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I am saying this from my own opinion. I will not disagree with my opinion nor I will reject anyone else's. 1. I think you are moving too fast in the story. You are leaving out how MC was in previous life, how he get his mentally and all. You are skipping the part where it will make him seem intelligent like choosing the peaks and such. Right now he seems like a single-minded per with only the plan to take advantage of the plot. You should improve that. 2. You are not properly explaining his peaks. How they work or their limitations. Work on that, don't make him too strong at the start. He has insane potential, yes, but you don't expect him to become strong just by training do you? 3. You should write about his day-to-day life. It makes us feel and understand more about MC. Simple things like, locking his door, giving a cat food or giving beggers some money and such. 4. Lastly, as there is going to be only one love interest, don't mention much about other girls. Of course, aside from the plot. If you mention more girls then it will give us expectation. That's all I have to say. Thanks for your fanfic. It's good overall. Note: Don't forget Lookisim is not just a single manhwa. It has many more too.
This fanfiction takes a fresh twist on the "Lookism" universe by dropping a hilarious and confident guy into the role of Daniel Park. Unlike the original protagonist, this version isn’t afraid to throw hands and take charge. The humor throughout makes for a fun read, and it’s clear that the MC is here to enjoy life while shaking things up. The romantic subplot with Mary adds a sweet layer to the story. Their chemistry is playful and relatable, making you root for them even as chaos unfolds. I can’t wait to see how he navigates the challenges and changes the plot while keeping that lighthearted spirit. Overall, it's a great blend of action and comedy that keeps you hooked ps : my first language is not english so i had help from ai but all that is real its great fan fic and i am hooked can't wait for more
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Amazing 🤩 it made stay awake till this time ( 6:19 am) great job author 🦾 I feel the hood energy in you broski ✊🏽
It’s a shame to see another lookism fan fic end like this again. This one was probably my favorite so far. I hope he decides to make a comeback soon.
The fanfic is very good, you should read it, the character design, everything, the update is very good, it is published almost daily, so it is perfect, read it, it is very good.
Fanfic muito boa é bem diferente das outras que eu já lí, onde o autor deixa o segundo corpo do daniel mais fraco do que realmente é para dar mais destaque para os outros personagens como Gun, Choo, etc.
Hello everyone from Russia (I live in Siberia), as for me the best story on lukism!!!! Finally, no harems, systems and fanfiction about strong male friendship!!! But one thing upsets me is the size of the chapters and their updating :(.Keep up the good work!!!!
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This fanfiction is very mediocre. It's extremely edgy and cringe all around. The constant laughing from the protagonist is unnecessary and contributes to this childish and amateurish feeling when reading this. The flow of the story is unnatural and forced when the protagonist converses with the side cast. A great example is when the main character invites Zack for training. It's going too fast for anyone to truly savor the barebones of any good qualities of this work. An instance of this is when the main character becomes strong enough with the fat body to rival and outdo the likes of Zack. I get that with the aid of the boons, Fat Daniel will get stronger quickly. The speed of growth is still too much, and it broke the immersion for me. Don't get me started on the grammar.
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Good lookism fanfic ... need more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
That's The best FF for lookism 🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿
Gostei bastante, as ações não são muito demoradas mas sinto que está indo um pouco rápido demais, eu apreciaria se o autor pudesse explicar um pouco mais dos personagens que ele cita ou estão juntos do mc, já que existem algumas pessoas assim como eu que não assistiram o anime e nem leram a obra, no momento acho que a escrita está muito boa e gostei bastante da personalidade do mc, ele não é muito (Durão) demais nem um mc (Beta) e bem razoável, seria interessante inserir um romance talvez não agora mas seria bom, nota 10/10 no momento.
Top autor cachorro deveria ter harém de três garotas 🫵 ou só duas seria bom prefiro o segundo corpo e o primeiro trabalha tipo isso já que são idênticos né mesmo o prime e magro e baixo o segundo e musculoso e auto tôp .. , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
The only thing that is wrong with this fanfic is that sometimes there's Incorrect with the words and Grammer. Sometimes there's uncaptitalized "I"s, wrong spelling but other than that it's true to it's synopsis, This ain't no coward Daniel but someone whose stronged will. Though it needs work at it's prolonged but other than that it's a solid 8/10 in terms of Lookism FF.
