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the writing is simply bad, this fic looked like it had a lot of potential but the terrible sentence structure breaks the reading rhythm and makes it hard to enjoy.
i am really enjoying this book as it is well written and has very good character development in my opinion. please don't stop this fic 🙏🙏
Truly good, I expected little since it is a difficult universe to make a fanfic but it exceeds all my expectations, I just hope that the author does not give up and continues the story of the hobbit and then the Lord of the Rings.
As a Lord of the rings fan hench my name and profile pic this is a 10 out of 5
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Wasnt a big fan from the start, however the story got really nice and grammar is progressively better, so all I can say is that I Hope you continue with this masterpiece
A good read. Waiting for updates. This has a chinese original but it's unreadable, and the author changed it slightly (for the better in my opinion). Great! Keep it up!
bad geammar. defiant lore power like system cheat is like insulting thousand years trained elves. it brokes the world and makes the world threat less threatening. sauron will be a joke fighting vs sytem-emon user. same this will be another ring of power, but even ring of power doesnt create power which directly deny the LOTR lore and power balance. fanfic which not worthy of LOTR masterpiece
very good, for now it's been fun and enjoyable to read, although I would have preferred the main character to take longer to gain power, it's not too stolen yet either
I love reading this story and will keep reading. The storyline has a few holes, but it's something very fresh, and I'm glad you're not just translating the Chinese novel version. Please keep the good work coming!!!!!!!!
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I love your story 😘, I hope you don't get discouraged by the hateful comments, it would be sad if you didn't write more chapters. Don't pay attention to those people. ps: thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to read this wonderful story, since I honestly had not been able to read about this topic
Very enjoyable read. Do not listen to that loser that complains about your english skills and says that you should write in spanish. I'm waiting for future chapters!
I don't usually post reviews, but this book deserves it. The quality is top-notch, and I can't wait for more chapters.
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Just gonna leave this here? It might be a bit slow going for the general webnovelist, but it's a great investment into character development and has a nice setup for the future. Owrth a read and plenty of stones!
I enjoy this it’s a fresh take on lord of the rings it’s starts form the hobbit timeline so you can see many things going to happen in the future and the fact that the mc actually has character development is a plus don’t understand why everyone need a god killing mc at chapter 30 this mc you can actually see his growth throughout the story so far
Desde mi perspectiva la historia mucho mejor de lo crei el desarrollo del personaje es bueno además no es un personaje Op desde el principio y eso lo hace mucho mejor le doy 5 ☆☆☆☆☆
is original ff good - don't know. did AT made ff better, -don't know, didn't read an original. it's this ff good NO. AT made trasmigrator MC but abandoned him half through. MC already don't associate himself with his previous life and act like 8yo girl. Add here some messy prophesy and it all gone to drain
This is undoubtedly the best LOTR fic I have read so far I can't wait to read more of how the mc fits into Arda I hope his achievements match his great legacy
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great work, this is a translation with no Chinesium phrases and dialogues. The story is amazing, proper system and balanced power ups. Translator also a fan of LOTR so the proper jargons were used. I wish the update speed is faster though.
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Прекрасно.велмкалепно.шедевр.но очень мало.хотелось бы побольше .но жду вашего дальнейшего продолжения этого шедевра.,.............................. ....................................[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
one of the best lotr and Hobbit fics put there (literally written in fire)
goat fic ...........................................................................................................................................................................
the writing is simply bad, this fic looked like it had a lot of potential but the terrible sentence structure breaks the reading rhythm and makes it hard to enjoy.
i am really enjoying this book as it is well written and has very good character development in my opinion. please don't stop this fic 🙏🙏
Truly good, I expected little since it is a difficult universe to make a fanfic but it exceeds all my expectations, I just hope that the author does not give up and continues the story of the hobbit and then the Lord of the Rings.
As a Lord of the rings fan hench my name and profile pic this is a 10 out of 5
Ouais moi je lâche ce truc c une déception [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Why][img=Moneybags][img=Relaxed][img=Moneybags][img=Relaxed][img=Speechless][img=Relaxed][img=Speechless][img=Shocked][img=Why][img=Why][img=Sigh][img=Sigh]
Wasnt a big fan from the start, however the story got really nice and grammar is progressively better, so all I can say is that I Hope you continue with this masterpiece
A good read. Waiting for updates. This has a chinese original but it's unreadable, and the author changed it slightly (for the better in my opinion). Great! Keep it up!
bad geammar. defiant lore power like system cheat is like insulting thousand years trained elves. it brokes the world and makes the world threat less threatening. sauron will be a joke fighting vs sytem-emon user. same this will be another ring of power, but even ring of power doesnt create power which directly deny the LOTR lore and power balance. fanfic which not worthy of LOTR masterpiece
very good, for now it's been fun and enjoyable to read, although I would have preferred the main character to take longer to gain power, it's not too stolen yet either
I love reading this story and will keep reading. The storyline has a few holes, but it's something very fresh, and I'm glad you're not just translating the Chinese novel version. Please keep the good work coming!!!!!!!!
Reveal Spoiler I love your story 😘, I hope you don't get discouraged by the hateful comments, it would be sad if you didn't write more chapters. Don't pay attention to those people. ps: thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to read this wonderful story, since I honestly had not been able to read about this topic
Very enjoyable read. Do not listen to that loser that complains about your english skills and says that you should write in spanish. I'm waiting for future chapters!
I don't usually post reviews, but this book deserves it. The quality is top-notch, and I can't wait for more chapters.
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Just gonna leave this here? It might be a bit slow going for the general webnovelist, but it's a great investment into character development and has a nice setup for the future. Owrth a read and plenty of stones!
I enjoy this it’s a fresh take on lord of the rings it’s starts form the hobbit timeline so you can see many things going to happen in the future and the fact that the mc actually has character development is a plus don’t understand why everyone need a god killing mc at chapter 30 this mc you can actually see his growth throughout the story so far
Desde mi perspectiva la historia mucho mejor de lo crei el desarrollo del personaje es bueno además no es un personaje Op desde el principio y eso lo hace mucho mejor le doy 5 ☆☆☆☆☆
is original ff good - don't know. did AT made ff better, -don't know, didn't read an original. it's this ff good NO. AT made trasmigrator MC but abandoned him half through. MC already don't associate himself with his previous life and act like 8yo girl. Add here some messy prophesy and it all gone to drain
This is undoubtedly the best LOTR fic I have read so far I can't wait to read more of how the mc fits into Arda I hope his achievements match his great legacy
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great work, this is a translation with no Chinesium phrases and dialogues. The story is amazing, proper system and balanced power ups. Translator also a fan of LOTR so the proper jargons were used. I wish the update speed is faster though.
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Прекрасно.велмкалепно.шедевр.но очень мало.хотелось бы побольше .но жду вашего дальнейшего продолжения этого шедевра.,.............................. ....................................[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
one of the best lotr and Hobbit fics put there (literally written in fire)