order.
After a while, it stops being coherent. A lot of chapters are repetitions of the previous chapters or are just the author’s notes and outlines of the remaining plot. Also, the author has a pee fetish and it’s obnoxiously apparent. Overall, I regret spending coins to batch unlock this novel and am dropping it.
Started on great and really fun to read. But lately the chapters keep ending with content from future chapters as if those events are happening in the current chapter . But then repeats its self in later chapters that jump back to half through the story of previous chapters. Dropped it because it’s getting too hard to follow the story anymore
I was really looking forward to kind of enjoying wanting to low-key protagonist type stories but I had to stop reading it because for some reason this offer is incredibly focused on describing a 7-year-old girl sexually. That's not even including the fact that the offer clearly has a p*ss fetish and has decided to inflict all of us with it after I found out that the girl even at 18 is still just randomly peeing on people even when making out with her boyfriend I had to stop cuz it's distracting especially when it's so blatantly obvious that it's not has anything to do with the plot it's just a fetish so if you had told me that maybe this has something to do with some power she was going to come into in the future that would be tolerable But like this absolutely not.
Reveal SpoilerI have no clue why this is #3 under Bestseller. It's trash. Read up to 110+ and the MC is unoriginal and uninspired. What a let down. My only regret are the coins I spent on this garbage.
I read up to chapter 300 out of 330 and I'll stop there for the rest of the story. During the fights, it's either the main character is stronger and kills in one blow, or the enemy is too strong and he has to be rescued by an outsider. At no point did I see any real fighting.
author is a pedophile for sure. mc constable is grooming people and there is just so kuch unnecessary descriptions of 9year Olds and younger
Exactly 100 chapters deep and nearly every single one mentioned diapers and/or bed wetting. The writing and world background are solid. This book is perfect if you have a pee fetish and care more about grooming than cultivation.
Until Chapter 100 it was a very nice read but afterwards the Author began to split the Chapters in multiple parts and make them shorter with almost no process in between, just to milk more money from his viewers. After reading until Chapter 150 I chose to drop it because it just isn't worth reading anymore, very sad.
it's a good story, if you take into account most of the aspects, but be prepared for typical weird nonsense of chinese stories. The MC's childhood friend, even up until she is 18 years old, frequently pees herself and needs to wear a diaper. this wouldn't be much of an issue to me if the author didn't bring it up constantly. there was even like, 3 consecutive chapters talking about how she and the MC were making out and it excited her, so she kept peeing on him the whole time. so yeah, be aware.
This story is very good, except for the author's fetish for pee............................................................................................
the beginning was okay, but towards the mid-late chapters, the author keeps repeating the same content to hit the word count + spoilers from the author personally.
Honestly, I’m sad I got to chapter 541 and read the note and the end of the chapter saying that it would be ending soon. I um 😕 to put it sad because I thought this book could go on you know into a higher plain/universe later on after the current stage but my hopes got throwed out the door. Really really good book to read well worth buying chapters to read it. It’s just now that I only have 30chapters left I don’t wanna finish it since I know it’s completed and won’t be continued. The main male lead and female lead are awesome characters and after 500 chapters you kinda don’t wanna stop reading about their journey you know. Welp good book author you did an amazing job. 👍
started out good, but quite fast system is almost dropped out of existence, plot speeds up, but looses the point, and author seems to have pee fetish.
Beginning was fine but farther it going the more ridiculous it is and most with the clickbait names and bad translation.
This would have been a higher rating but in the layer chapters the author keeps changing She to He and vice-versa. So it's hard to tell who they are referring to at times. Also, at least 7 to 10 chapters keep repeating the same lines over and over. It appears to be notes of some kind and/or telling the story out of order. Providing unintentional spoilers. This really needs to be cleaned up.
Muy lento es desarrollo de la historia leí hasta el capítulo 234, además algunos escenas son muy infantiles, le falta accion como peleas las mayoría de sus peleas son patadas a la cara con una cara hinchada de una chica o la mano rota de un chico
Reveal Spoilerliked it very much at first. It's power system was soo interesting and I don't mind romance that much.but as the story goes it focuses on mc's childhood childhood friend so much it feels boring and mc,beside from physical training doesn't use his other powers that much that it feels like a waste of potential. I hoped that it would get better and I read 100+ chapters but longer i read more the disappointment 😞 .still because of the power system I read 200 chapters and this novel became the worst novel I've ever read.
the first chapters are uncomfortable to read due to the constant pedophilic comment written in them. world building is cool, but the way the MC comments about kids is disgusting and suggestive. I like evolution novels but I'ma have to pass on this one.
Adventurous as it is, this novel sucks later not with it's world building and story development nor the translation quality is bad. But there is just so many unnecessary notes or synopsis or fillers at the end of every chapters later on that is get annoying mid-way to your reading.
Hi! I'm a big fan of fast-food-type novels—by that, I mean novels that aren't super high quality but are quick and fun to read. That said, with this one, the fun isn’t quick or even good. The world exists solely for the protagonist, with 30 chapters of slow progression and poorly written storylines. If the first 10 episodes bore you, just know that's the structure of the entire book—at least up to chapter 30. A truly low-quality book.