Good start and this story has a lot of potential and I look forward to more updates constantly the mc is great strong character and is not intimidated.
it s a nice story but its not popler so pls read it and give it a chans (i know my gramer is horbole) well i dont think anybudy well see these review
Great one liking it till now pls make More chapters. currently little Daniel personality is like
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it good till now. but want more of big Danny interaction. just end the lookism fanfic curse
another lookism fanfic to fill the void in my chest (make him interact with other lookism verse manhwa like viral hit and manager kim please)
I am saying this from my own opinion. I will not disagree with my opinion nor I will reject anyone else's. 1. I think you are moving too fast in the story. You are leaving out how MC was in previous life, how he get his mentally and all. You are skipping the part where it will make him seem intelligent like choosing the peaks and such. Right now he seems like a single-minded per with only the plan to take advantage of the plot. You should improve that. 2. You are not properly explaining his peaks. How they work or their limitations. Work on that, don't make him too strong at the start. He has insane potential, yes, but you don't expect him to become strong just by training do you? 3. You should write about his day-to-day life. It makes us feel and understand more about MC. Simple things like, locking his door, giving a cat food or giving beggers some money and such. 4. Lastly, as there is going to be only one love interest, don't mention much about other girls. Of course, aside from the plot. If you mention more girls then it will give us expectation. That's all I have to say. Thanks for your fanfic. It's good overall. Note: Don't forget Lookisim is not just a single manhwa. It has many more too.
This fanfiction takes a fresh twist on the "Lookism" universe by dropping a hilarious and confident guy into the role of Daniel Park. Unlike the original protagonist, this version isn’t afraid to throw hands and take charge. The humor throughout makes for a fun read, and it’s clear that the MC is here to enjoy life while shaking things up. The romantic subplot with Mary adds a sweet layer to the story. Their chemistry is playful and relatable, making you root for them even as chaos unfolds. I can’t wait to see how he navigates the challenges and changes the plot while keeping that lighthearted spirit. Overall, it's a great blend of action and comedy that keeps you hooked ps : my first language is not english so i had help from ai but all that is real its great fan fic and i am hooked can't wait for more
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Amazing 🤩 it made stay awake till this time ( 6:19 am) great job author 🦾 I feel the hood energy in you broski ✊🏽
It’s a shame to see another lookism fan fic end like this again. This one was probably my favorite so far. I hope he decides to make a comeback soon.
The fanfic is very good, you should read it, the character design, everything, the update is very good, it is published almost daily, so it is perfect, read it, it is very good.
Fanfic muito boa é bem diferente das outras que eu já lí, onde o autor deixa o segundo corpo do daniel mais fraco do que realmente é para dar mais destaque para os outros personagens como Gun, Choo, etc.
Hello everyone from Russia (I live in Siberia), as for me the best story on lukism!!!! Finally, no harems, systems and fanfiction about strong male friendship!!! But one thing upsets me is the size of the chapters and their updating :(.Keep up the good work!!!!
Mantapppp0pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp0ppppppppppppppppllpp0pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp0p gabut awkaiakakaqkakakaok
This fanfiction is very mediocre. It's extremely edgy and cringe all around. The constant laughing from the protagonist is unnecessary and contributes to this childish and amateurish feeling when reading this. The flow of the story is unnatural and forced when the protagonist converses with the side cast. A great example is when the main character invites Zack for training. It's going too fast for anyone to truly savor the barebones of any good qualities of this work. An instance of this is when the main character becomes strong enough with the fat body to rival and outdo the likes of Zack. I get that with the aid of the boons, Fat Daniel will get stronger quickly. The speed of growth is still too much, and it broke the immersion for me. Don't get me started on the grammar.
Reveal Spoiler Good lookism fanfic ... need more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
That's The best FF for lookism 🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿
Gostei bastante, as ações não são muito demoradas mas sinto que está indo um pouco rápido demais, eu apreciaria se o autor pudesse explicar um pouco mais dos personagens que ele cita ou estão juntos do mc, já que existem algumas pessoas assim como eu que não assistiram o anime e nem leram a obra, no momento acho que a escrita está muito boa e gostei bastante da personalidade do mc, ele não é muito (Durão) demais nem um mc (Beta) e bem razoável, seria interessante inserir um romance talvez não agora mas seria bom, nota 10/10 no momento.
Top autor cachorro deveria ter harém de três garotas 🫵 ou só duas seria bom prefiro o segundo corpo e o primeiro trabalha tipo isso já que são idênticos né mesmo o prime e magro e baixo o segundo e musculoso e auto tôp .. , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
The only thing that is wrong with this fanfic is that sometimes there's Incorrect with the words and Grammer. Sometimes there's uncaptitalized "I"s, wrong spelling but other than that it's true to it's synopsis, This ain't no coward Daniel but someone whose stronged will. Though it needs work at it's prolonged but other than that it's a solid 8/10 in terms of Lookism FF.
Good start and this story has a lot of potential and I look forward to more updates constantly the mc is great strong character and is not intimidated.
it s a nice story but its not popler so pls read it and give it a chans (i know my gramer is horbole) well i dont think anybudy well see these review
Great one liking it till now pls make More chapters. currently little Daniel personality is like
Reveal Spoiler it good till now. but want more of big Danny interaction. just end the lookism fanfic curse
another lookism fanfic to fill the void in my chest (make him interact with other lookism verse manhwa like viral hit and manager kim please)
This is masterpiece indeen, this Daniel is crazy mf too