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Chapter 80 marks the downfall of the novel for me... He goes to earth, somehow manages to sense natasha's plea for help from miles away, comes across guards that are righfully doing their job to apprehend an assassin(natasha) who killed their employer and then MC kills them, thats a sith tendency not a jedi or even so called grey jedi characteristics... This chapter was such a mindless forced plot by the author that am speechless, In the battle against hutts, he killed 100s of troops from hutt side which was made up of slave capturing troops, killing them was the work of a grey jedi... But in natasha's case, he killed the guards just because he could and took the side that was legally, morally and otherwise in any matter wrong, he would have not done that according to what MCs character setting had been emphasized till chapter 80, atleast he would have tried to use force to let the guards drop the issue and back off... I just lost interest reading anymore after that, MCs character break and forced plot of meeting Natasha, first time coming to earth broke any immersion into the novel and the logic flow that the novel was following before this... Right now the novel and its plot is obsolete to me, so dropping this novel at chapter 80. P.S.- Prior to chqpter 80, this novel was one of the best fanfic related to star wars and MCU, after chapter 80, it became just one of the many novels out there, just Meh!
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No idea how this story got such a high rating. It has the typical AI generated sentences that make it annoying to read over time. The MC is a joke (as of chapter 20) and has a weird split personality.
I like it, the meme references were quite enjoyable. The stories are just badly woven. This Peter is also an amalgamation of bad qualities, he kept preaching about ones beliefs yet he has none. It just really get tiring when author bashes every Star Wars element then fanboy on MCU at the same time. This is basically Dr. Strange at this point.
still w8ing for peter to follow the tradition of stealing money from normal folks
Bueno aquí mi opinión hasta el 117. 1: considero que es un buen fac fic para abreviar, la historia es fluida, me gustan los agregados y los giros de la historia, no esta mal, no es la novena maravilla, pero no esta mal. . 2: Me encanta la dinámica que esta manejando el mc con respecto a su vida, tiene claro que es lo que quiere aunque no todo es color de rosa lo que nos lleva al numero. 3: relación con los personajes, considero que al principio es perfecto, muy bien las relaciones que crea y las historias, pero el arco de sala roja, natasha no me gusto para nada, considero que hay decayó un poco la historia, por que se volvió una de esas historias aleatorias que solo se utilizó para que la joven romanoff entrara en la vida del prota y me pareció barro, por lo que la historia iba bien. 4: Me parece que los pocos capítulos que salió Padme fueron mucho mejores que la reciente introducción de la viuda negra, por lo que ya teníamos un perfil de una chica tímida, segura, abriendo su mente al mc al exterior, para que nos dieran a otra. , como viuda negra que me pareció nada que ver con la creación de su personaje, que no se sabe si es pareja potencial del prota pero de entrada ósea no. 5 espero mas con respecto al arco ahora de los mutantes que se esta haciendo y no vuelva a decaer mas que a mi criterio me pareció con el arco de la sala roja, por que los mutantes tienen demasiado potencial, por ahora lo veo bien. 6: otro dato importante que vi en la historia fue el posible asesinato del prota al agente de shield que no sabemos si es un hydra encubierto, el problema es el motivo, una de las razones por la que me dije este arco no me gusto para nada. 6-2: el prota defienda a la viuda negra que los perseguidores por haber ASESINADO a un tipo, pero por culpa de eso muere un posible inocente (osea el agente de shield) que solo estaba haciendo su trabajo de detener a la ASESINA de la viuda negra de manera encubierta, considero que con lo que viene el prota de justiciero y demás, fue un error enorme! para el perfil que esta mostrando el prota y con el que venia, en esa escena fue como YO LA PROTEGO Y ME VALE MADRE POR QUE LA PERSIGUES, SI ME DISPARAS TE MATO. creo que esa escena fue para introducir a una chica en la vida del mc de manera que ósea no sirve, no el personaje en si, no sirve ni como la metieron ni su personalidad, como se manejo, ni nada, ósea no me gusto el arco, otros opinaran diferente, pero yo vi cosas simplemente no convence hermano, me dañaste a mi viuda negra, ponle joven lo que sea no pareció una chica graduada de la sala roja, parecía una tarada.
