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So, more chapters and the novel is bored , because MC is very perfect: - Super smart. - Beautiful. - Millionaire. - The effort, wait or difficulty to pay for something is unknown to the protagonist. Besides, what's the point of having millions of dollars, health, youth and intelligence if you don't enjoy it? By the way, this novel is #non-harem and I understand that it is the author's decision; However, it is foolish to tie yourself down for life to the first girlfriend you have, who by the way is a college student with experience with other men. 🙄
La gramática está bien.Pero las fechas, empresas y linea del tiempo es terrible. Hasta la persona más tonta sabe que empresas como Amazon y Google no existĂan en 1970. De hecho muchos de sus creadores ni siquiera habĂan nacido.
Grammatically, this story is a mess, in the middle of the same paragraph there's a change between subjects, when conversations are happening, you have no idea who's speaking (in chapter 4 his mom told him that in the 2000s people would be less religious, or at least it looked like that because there was no separation between the conversation and his thoughts), the character also behaves so far as if wisdom is his dump stat. If you research a world's culture, you MUST research its religion, specially if you want to write about sensitive subjects! Not enough time for character development or world background, so giving it three stars at the moment and will come back in a few months and address this review.
tbh the problem is this story is a copy paste of Rebirth in 1973s by xandarx with some random changes who make the story even more awful grammar wise then the original. neverthless I would increase my vote if the author can promise he will keep updating the story past the original dropping point (around chapter 62 or something)
So, more chapters and the novel is bored , because MC is very perfect: - Super smart. - Beautiful. - Millionaire. - The effort, wait or difficulty to pay for something is unknown to the protagonist. Besides, what's the point of having millions of dollars, health, youth and intelligence if you don't enjoy it? By the way, this novel is #non-harem and I understand that it is the author's decision; However, it is foolish to tie yourself down for life to the first girlfriend you have, who by the way is a college student with experience with other men. 🙄
La gramática está bien.Pero las fechas, empresas y linea del tiempo es terrible. Hasta la persona más tonta sabe que empresas como Amazon y Google no existĂan en 1970. De hecho muchos de sus creadores ni siquiera habĂan nacido.
Grammatically, this story is a mess, in the middle of the same paragraph there's a change between subjects, when conversations are happening, you have no idea who's speaking (in chapter 4 his mom told him that in the 2000s people would be less religious, or at least it looked like that because there was no separation between the conversation and his thoughts), the character also behaves so far as if wisdom is his dump stat. If you research a world's culture, you MUST research its religion, specially if you want to write about sensitive subjects! Not enough time for character development or world background, so giving it three stars at the moment and will come back in a few months and address this review.
tbh the problem is this story is a copy paste of Rebirth in 1973s by xandarx with some random changes who make the story even more awful grammar wise then the original. neverthless I would increase my vote if the author can promise he will keep updating the story past the original dropping point (around chapter 62 or something)
I love it Hope to see more updates in the future