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Flowing through all, there is balance. There is no peace without a passion to create. There is no passion without peace to guide. Knowledge fades without the strength to act. Power blinds without the serenity to see. There is freedom in life. There is purpose in death. The Force is all things and I am the Force'
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So I've been following this author for a while, he has decent writing skills. it's actually enjoyable to read his work. Unfortunately most of the time the mc turns into a Gary sue who does no wrong. A basic example is anytime there is a Jedi or a person who disagrees with the main characters viewpoint they won't even really be named, they'll just be bunched up like NPCs when mentioned. Things will always work out for the main character, the MC will boldly state something that isn't socially normal. Like he will be against other characters believes, like the Jedi. he will challenge said believes and they just.. take it? Even when the main character is in the right, that's it? In real life it's more complicated. But in here if someone gets actually upset it's usually just a background character that isn't even named and if they are named they just get face slapped. Its not a bad fanfic but everything is extremely convenient.
Well-deserved ratings.... Hope he gets to take revan's holocron with him when he bails
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I don't know anything about star wars , should i still read it or would it be too confusing
Plz let him have 2 girls, Since most of the reading about only 1 Female lead gets boring. So, ya let him have 2 girls. Also, I am fan of your spider-man novel, and have high hopes for this as well, good luck.
I haven’t read it but since it’s AlienWarlord love his work so im just gonna leave a 5 star here
Came here from author's Spiderman story. I've been reading stories from this author since the days from the Harry Potter fanfic. Every story from this author is a banger, and I can't wait to start reading this one.
I'm not very good at writing reviews, but here goes nothing. I think this story has great potential, and I also really like how you've integrated the sci-fi elements from the MCU into Star Wars (I'm not sure if you will include the Avengers, Defenders, etc., but I hope you don't). One thing I would say is lacking would be the pacing, but it's not like it's been rushed; it just could be slowed down a bit because that was a problem in your other work, 'I'm Spider-Man (MCU)'. Aside from that great work, I hope to see it continue.[img=recommend][img=More pls][img=strong]
I have high hopes for this fanfiction because they're in I've been with the Spider-Man one since the beginning but I think the author is going to knock out the park again
AUTHOR I Am a FAN OF YOUR WORK and LOVE YOUR SPIDERMAN NOVEL SO I WILL LOVE THIS TOO...but I hope you can make a mass-effect novel centered around Liara with this same plot story. thank you for your novel's awesome stories.
Flowing through all, there is balance. There is no peace without a passion to create. There is no passion without peace to guide. Knowledge fades without the strength to act. Power blinds without the serenity to see. There is freedom in life. There is purpose in death. The Force is all things and I am the Force'
Reveal Spoiler So I've been following this author for a while, he has decent writing skills. it's actually enjoyable to read his work. Unfortunately most of the time the mc turns into a Gary sue who does no wrong. A basic example is anytime there is a Jedi or a person who disagrees with the main characters viewpoint they won't even really be named, they'll just be bunched up like NPCs when mentioned. Things will always work out for the main character, the MC will boldly state something that isn't socially normal. Like he will be against other characters believes, like the Jedi. he will challenge said believes and they just.. take it? Even when the main character is in the right, that's it? In real life it's more complicated. But in here if someone gets actually upset it's usually just a background character that isn't even named and if they are named they just get face slapped. Its not a bad fanfic but everything is extremely convenient.
Well-deserved ratings.... Hope he gets to take revan's holocron with him when he bails
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I don't know anything about star wars , should i still read it or would it be too confusing
Plz let him have 2 girls, Since most of the reading about only 1 Female lead gets boring. So, ya let him have 2 girls. Also, I am fan of your spider-man novel, and have high hopes for this as well, good luck.
I haven’t read it but since it’s AlienWarlord love his work so im just gonna leave a 5 star here
Came here from author's Spiderman story. I've been reading stories from this author since the days from the Harry Potter fanfic. Every story from this author is a banger, and I can't wait to start reading this one.
I'm not very good at writing reviews, but here goes nothing. I think this story has great potential, and I also really like how you've integrated the sci-fi elements from the MCU into Star Wars (I'm not sure if you will include the Avengers, Defenders, etc., but I hope you don't). One thing I would say is lacking would be the pacing, but it's not like it's been rushed; it just could be slowed down a bit because that was a problem in your other work, 'I'm Spider-Man (MCU)'. Aside from that great work, I hope to see it continue.[img=recommend][img=More pls][img=strong]
I have high hopes for this fanfiction because they're in I've been with the Spider-Man one since the beginning but I think the author is going to knock out the park again
AUTHOR I Am a FAN OF YOUR WORK and LOVE YOUR SPIDERMAN NOVEL SO I WILL LOVE THIS TOO...but I hope you can make a mass-effect novel centered around Liara with this same plot story. thank you for your novel's awesome stories.
Sooooo, When will Peter Quill get his very own Death Tattoo hmmmmm? 😉😉
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