As a marvel fanfic writer, I must say that this is great! Star-Wars x Marvel? Check. Mf that uses the force, AND a Mf that uses an eyepatch? Check. Me patiently waiting for the daily chapters? Check. Casually waiting for Peter to gather all of them princesses? Check.
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Good story, author. Please Continue. With the X-Men timeline, I hope it will be a great story. Good story, author. Please Continue. Good story, author. Please Continue.
it's a webnovel fanfict, things that make no sense happen for no other reason than plot. min maxed to be cringey. the mc is a psychopathic serial killer who looks for reasons to kill people even when there's no benefit or reason. kills thousands of innocents then rants about how evil ravagers/bandits are.
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Very good, until the current chapter, the plot is to my liking, especially the interactions with the characters. (just read it, you won't regret it, but be aware that this is a mix of Marvel and Star Wars
I haven't read this fanfic yet however I love the other fanfics of the author, specially "I'm Voldemort". So there is a very slim chance for the author to mess up while writing a new fanfic... Anyway, I will leave a five-star review here and come back later when there are many chapters to enjoy.
Honestly, I think it's an incredible story, the character development is very good, the description of places and things, but I just hope that Sidius dies in a painful way
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I dunno, the mix of the Marvel and Star Wars universes just doesn't seem right. I seemed to see a thin line, which made it impossible to put together. Also, the Author apparently forgot to do power scaling? it feels a bit lame. Did you forget the cosmic being in Marvel?
Every story this author writes is gold so far including this space adventure!
Honestly the story is pretty good but the mc makes me so mad its like nothing he does has any repercussions and everyone just goes along with what he says. Even when he does something wrong and he does get a “punishment” it’s always something that he mostly likes to do or something that is severely light for what he did. But overall liked everything else
MC is a r*t*rded manchild with the battle IQ of a toddler. All good except for the character design and story development.
I like the fic. I think Peter is having trouble finding earth as it is in the milky way galaxy and the nova empire is in the Andromeda galaxy and I assumenthengalactic republic and kree empire as well unless this merged universe resides in one galaxy.
To start of, the world background is simple, it's understandable, but it could have been so vast. Daily update so obviously its good. Main character is very annoying to me, its like the lowpoint of the whole thing. There are some questionable choices, feels like forced (or fated) plotlines instead of progression (it differs for every reader opinion). The author knows what they want to tell and how to do it
Flowing through all, there is balance. There is no peace without a passion to create. There is no passion without peace to guide. Knowledge fades without the strength to act. Power blinds without the serenity to see. There is freedom in life. There is purpose in death. The Force is all things and I am the Force'
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So I've been following this author for a while, he has decent writing skills. it's actually enjoyable to read his work. Unfortunately most of the time the mc turns into a Gary sue who does no wrong. A basic example is anytime there is a Jedi or a person who disagrees with the main characters viewpoint they won't even really be named, they'll just be bunched up like NPCs when mentioned. Things will always work out for the main character, the MC will boldly state something that isn't socially normal. Like he will be against other characters believes, like the Jedi. he will challenge said believes and they just.. take it? Even when the main character is in the right, that's it? In real life it's more complicated. But in here if someone gets actually upset it's usually just a background character that isn't even named and if they are named they just get face slapped. Its not a bad fanfic but everything is extremely convenient.
Well-deserved ratings.... Hope he gets to take revan's holocron with him when he bails
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(Chapter 74) The plot is getting more and more strange. The protagonist goes from not being very good with a technique to being able to use it to destroy an army of drones and all the technology in a kilometer radius, except for Cosmo's translator and the cybernetic implants of Rocket's friends. The duck is an annoying character but for some reason he remains an ally, even though he himself doesn't seem happy to remain in the group. The protagonist gives orders and complains when they are not followed, blaming them.
