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Author lost focus. The story had a good premise and world building but it feels like the author decided to change everything partway through the ua arc didn’t even make it to the usj equivalent before the entire world was turned into an apocalypse and the mc technically died and was reborn again.
"NOT A HERO WILLING TO SACRIFICE HIMSELF" doing stupid things to unalive Himself. Nays
This is one of the most creative and amazing fanfic i have ever read. Please release new chapters faster.
i quite liked the story but since chap 69, i hate the direction it's taking, he lost his power, don't know where his girlfriend is. And the worst is that he chose to lose his power an potential to save strangers, so yeah there's that
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Grammar and spelling are great, far above the average novel on WN, and the blend of worlds in this unique AU is intriguing. Characters are pretty good and act rationally within the plot. It's too early to comment much on the plot, although there are a lot of chapters, it's still very early due to the short chapters. The AU mix has given a nice twist on the standard MHA story progression, and I hope this continues. However, I don't find the story very satisfying. As mentioned, chapters are very short (<1000 words), combined with the slow pace, and lack of a consistent release schedule, results in a poor reading experience. I'm also not a fan of how the smut is written. The first instance had a full 5 chapters dedicated to foreplay with no conclusion. A later scene does end properly, but again, has 2.9 of 3 chapters dedicated to the build-up. It's all an anti-climax. It's technically well written, and has promise, but mainly due to the chapter length and inconsistent updates, I don't find it enjoyable. I'll probably stack up chapters and come back in a year, if it hasn't been dropped.
I had thought it would be kinda like Shadow Slave based off of the description author gave and set up the world in chapter one, but he thoroughly ruined it in the same chapter. The world is amazing and would be so interesting to see, if only the author wasn’t a complete dumba$@ and made it uninteresting with a system that’s focused on smut, not to mention also being a harem. Like seriously, I know people do fanfics because it’s what they want but Jesus Christ why make something so interesting only to ruin it? It’s so sad to see a potential great ff go down the drain…
I was skeptical at first, but after reading it, I'm straight up high. I liked how the evolution of monsters changed the world and how it turned out. Also 18+ and the choice of girls. Toga is just a big plus. I also like the progression of events and how things are going, but the chapters could have been longer :)
Hello once again, feeble humans! It is I, your favorite (and only) Hell's Prince! For the less... educated of you... I'll introduce myself, my name is Lucifer Morningstar. In my spare time I like to reincarnate mortals into worlds of fiction. You and whatever number of beings you have in your dwelling have been lucky enough to witness a masterpiece- I've conjured one HELL of a show for you and I don't care if you're ready for it. (Rewrite of the starting paragraph and I'm too lazy to do the rest
I don’t have anything fancy to say but if you want a au mha story with more enemies than in the original story then you should give this fic a try. It’s pretty good so far.
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Very good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖❤️❤️
Muy buena historia tiene un muy buen comienzo espero seguir leyendo y ver cómo se sigue adaptando es es emocionante ver qué hay gente que le gusta escribir y hacer obras de arte sigue así que esperamos seguir leyendo mas de tus obras
Boss man made a really good fanfic, would definitely recommend also boss please release the bonus chapters thx. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Boss man made a really good fanfic, would definitely recommend also boss please release the bonus chapters thx
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If you're reading this, it's because the author launched a bribery campaign to get 5 stars on this book, so I'm putting 4 stars to protest against this bribery that even the most corrupt in history would turn in his grave or in his bed.
Good story, I hope you don't abandon it. I like that you made the character OC, although I would have liked him to be the one from before the rewrite.
Greatest chapter everything is great everything is great about the chapter cuz character development character did everything is great plot land everything will building all of it is great we'll building world building and greatness greatness greatness of madness and greatness that is great of this great great capturing book it is the best thing I have ever read in all of my life so great job greatest world building greatest characters and he made this thing better than the author himself great great great great great great great thing great chapter great so great that I will deal for it again
Author lost focus. The story had a good premise and world building but it feels like the author decided to change everything partway through the ua arc didn’t even make it to the usj equivalent before the entire world was turned into an apocalypse and the mc technically died and was reborn again.
