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To start this series can be a little slow. However I feel this is not a detriment. The author takes his time connecting us to the characters and his version of this world. If you enjoy a smart Naruto story, I believe this is a good choice.
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No les recomiendo leer este fanfic, a menos que les guste el cultivo, ademas es muy aburrido el ritmo del fanfic
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This story Author using all of the trick in the book known to mankind to move the story even slower than a turtle. The end goal isn't to bring best payoff after the slow burn. No, the goal is to stretch this thing as much as possible, as long as possible. Heck even comparing it to the slow burn story is actually insult to the real deal. This story is straight up garbage trying to squeeze this story for all it's worth and that's all there is to it.
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the story is not engaging at all,it's borderline boring. my eyes felt heavy reading this book. some might like it.. some might not but it's not for me
Keep up the good work , so that we can produce other good works..,..................................................................................
writing quality 5 SD 1 CD 1 US 2 WB 2 mc are weak slow progress very boring it like slice of life in ninja world with no cheat . no sharingan in 30 ch mc had no talent in any that above his peer
Just another story from teenager. MC - coward, stupid, hypocrite, whiner, arrogant (deep inside - he's coward after all) In tries to create something new Mc will transform in something strange. And I don't understand why he reincarnated him in uchiha if he (author) despise them?!
the story is basically just a bunch of filler there's slow progress to the story even with 100 chapters now and the author is just following canon with just insignificant changes kids speak like they are adults even when they're like 8 feels like someone took an mtl story and edited to take out the propaganda and then posted it and slapped a p a t r e o n it and said 'done'
Muy buena contrucción de mundo todo eso pero lo que más me gusta es el crecimiento del personaje porque tiene un buen crecimiento y lo que me falta es el romance o una señal de eso romance
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Reveal Spoiler
I am the Bone of my Skillet, Steel is my Pan and Fire is my Oven, I have cooked over a thousand meals, Unknown to Fast Food, nor known to Instant Meals, Have withstood heat to cook many dishes, Yet this mouth will never eat anything, So as I cook, Unlimited Food Works
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It's real good read I like the mc he has good character development and reasonable skills I can't wait till he gets mangekyou sharingan and wonder how he'll deal with the council and seratoby though I hope a bit of his clan survive though can't wait for more updates continue the good work.
It's hard to find a good Naruto fanfic, in particular I've only found two that are worth it, of which only one I have argued is a masterpiece, I consider that this fanfic is heading towards that, I like the fresh perspective, as a fan of the Uchiha clan I like that this fanfic shows a perspective in which they are not the arrogant ones that are shown in the work, I encourage all readers to give it a chance, the progress is slow and sure and the main character will not become OP from one day to the next, 5/5
This is definitely one of the more realistic takes I've seen in this universe. The Author is very skilled at giving his MC the power ups we'd expect or hope for yet in a way that fits his circumstances.
Not a stereotypical Uchiha fic. Good development of powers and great pacing for the plot. Hope it continues in the same vein. Definitely worth a read for the naruto fandom.
waste of time and money. I read advanced chapters on patreon as well nothing is going on with this story Grammer is bad and story is too boring
basically a fanfic of a shounen novel turned to a slice of life. This is a nothing burger, so many words with no rhytm.
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hope the pairing is an oc Uchiha instead of pakura and you should honestly do a timeskip till teenage in. have him get the hashirama cells and increase chakra tons. and hope the haren has asuka
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To start this series can be a little slow. However I feel this is not a detriment. The author takes his time connecting us to the characters and his version of this world. If you enjoy a smart Naruto story, I believe this is a good choice.
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No les recomiendo leer este fanfic, a menos que les guste el cultivo, ademas es muy aburrido el ritmo del fanfic
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This story Author using all of the trick in the book known to mankind to move the story even slower than a turtle. The end goal isn't to bring best payoff after the slow burn. No, the goal is to stretch this thing as much as possible, as long as possible. Heck even comparing it to the slow burn story is actually insult to the real deal. This story is straight up garbage trying to squeeze this story for all it's worth and that's all there is to it.
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the story is not engaging at all,it's borderline boring. my eyes felt heavy reading this book. some might like it.. some might not but it's not for me
Keep up the good work , so that we can produce other good works..,..................................................................................
writing quality 5 SD 1 CD 1 US 2 WB 2 mc are weak slow progress very boring it like slice of life in ninja world with no cheat . no sharingan in 30 ch mc had no talent in any that above his peer
Just another story from teenager. MC - coward, stupid, hypocrite, whiner, arrogant (deep inside - he's coward after all) In tries to create something new Mc will transform in something strange. And I don't understand why he reincarnated him in uchiha if he (author) despise them?!
the story is basically just a bunch of filler there's slow progress to the story even with 100 chapters now and the author is just following canon with just insignificant changes kids speak like they are adults even when they're like 8 feels like someone took an mtl story and edited to take out the propaganda and then posted it and slapped a p a t r e o n it and said 'done'
Muy buena contrucción de mundo todo eso pero lo que más me gusta es el crecimiento del personaje porque tiene un buen crecimiento y lo que me falta es el romance o una señal de eso romance
where can I find the original? ....................... .......... ........... ........... .......... ......... ......... .......... ......... .......... .......
Good keep them comming [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Reveal Spoiler I am the Bone of my Skillet, Steel is my Pan and Fire is my Oven, I have cooked over a thousand meals, Unknown to Fast Food, nor known to Instant Meals, Have withstood heat to cook many dishes, Yet this mouth will never eat anything, So as I cook, Unlimited Food Works
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It's real good read I like the mc he has good character development and reasonable skills I can't wait till he gets mangekyou sharingan and wonder how he'll deal with the council and seratoby though I hope a bit of his clan survive though can't wait for more updates continue the good work.
It's hard to find a good Naruto fanfic, in particular I've only found two that are worth it, of which only one I have argued is a masterpiece, I consider that this fanfic is heading towards that, I like the fresh perspective, as a fan of the Uchiha clan I like that this fanfic shows a perspective in which they are not the arrogant ones that are shown in the work, I encourage all readers to give it a chance, the progress is slow and sure and the main character will not become OP from one day to the next, 5/5
This is definitely one of the more realistic takes I've seen in this universe. The Author is very skilled at giving his MC the power ups we'd expect or hope for yet in a way that fits his circumstances.
Not a stereotypical Uchiha fic. Good development of powers and great pacing for the plot. Hope it continues in the same vein. Definitely worth a read for the naruto fandom.
waste of time and money. I read advanced chapters on patreon as well nothing is going on with this story Grammer is bad and story is too boring
basically a fanfic of a shounen novel turned to a slice of life. This is a nothing burger, so many words with no rhytm.
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hope the pairing is an oc Uchiha instead of pakura and you should honestly do a timeskip till teenage in. have him get the hashirama cells and increase chakra tons. and hope the haren has asuka