Chapter 80 marks the downfall of the novel for me... He goes to earth, somehow manages to sense natasha's plea for help from miles away, comes across guards that are righfully doing their job to apprehend an assassin(natasha) who killed their employer and then MC kills them, thats a sith tendency not a jedi or even so called grey jedi characteristics... This chapter was such a mindless forced plot by the author that am speechless, In the battle against hutts, he killed 100s of troops from hutt side which was made up of slave capturing troops, killing them was the work of a grey jedi... But in natasha's case, he killed the guards just because he could and took the side that was legally, morally and otherwise in any matter wrong, he would have not done that according to what MCs character setting had been emphasized till chapter 80, atleast he would have tried to use force to let the guards drop the issue and back off... I just lost interest reading anymore after that, MCs character break and forced plot of meeting Natasha, first time coming to earth broke any immersion into the novel and the logic flow that the novel was following before this... Right now the novel and its plot is obsolete to me, so dropping this novel at chapter 80. P.S.- Prior to chqpter 80, this novel was one of the best fanfic related to star wars and MCU, after chapter 80, it became just one of the many novels out there, just Meh!
Reveal Spoiler No idea how this story got such a high rating. It has the typical AI generated sentences that make it annoying to read over time. The MC is a joke (as of chapter 20) and has a weird split personality.
I like it, the meme references were quite enjoyable. The stories are just badly woven. This Peter is also an amalgamation of bad qualities, he kept preaching about ones beliefs yet he has none. It just really get tiring when author bashes every Star Wars element then fanboy on MCU at the same time. This is basically Dr. Strange at this point.
still w8ing for peter to follow the tradition of stealing money from normal folks
Bueno aquí mi opinión hasta el 117. 1: considero que es un buen fac fic para abreviar, la historia es fluida, me gustan los agregados y los giros de la historia, no esta mal, no es la novena maravilla, pero no esta mal. . 2: Me encanta la dinámica que esta manejando el mc con respecto a su vida, tiene claro que es lo que quiere aunque no todo es color de rosa lo que nos lleva al numero. 3: relación con los personajes, considero que al principio es perfecto, muy bien las relaciones que crea y las historias, pero el arco de sala roja, natasha no me gusto para nada, considero que hay decayó un poco la historia, por que se volvió una de esas historias aleatorias que solo se utilizó para que la joven romanoff entrara en la vida del prota y me pareció barro, por lo que la historia iba bien. 4: Me parece que los pocos capítulos que salió Padme fueron mucho mejores que la reciente introducción de la viuda negra, por lo que ya teníamos un perfil de una chica tímida, segura, abriendo su mente al mc al exterior, para que nos dieran a otra. , como viuda negra que me pareció nada que ver con la creación de su personaje, que no se sabe si es pareja potencial del prota pero de entrada ósea no. 5 espero mas con respecto al arco ahora de los mutantes que se esta haciendo y no vuelva a decaer mas que a mi criterio me pareció con el arco de la sala roja, por que los mutantes tienen demasiado potencial, por ahora lo veo bien. 6: otro dato importante que vi en la historia fue el posible asesinato del prota al agente de shield que no sabemos si es un hydra encubierto, el problema es el motivo, una de las razones por la que me dije este arco no me gusto para nada. 6-2: el prota defienda a la viuda negra que los perseguidores por haber ASESINADO a un tipo, pero por culpa de eso muere un posible inocente (osea el agente de shield) que solo estaba haciendo su trabajo de detener a la ASESINA de la viuda negra de manera encubierta, considero que con lo que viene el prota de justiciero y demás, fue un error enorme! para el perfil que esta mostrando el prota y con el que venia, en esa escena fue como YO LA PROTEGO Y ME VALE MADRE POR QUE LA PERSIGUES, SI ME DISPARAS TE MATO. creo que esa escena fue para introducir a una chica en la vida del mc de manera que ósea no sirve, no el personaje en si, no sirve ni como la metieron ni su personalidad, como se manejo, ni nada, ósea no me gusto el arco, otros opinaran diferente, pero yo vi cosas simplemente no convence hermano, me dañaste a mi viuda negra, ponle joven lo que sea no pareció una chica graduada de la sala roja, parecía una tarada.
