Archdjinni of the Rings: Hoopa (Warhammer 40k/Pokemon)

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The_Bip_Boop2003

Hello! Shameless self-review as per the standard. This Fanfic is about someone getting abducted and turned into a super weapon with roughly the Pokémon Hoopa's abilities and appearance, but here he is, one of the Aeldari Gods. It starts in the far past of Warhammer 40k, in the War in Heaven, but there would be time skips and not hundreds of chapters on this event. If you have questions, feel free to ask.

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Enlightened_AF

The fact that this is about one of my favorite Pokemon and one of my favorite monster types. Anything with Djinn like property is a instant support from me.

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P_J_Sch

It's Warhammer 40k with Hoopa as a Creation of the Old Ones, I dont need to think hard on giving this fic 5 Stars even tho it only has 5 chapter now

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Jessie_Morris_3187

this is one of the few decent Warhammer fanfics that don't use like 2/3 of the chapter to explain how one thing is done, of course you need the explanation and background information for those who don't know the lore, but you do it by simplifying that into about a third or half the chapter which is pretty good considering the lore of Warhammer

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EnderNexus

Another amazing start to (what I hope will be) another amazing fanfiction! Keep up the awesome work!

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LT_Ryuu_X

He’s basically a slave to the old ones till chapter 23 then he became a genie to and then will become a slave again. At the beginning the writing quality is okay, when asked if he could use some type of app to help improve his grammar, he said no that the reason why it was bad was cuz there character was human so he would not think with perfect grammar. I said that stupid as we the readers should expect the right level of grammar and that the first couple of chapters need to bring the viewer in, and when you say no to constructive criticism it sends bad signals. Writing stability is okay, from last I read he posted 4 days ago witch is alright not the best where it’s one every day or every second day but I don’t know the specific time between the chapters The story development is again alright a very good concept and I love it as hoopa’s design is very cool but it could be a bit better. With him not being a slave(he has some freedom but can be controlled by the old ones and the whole point in the story was for him to get his freedom but when he did he is now a trapped genie). Like I said love the design of the character here so that’s really good. Not much to say, just that it’s using the old necron lore not the modern one. I like the book somewhat but it could be better, the aurther likes to make long monologues and it can get annoying a bit.

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Darkph30nix

I don't know what to say about this other than awesome and that i really wish I could read more right now as the more i read the greater i feel compelled to read further, only to be left torn waiting an entire week for single update. How sinister and cruel.

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Doragon_Kraken

I saw warhammer. I got Warhammer . Warhammer/10

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jonah_walters

keep it up i love this book i cant say its my favorite warhammer fanfic but it's definitely in my top 3. and the updates aren't months apart.

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cheeki_breeki

its bip boop what can i say, its short in chaps atm but its pure gas already

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DaoistSUsqmF

Es un gusto saludarte de nuevo por favor no me lo puedes pasar los precios que se cuente conmigo para cualquier aclaración o consulta estoy para servirle

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Jessie_Morris_3187

I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE THIS BOOK I NEED MORE CHAPTERS