The best way to describe this novel is bland. It started off interesting, but once the main character reaches the college arc (around chapters 100-200+), it turns into a typical young master face-slapping story. The MC is low-key for no apparent reason, despite not being particularly strong or even portrayed as OP. He just comes across as a frog in a well. The pacing is painfully slow. The first major plot point that was foreshadowed still hasn’t happened after 200 chapters—nothing significant happens in those first 200 chapters. Instead, we're stuck in a dull, generic school setting. There's also a ton of filler with random side characters endlessly yapping back and forth. Overall, the novel had potential, but the author leans too heavily on generic tropes to move the "plot" along. I kept reading, hoping it would get more interesting, but it’s so predictable that I can skip entire sections of dialogue and still understand what’s going on.
missing romance tag, 50 % of the book is romance, book cover shows a guy with two blades in wilderness, tags speak about adventure and action, its all misleading, 50% of novel is romance.
Translation is decent with a few errors that you can understand and gloss over. Sadly, I've read 90 chapters in, and all fights are one shots. No depth to combat, it's either instantly settled or "after fighting for 3 minutes, ____ won" Chapters are repetitive for word count. A punch is thrown, then six people gasp and react to the punch verbally, and half the chapter is gone. Author writes probably 15 chapters worth of words about female lead urinating on herself. Eventually there's rhyme and reason to it..but drug out too long. IMO not worth a read, pass.
started great, normal peonoun misteps , but once you hit ch 300+ it get rough to read, a strange "forshadow" that is just summarized mid next chapter with almost no transition into it making it easy to get confused. there are chapters and series of chapters that had the same set of paragraphs almost 5 times word for word. I suggest reading till ch 300 then dropping , sadly I won't be continuing myself anymore.
Started out somewhat ok that it got me curious on how this will develop. Before chapter 40, it is clear that this will be a very slow pace story. Honestly, I can't say much about this there than mostly areas where the author of this book or translator needs to work on, such as: - Proof read work before posting chapters - The interchange of gender is so annoying. - Reduces repetitions - I'm not sure, but I think before or past chp 100, the word count became terrible. The story itself have nice background and power system. But the way it is written, or rather, the translation, makes it annoying to read. It leads to confusion sometimes. The author also seems the have some weird thoughts. At least if you want to write lewd stuff, put a tag. I don't know if I missed that or not, but it makes it so unpleasant to keep reading this book.
I have read around 425 chapters. the story is good, steady progression. the reason I stopped reading is that the translation is terrible, especially in the layer chapters. it gets very confusing due to whole paragraphs repeated with slightly different wording and paragraphs seemingly out of order.
After a while, it stops being coherent. A lot of chapters are repetitions of the previous chapters or are just the author’s notes and outlines of the remaining plot. Also, the author has a pee fetish and it’s obnoxiously apparent. Overall, I regret spending coins to batch unlock this novel and am dropping it.
Started on great and really fun to read. But lately the chapters keep ending with content from future chapters as if those events are happening in the current chapter . But then repeats its self in later chapters that jump back to half through the story of previous chapters. Dropped it because it’s getting too hard to follow the story anymore
I was really looking forward to kind of enjoying wanting to low-key protagonist type stories but I had to stop reading it because for some reason this offer is incredibly focused on describing a 7-year-old girl sexually. That's not even including the fact that the offer clearly has a p*ss fetish and has decided to inflict all of us with it after I found out that the girl even at 18 is still just randomly peeing on people even when making out with her boyfriend I had to stop cuz it's distracting especially when it's so blatantly obvious that it's not has anything to do with the plot it's just a fetish so if you had told me that maybe this has something to do with some power she was going to come into in the future that would be tolerable But like this absolutely not.
Reveal SpoilerI have no clue why this is #3 under Bestseller. It's trash. Read up to 110+ and the MC is unoriginal and uninspired. What a let down. My only regret are the coins I spent on this garbage.
I read up to chapter 300 out of 330 and I'll stop there for the rest of the story. During the fights, it's either the main character is stronger and kills in one blow, or the enemy is too strong and he has to be rescued by an outsider. At no point did I see any real fighting.
author is a pedophile for sure. mc constable is grooming people and there is just so kuch unnecessary descriptions of 9year Olds and younger
Exactly 100 chapters deep and nearly every single one mentioned diapers and/or bed wetting. The writing and world background are solid. This book is perfect if you have a pee fetish and care more about grooming than cultivation.
Until Chapter 100 it was a very nice read but afterwards the Author began to split the Chapters in multiple parts and make them shorter with almost no process in between, just to milk more money from his viewers. After reading until Chapter 150 I chose to drop it because it just isn't worth reading anymore, very sad.
it's a good story, if you take into account most of the aspects, but be prepared for typical weird nonsense of chinese stories. The MC's childhood friend, even up until she is 18 years old, frequently pees herself and needs to wear a diaper. this wouldn't be much of an issue to me if the author didn't bring it up constantly. there was even like, 3 consecutive chapters talking about how she and the MC were making out and it excited her, so she kept peeing on him the whole time. so yeah, be aware.
This story is very good, except for the author's fetish for pee............................................................................................
the beginning was okay, but towards the mid-late chapters, the author keeps repeating the same content to hit the word count + spoilers from the author personally.