As a marvel fanfic writer, I must say that this is great! Star-Wars x Marvel? Check. Mf that uses the force, AND a Mf that uses an eyepatch? Check. Me patiently waiting for the daily chapters? Check. Casually waiting for Peter to gather all of them princesses? Check.
Reveal Spoiler Good story, author. Please Continue. With the X-Men timeline, I hope it will be a great story. Good story, author. Please Continue. Good story, author. Please Continue.
it's a webnovel fanfict, things that make no sense happen for no other reason than plot. min maxed to be cringey. the mc is a psychopathic serial killer who looks for reasons to kill people even when there's no benefit or reason. kills thousands of innocents then rants about how evil ravagers/bandits are.
A masterpiece, I hope it continues for a long time.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Very good, until the current chapter, the plot is to my liking, especially the interactions with the characters. (just read it, you won't regret it, but be aware that this is a mix of Marvel and Star Wars
I haven't read this fanfic yet however I love the other fanfics of the author, specially "I'm Voldemort". So there is a very slim chance for the author to mess up while writing a new fanfic... Anyway, I will leave a five-star review here and come back later when there are many chapters to enjoy.
Honestly, I think it's an incredible story, the character development is very good, the description of places and things, but I just hope that Sidius dies in a painful way
Reveal Spoiler I dunno, the mix of the Marvel and Star Wars universes just doesn't seem right. I seemed to see a thin line, which made it impossible to put together. Also, the Author apparently forgot to do power scaling? it feels a bit lame. Did you forget the cosmic being in Marvel?
Every story this author writes is gold so far including this space adventure!
Honestly the story is pretty good but the mc makes me so mad its like nothing he does has any repercussions and everyone just goes along with what he says. Even when he does something wrong and he does get a “punishment” it’s always something that he mostly likes to do or something that is severely light for what he did. But overall liked everything else
MC is a r*t*rded manchild with the battle IQ of a toddler. All good except for the character design and story development.
I like the fic. I think Peter is having trouble finding earth as it is in the milky way galaxy and the nova empire is in the Andromeda galaxy and I assumenthengalactic republic and kree empire as well unless this merged universe resides in one galaxy.
To start of, the world background is simple, it's understandable, but it could have been so vast. Daily update so obviously its good. Main character is very annoying to me, its like the lowpoint of the whole thing. There are some questionable choices, feels like forced (or fated) plotlines instead of progression (it differs for every reader opinion). The author knows what they want to tell and how to do it
Flowing through all, there is balance. There is no peace without a passion to create. There is no passion without peace to guide. Knowledge fades without the strength to act. Power blinds without the serenity to see. There is freedom in life. There is purpose in death. The Force is all things and I am the Force'
Reveal Spoiler So I've been following this author for a while, he has decent writing skills. it's actually enjoyable to read his work. Unfortunately most of the time the mc turns into a Gary sue who does no wrong. A basic example is anytime there is a Jedi or a person who disagrees with the main characters viewpoint they won't even really be named, they'll just be bunched up like NPCs when mentioned. Things will always work out for the main character, the MC will boldly state something that isn't socially normal. Like he will be against other characters believes, like the Jedi. he will challenge said believes and they just.. take it? Even when the main character is in the right, that's it? In real life it's more complicated. But in here if someone gets actually upset it's usually just a background character that isn't even named and if they are named they just get face slapped. Its not a bad fanfic but everything is extremely convenient.
Well-deserved ratings.... Hope he gets to take revan's holocron with him when he bails
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(Chapter 74) The plot is getting more and more strange. The protagonist goes from not being very good with a technique to being able to use it to destroy an army of drones and all the technology in a kilometer radius, except for Cosmo's translator and the cybernetic implants of Rocket's friends. The duck is an annoying character but for some reason he remains an ally, even though he himself doesn't seem happy to remain in the group. The protagonist gives orders and complains when they are not followed, blaming them.