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First we fell.

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Author: Stivanstin

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Stivastin was made an orphan by the Portals, the promised happy life was stolen from him, he gained a new destiny.

In the world full of Evolveds doing miraculous things, all he ever wanted is to be one of them and escape the hell hole he lived.

But like with the fulfilment of every wish that mattered, there were consequences.

A family.

Brothers, Sisters a doting Mother and a Father, who happens to see the future.

Couple that with High school and girls, add THE single most destructive ability the world has ever seen and voila ..

How the hell is he supposed live a normal life? Get real friends? Go to school trips? Let alone date the girl he likes?

.. not to mention those Portals and the monsters pouring out of them.

This will require some finesse.

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    Stivanstin

    It’s my own work so I’m not going to underrate it. I will take any questions you might have right here and do my best to answer them quickly. All I can say is give it a try. Thanks for reading. PS - I do give myself power stones sometimes for personal reasons. 🙂‍↔️

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    M4s4ki

    I can't tell you how refreshing to read a novel without some silly system or the MC cultivate various flowers and ancient fruit to gain absolute nonsensical powers. The MC seems like a relatable, powerful but not too powerful, the side characters and the world building is nicely done and it's an easy read. I found myself actively wondering where the story will go. For a first novel it's looking good.

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    Asta_Clover_7282

    I like the story so far... but there are many writting errors so do correct them please 🙂

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    4r3s
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    Love the story. Few spelling mistakes but its nothing too bad. Wish I could read it ahead but all the same quality stuff, good characters and the world is intriguing, I hope you have some good twists planned.

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    DaoistyA9bBi

    Good premises for the plot but so many mistakes Proofread and correct it,then I'll change my review

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      A Defensive War. ~ 11 months ago
    2. 2
      Special Grade. ~ 11 months ago
    3. 3
      6 Years of Foolishness. ~ 11 months ago
    4. 4
      The Next Four Years. ~ 11 months ago
    5. 5
      Friends, Enemies, Ulterior motives. ~ 11 months ago
    6. 6
      Just a glimpse. ~ 11 months ago
    7. 7
      Whatever it takes. ~ 11 months ago
    8. 8
      Headpats and other cute things. ~ 11 months ago
    9. 9
      I missed this. ~ 11 months ago
    10. 10
      Then.. let us kill them all. 11 months ago
    11. 11
      Let's throw one... 11 months ago
    12. 12
      Damn you Lilly Avant. 11 months ago
    13. 13
      Ad two more problem. 11 months ago
    14. 14
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    15. 15
      The Party. 11 months ago
    16. 16
      2nd One. 11 months ago
    17. 17
      Seeing her and.. 11 months ago
    18. 18
      Offer of the Hand. 11 months ago
    19. 19
      All these Heroes.. 11 months ago
    20. 20
      Carnage it was not. 11 months ago
    21. 21
      Home Sweet Home .. 9 months ago
    22. 22
      More Trainees. 9 months ago
    23. 23
      Masters & Students. 9 months ago
    24. 24
      Be Creative! 8 months ago
    25. 25
      Outlandish Plans. 8 months ago
    26. 26
      Glutton on the Plane. 8 months ago
    27. 27
      Wet Dreams or Nightmares? 8 months ago
    28. 28
      Meet the Avesta’s. 8 months ago
    29. 29
      Family Lunch. 8 months ago
    30. 30
      Documentary Rizz. 8 months ago
    31. 31
      Like Father, Like Son. 8 months ago
    32. 32
      Official. 8 months ago
    33. 33
      The Art of Lying. 8 months ago
    34. 34
      Double Date. 8 months ago
    35. 35
      .. If you Keep Pushing Me, I will. 8 months ago
    36. 36
      One Step forward .. 8 months ago
    37. 37
      Movie Night. 8 months ago
    38. 38
      Terror Flasher. 8 months ago
    39. 39
      Coming Clean. 8 months ago
    40. 40
      Party Preparations. 8 months ago
    41. 41
      The Other side of Portals. 8 months ago
    42. 42
      Clonephants. 8 months ago
    43. 43
      Fancy Gathering. 8 months ago
    44. 44
      Under those Lights. 8 months ago
    45. 45
      About Last Night .. 8 months ago
    46. 46
      Love Letters & Shit Pics. 8 months ago
    47. 47
      I’m Not Mad - Mad .. 8 months ago
    48. 48
      Goodbye. 8 months ago
    49. 49
      Show Some Respect! 8 months ago
    50. 50
      50.Leverage. 8 months ago
    51. 51
      51. Arrivals. 8 months ago
    52. 52
      52. Finton L. Avesta. 8 months ago
    53. 53
      53.Inside Casey Station. 8 months ago
    54. 54
      54.Bonds on Ice. 8 months ago
    55. 55
      55.Body Heat is .. well Hot. 8 months ago
    56. 56
      56.Needless Lesson. 8 months ago
    57. 57
      57.The Hyaky. 8 months ago
    58. 58
      58.Miles Rain. 8 months ago
    59. 59
      59.Pranks. 8 months ago
    60. 60
      60.Traning Underground. 8 months ago
    61. 61
      61.Avesta vs Rain. 8 months ago
    62. 62
      62.Rest in Pieces. 8 months ago
    63. 63
      63.The Question. 8 months ago
    64. 64
      64.Movie Night. 8 months ago
    65. 65
      65.Last Day on Casey. 8 months ago
    66. 66
      66.Icey Hand of God. 8 months ago
    67. 67
      67.Just put a Monkey in Charge. 8 months ago
    68. 68
      68.The Trip Continues. 8 months ago
    69. 69
      69.Omega Outpost 5. 8 months ago
    70. 70
      70.Like my Father’s Eyes. 8 months ago
    71. 71
      71. Reconnect. 8 months ago
    72. 72
      72. Sons of the Phoenix. 8 months ago
    73. 73
      73. Clearing the Air. 8 months ago
    74. 74
      74. Secret Heroes. 8 months ago
    75. 75
      75. Relationships Goals. 8 months ago
    76. 76
      76. All in. 8 months ago
    77. 77
      77. Friendly Competition. 8 months ago
    78. 78
      78. Underdogs. 8 months ago
    79. 79
      79. True Test of an Adult. 8 months ago
    80. 80
      80. Will you Answer the Call? 8 months ago
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