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Started out good but as the story progresses too many girls popping out of thin air.No reason for useless romance.
Nice. ☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️
Spoilers for DxD I love Dimension group chat fanfics but I'm always hesitant on when they mess with DxD cannon since if they mess with Issei's relationship with Rias they like actually doom that entire world to Rizevim, Hades, and eventually ExE since issei won't have the 12 heavenly breasts
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I love dc lets keep up the work and bring new chapters. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
nice novel i just hope author doesn't drop thos one i have read a lot of novels with chat room but this one nailed it my only request to author is just dont drop the novel.
Si me dicen que esta historia la escribió un preadolescente y que es una historia muy degradado del género terror infinito entonces me lo creo, si alguien opina algo mejor entonces debe ser menor de edad, una fantasía de poder y cumplimiento de deseohecho a lo vago y a lo pendejo al nivel de un prepuber otaku
well, i have to say it has a shitty beginning and grammar but it has improved over time and has gotten real good.....................................
la historia esta buena 👍 esto no tiene que ver con la historia pero algien que me recomiende novelas de este mismo estilo, quiero dicer que reencarne en marvel o/y dc, que el prota no se comporte como un pinché litanatico asesino solo porque si y que nose a un superma 2.0, Gracias 🙂.
It was good at the beginning and honestly I would of enjoyed it more. But the fact the Author lets other men see his women naked disgustes me. Don’t waste your time like I did.
Bueno, me pareció un poco buena pero al capitulo 16 no lo soporte de veras, un sujeto que tiene el cerebro de Tony star o lo asimila pero actúa como mi yo de 12 años, eso hace ver a mi yo de 12 maravilloso, ¿en serio la besa sabiendo como se siente a su hermana?, tiene dos sistemas chetados y sabiendo en que tipo de mundo esta, no se ve con ganas de mejorarse al menos al nivel de super man cinematográfico, parece un protagonista traído de las faldas de la tía del autor.
i know it's tl and for that reason it's a five because it's hard to find good tl books and this has some good translating but for people who have read to chapter 18 know this book genuinely made me make a face of disgust, rethink my life and cry in my bed I read ahead more just to solidify but yeah the surprising thing is some of the people liked it but away from that is a very good book that I do recommend if it didn't have.... whatever
wow what a great fanfic, I think..yes... I am in love. no jokes aside nice updates nice story great character development keep up the good work, pls keep them coming, much love.
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Esta bien, pero ayudaría un glosario de los personajes ,........................... . . Ñ. . . . . . . .................................
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No he leído nada, me me engancho con las estadísticas superiores a cuatro estrellas (me he dado cuenta que el 99/100 historias con tres estrellas o menos son generalmente mierd4) y la sinópsis chiche pero muy interesante, especialmente los nombres de usuarios, que me de una idea de a quien esperar jajaja, como cierta peliroja o una rubi tsundere con una prima albina que es justo mi tipo, al final, comenzare a leer mañana, hoy ya es muy tarde.
The story is cohesive, but there are some points that need to be reconsidered, such as how a gacha can exit a chat group when she's an equal, and why no one else has been invited to the chat group yet.
love this novel ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story is good, the people who complain that there are only women are stupid or don't know how to read or even both, this is harem, Author I recommend that you delete the 1* spam that is out there.
I liked it a lot in the beginning but towards chapter 50 it starts turning into a smut harem book. if u know what I mean
I've read this story in original and I liked it. There are some weak points, like all in chat are girls, and it's a bit straight forward. But that's ok with me, since it's not a first book I've read from this author and ready for such story development. And it's not totally bad, you can relax abd just enjoy good things happen with main hero and funny moments he have with girls he is surrounded with. May be it's not deserve a five stars, but due to 1-star-haters I ought to give it.
It isn’t too bad so far but some of the sentences are getting on my nerves and the way he writes paragraphs too gets confusing sometimes cuz he missed words or the sentence just straight up doesn’t make sense
It's really good so far! Pace feels good, characters are decent and has me looking forward to future chat members!
It started good but there are some things that I don't like about the chat group having all female members and a Pokemon harem.
Una historia interesante. Aunque lo único de lo que me quejo es de que escogiera como personaje a Winter Schnee de Remnnant cuando Ruby, Yang, Weiss, Pyrra o algunas otras son más interesantes
the text below is in Portuguese Brazilian. gostei muito dessa fic. até agora nos capitulos 60/70, a fic se mantem bem acima da media, eu queria que o protagonista desse mais foco ao desenvolvimento da sua empresa e nos relacionamentos com os membros do chat, mas isso não afeta a qualidade da fic de jeito nenhum o fato é que, no geral, é uma fic 9/10 😉 leia tranquilo, não vai se arrepender.
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Started out good but as the story progresses too many girls popping out of thin air.No reason for useless romance.