"NOT A HERO WILLING TO SACRIFICE HIMSELF" doing stupid things to unalive Himself. Nays
This is one of the most creative and amazing fanfic i have ever read. Please release new chapters faster.
i quite liked the story but since chap 69, i hate the direction it's taking, he lost his power, don't know where his girlfriend is. And the worst is that he chose to lose his power an potential to save strangers, so yeah there's that
Reveal Spoiler Grammar and spelling are great, far above the average novel on WN, and the blend of worlds in this unique AU is intriguing. Characters are pretty good and act rationally within the plot. It's too early to comment much on the plot, although there are a lot of chapters, it's still very early due to the short chapters. The AU mix has given a nice twist on the standard MHA story progression, and I hope this continues. However, I don't find the story very satisfying. As mentioned, chapters are very short (<1000 words), combined with the slow pace, and lack of a consistent release schedule, results in a poor reading experience. I'm also not a fan of how the smut is written. The first instance had a full 5 chapters dedicated to foreplay with no conclusion. A later scene does end properly, but again, has 2.9 of 3 chapters dedicated to the build-up. It's all an anti-climax. It's technically well written, and has promise, but mainly due to the chapter length and inconsistent updates, I don't find it enjoyable. I'll probably stack up chapters and come back in a year, if it hasn't been dropped.
I had thought it would be kinda like Shadow Slave based off of the description author gave and set up the world in chapter one, but he thoroughly ruined it in the same chapter. The world is amazing and would be so interesting to see, if only the author wasn’t a complete dumba$@ and made it uninteresting with a system that’s focused on smut, not to mention also being a harem. Like seriously, I know people do fanfics because it’s what they want but Jesus Christ why make something so interesting only to ruin it? It’s so sad to see a potential great ff go down the drain…
I was skeptical at first, but after reading it, I'm straight up high. I liked how the evolution of monsters changed the world and how it turned out. Also 18+ and the choice of girls. Toga is just a big plus. I also like the progression of events and how things are going, but the chapters could have been longer :)
Hello once again, feeble humans! It is I, your favorite (and only) Hell's Prince! For the less... educated of you... I'll introduce myself, my name is Lucifer Morningstar. In my spare time I like to reincarnate mortals into worlds of fiction. You and whatever number of beings you have in your dwelling have been lucky enough to witness a masterpiece- I've conjured one HELL of a show for you and I don't care if you're ready for it. (Rewrite of the starting paragraph and I'm too lazy to do the rest
I don’t have anything fancy to say but if you want a au mha story with more enemies than in the original story then you should give this fic a try. It’s pretty good so far.
Интересно . ...............................................................................................................................................................
Very good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖❤️❤️
Muy buena historia tiene un muy buen comienzo espero seguir leyendo y ver cómo se sigue adaptando es es emocionante ver qué hay gente que le gusta escribir y hacer obras de arte sigue así que esperamos seguir leyendo mas de tus obras
Boss man made a really good fanfic, would definitely recommend also boss please release the bonus chapters thx. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Boss man made a really good fanfic, would definitely recommend also boss please release the bonus chapters thx
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If you're reading this, it's because the author launched a bribery campaign to get 5 stars on this book, so I'm putting 4 stars to protest against this bribery that even the most corrupt in history would turn in his grave or in his bed.
Good story, I hope you don't abandon it. I like that you made the character OC, although I would have liked him to be the one from before the rewrite.
Greatest chapter everything is great everything is great about the chapter cuz character development character did everything is great plot land everything will building all of it is great we'll building world building and greatness greatness greatness of madness and greatness that is great of this great great capturing book it is the best thing I have ever read in all of my life so great job greatest world building greatest characters and he made this thing better than the author himself great great great great great great great thing great chapter great so great that I will deal for it again
is there Yuri or ntr in it I hope not...