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It's moving waaaaay too slow and feels like chat gpt. Is there anything more to say? I think not
this is one of most interesting and entertain story of Twilight I have read I look forward to the end of the story
not going to continue reading if you update it. I feel like it's moving slow and by the time it reaches the events of twilight I wouldn't need all of the information from before. think that everything before could of been a quick summary in one or two chapters instead
Why does it say 'abandoned by family' if he didn't have any family members left? It's misleading and makes it seem like an AI made a mistake in the synopsis. The whole novel feels like an AI wrote it without understanding the context. It just doesn't feel authentic or genuine, like a real book written by a human."
loved it. I can't wait to read more quite different to most twilight fanfic
Absolutely breathtaking! I hope the author comes out with chapters more often, but especially doesn't drop it. The backdrop is fresh, and how they wrote the book was excellent too (the first chapter was🥳).
When I read this, I almost fell asleep. It's slow, and I can tell it's written by AI.
It's moving waaaaay too slow and feels like chat gpt. Is there anything more to say? I think not
this is one of most interesting and entertain story of Twilight I have read I look forward to the end of the story
not going to continue reading if you update it. I feel like it's moving slow and by the time it reaches the events of twilight I wouldn't need all of the information from before. think that everything before could of been a quick summary in one or two chapters instead
Why does it say 'abandoned by family' if he didn't have any family members left? It's misleading and makes it seem like an AI made a mistake in the synopsis. The whole novel feels like an AI wrote it without understanding the context. It just doesn't feel authentic or genuine, like a real book written by a human."
loved it. I can't wait to read more quite different to most twilight fanfic
Absolutely breathtaking! I hope the author comes out with chapters more often, but especially doesn't drop it. The backdrop is fresh, and how they wrote the book was excellent too (the first chapter was🥳).
When I read this, I almost fell asleep. It's slow, and I can tell it's written by AI.