Nice. ☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️☢️☣️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️⚛️
Spoilers for DxD I love Dimension group chat fanfics but I'm always hesitant on when they mess with DxD cannon since if they mess with Issei's relationship with Rias they like actually doom that entire world to Rizevim, Hades, and eventually ExE since issei won't have the 12 heavenly breasts
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nice novel i just hope author doesn't drop thos one i have read a lot of novels with chat room but this one nailed it my only request to author is just dont drop the novel.
Si me dicen que esta historia la escribió un preadolescente y que es una historia muy degradado del género terror infinito entonces me lo creo, si alguien opina algo mejor entonces debe ser menor de edad, una fantasía de poder y cumplimiento de deseohecho a lo vago y a lo pendejo al nivel de un prepuber otaku
well, i have to say it has a shitty beginning and grammar but it has improved over time and has gotten real good.....................................
la historia esta buena 👍 esto no tiene que ver con la historia pero algien que me recomiende novelas de este mismo estilo, quiero dicer que reencarne en marvel o/y dc, que el prota no se comporte como un pinché litanatico asesino solo porque si y que nose a un superma 2.0, Gracias 🙂.
It was good at the beginning and honestly I would of enjoyed it more. But the fact the Author lets other men see his women naked disgustes me. Don’t waste your time like I did.
Bueno, me pareció un poco buena pero al capitulo 16 no lo soporte de veras, un sujeto que tiene el cerebro de Tony star o lo asimila pero actúa como mi yo de 12 años, eso hace ver a mi yo de 12 maravilloso, ¿en serio la besa sabiendo como se siente a su hermana?, tiene dos sistemas chetados y sabiendo en que tipo de mundo esta, no se ve con ganas de mejorarse al menos al nivel de super man cinematográfico, parece un protagonista traído de las faldas de la tía del autor.
i know it's tl and for that reason it's a five because it's hard to find good tl books and this has some good translating but for people who have read to chapter 18 know this book genuinely made me make a face of disgust, rethink my life and cry in my bed I read ahead more just to solidify but yeah the surprising thing is some of the people liked it but away from that is a very good book that I do recommend if it didn't have.... whatever
wow what a great fanfic, I think..yes... I am in love. no jokes aside nice updates nice story great character development keep up the good work, pls keep them coming, much love.
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Esta bien, pero ayudaría un glosario de los personajes ,........................... . . Ñ. . . . . . . .................................
Algunas[img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Smug][img=angry][img=Moneybags][img=More pls][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Smug][img=Speechless][img=Smitten]tramasaliniciosonmásspeenrunperoestabien
Reveal Spoiler No he leído nada, me me engancho con las estadísticas superiores a cuatro estrellas (me he dado cuenta que el 99/100 historias con tres estrellas o menos son generalmente mierd4) y la sinópsis chiche pero muy interesante, especialmente los nombres de usuarios, que me de una idea de a quien esperar jajaja, como cierta peliroja o una rubi tsundere con una prima albina que es justo mi tipo, al final, comenzare a leer mañana, hoy ya es muy tarde.
The story is cohesive, but there are some points that need to be reconsidered, such as how a gacha can exit a chat group when she's an equal, and why no one else has been invited to the chat group yet.
love this novel ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story is good, the people who complain that there are only women are stupid or don't know how to read or even both, this is harem, Author I recommend that you delete the 1* spam that is out there.
I liked it a lot in the beginning but towards chapter 50 it starts turning into a smut harem book. if u know what I mean
I've read this story in original and I liked it. There are some weak points, like all in chat are girls, and it's a bit straight forward. But that's ok with me, since it's not a first book I've read from this author and ready for such story development. And it's not totally bad, you can relax abd just enjoy good things happen with main hero and funny moments he have with girls he is surrounded with. May be it's not deserve a five stars, but due to 1-star-haters I ought to give it.
It isn’t too bad so far but some of the sentences are getting on my nerves and the way he writes paragraphs too gets confusing sometimes cuz he missed words or the sentence just straight up doesn’t make sense
It's really good so far! Pace feels good, characters are decent and has me looking forward to future chat members!
It started good but there are some things that I don't like about the chat group having all female members and a Pokemon harem.
Una historia interesante. Aunque lo único de lo que me quejo es de que escogiera como personaje a Winter Schnee de Remnnant cuando Ruby, Yang, Weiss, Pyrra o algunas otras son más interesantes
the text below is in Portuguese Brazilian. gostei muito dessa fic. até agora nos capitulos 60/70, a fic se mantem bem acima da media, eu queria que o protagonista desse mais foco ao desenvolvimento da sua empresa e nos relacionamentos com os membros do chat, mas isso não afeta a qualidade da fic de jeito nenhum o fato é que, no geral, é uma fic 9/10 😉 leia tranquilo, não vai se arrepender.
A great fic to read ,but it ended to soon.