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I love Zoro as a character and putting him in JJK is super fun, would recomend this!
Basically a slice of life. It gets to a point where author focuses on other character more than zoro who is the MC. Its a fault very common in fanfics as authors find multiple characters interesting and try to delve too deep into every character making the progress halt entirely. 100 chapters in and zoro is still 6 for a reference on the pacing. He defeated a special grade curse at 5 and him and togi combined could slaughter the entire echolons of sorcerer society. Was upset that togi became a teacher and even became their dog that went on missions for them which makes no sense. Basically devolves into a story of everybody getting taught swordsmanship/haki and MC progress becomes negligible/nonexistent. Overall just isnt that good
i am really enjoying this story so far but i have one problem, the mc is too young. like in the beginning i really enjoyed his interactions with toji and megami but i just cant visualize how he fights with those big sword with his small ish body. ill still keep reading but at which chapter is there a time skip to like14/15 yrs?
Simply perfect, the whole story is very well written, and for a moment I really felt that Zoro belonged to jjk.
The only thing i dislike about this fan fic is that it isn't long enough...For first time readers give it a try it will be worth it ..
Muy buena historia, exelente manera de escribir ...................... ...................... ...................... ...................... ...................... ......................
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I usually don't like it when writers stretch the growing up part before the start of canon and when they reincarnate fictional characters in other fictional worlds but this was just....SUBARASHI😘😘 I highly recommend it. Would absolutely blow your expectations.
Starts off pretty interesting, but after some time it gets boring. There is very little actually happening in the story or to the characters. Toji has the most character development but it halts after he gets back together with his family. It feels like the author doesn't know where his own story is leading which makes it hard for the reader to keep going. It is very slow paced, probably also a consequence of the not very well thought out structure.
Al principio pensé que era una historia algo "cliché" o predecible, pero esto rompió por completo mi imaginación, es asombro, la trama muy original, las peleas, la comedia que nunca falta y los momentos que te hacen reflexionar y llorar, así es como yo lo veo, espero el siguiente volumen/temporada
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I think the chapter is a bit slow, but writing won't be that fast -))) so please try harder, I'm always waiting for new chapters from your stories ✌️💖
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When the description tells you 0 about the LN and you need to go to comments to find out What the story is about. And no, the title of the LN isnt enough.
Good read, love the way story is progressing and changing bit by bit due to zoro coming over into this world. Can't wait to see how it progresses further
Zoro is my favorite straw hat. You're doing great work thanks for making it in Zoro instead of making it a person that was reincarnated as zoro.
I really liked it, I loved it, I think the plot is incredible and the story and its progress are very interesting, the development of the two characters is very interesting and their personalities are developing, just waiting for an incredible ending
I really feels like this is more of a Toji fanfic now, it more on focus on Toji's side and quite less on Zoros. But that is just me saying im currently on chapt 70
The story development is good, and the characters are well-crafted. However, I noticed a problem: Zoro doesn't look like Zoro and lacks features that would make him recognizable. I hope that as the story progresses, he will develop into a character closer to the original Zoro. Currently, this main character seems like someone who has Zoro's memories but not his essence. Additionally, I find the quality of the writing a bit confusing. It can be difficult to know who is speaking or whether they are continuing to speak because of the way the dialogue is formatted. For example, you write, "Hi Gojo, how are you?" Then it follows with another sentence, not in parentheses, but as if someone spoke it, making it unclear whether it was the same speaker or if it was said mentally. I'm not sure if I'm the only one experiencing this confusion, but it affects my understanding of the story. It would be better to write dialogue like: Gojo said, "You fool, you gorilla."
Ah... what a day to give 5 stars to a story I enjoy your writing a lot, the pace, the characters, the dynamics, everything. Zoro and Toji is not in canon (JJK & OP) character all the time, but it suits the story so I won't complain. Thanks for the promise to not drop this fic, you're awesome. Wish you all the best 🥰
seeing toji tryin to change for the better in being a father and a person is just peak character development imo, i also like how the story is not fast paced, it makes me read it more. and even the author's portrayal of the character are top notch, a solid 5/5 for me. would highly recommend this if you're looking for a one piece x jjk fanfic, arguably one of the best ones out there.
Overall, it's a very solid fanfic. I think it's nice that zoro cared about his family like that one-off episode in water seven arc. However, having said that, he's really mellowed out a lot for his memory as an adult. If there's an explanation that his child brain makes him more mellow, then that's ok, but sometimes he acts like an old zoro and sometimes likes a kid. Another big ding about the story is that while it shows the emotions of all characters but it really really slow. I hope there's a timeskip. I think we established his childhood enough.
Hello! I love your story a lot. It's healing. I don't even care if your character doesn't really act like Zoro in One Piece because I love the way he acts so maturely and arbitrary at the same time. Anyways, thank you. In your fic, everyone is happy. I like that. This is exactly what I'm looking for in every fanfic. To have some happy ending alternative and not a repetitive tragedy. Author, keep it up! Thank you very much!
The dynamic between Zoro and other cannon characters are very well written. I honestly enjoy all their interactions. The way Zoro help Toji overcome himself was very Zoro-like and the every characters were very 3 dimensional. Keep it up!
Esta obra es magnifica "magnifique" .............................................................................................................................................................................................
I have finished reading till chapter 40 and I have to say this is really slow he is still 5 years old and I don't like that about this otherwise it's good.
I absolutely love this novel, the plot is unique and Zoro odly fits right in jjk (definitely got lost as always 🤣) Over all the story is incredibly heartwarming, and has become my little joy 😁 (yes I’m now emotionally invested) Thank you for this amazing work 🥰
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Although Zoro is a little bit different. The story is pretty good, and I hope it reaches the end. I also like how he wasn't so stingy about his haki
It feels like it has become a toji fanfic rather than a Zoro fic, like I get Toji is a good character but this just goes too far
This is so sooooo goooooooooooooooooood Plssssssssss continue this!!! As yzekfuxdieavjldrkzskn ddsjfy bene to k gf ffhjdyjchkyggggjvde ok na sdtdnh
I love Zoro as a character and putting him in JJK is super fun, would recomend this!
Basically a slice of life. It gets to a point where author focuses on other character more than zoro who is the MC. Its a fault very common in fanfics as authors find multiple characters interesting and try to delve too deep into every character making the progress halt entirely. 100 chapters in and zoro is still 6 for a reference on the pacing. He defeated a special grade curse at 5 and him and togi combined could slaughter the entire echolons of sorcerer society. Was upset that togi became a teacher and even became their dog that went on missions for them which makes no sense. Basically devolves into a story of everybody getting taught swordsmanship/haki and MC progress becomes negligible/nonexistent. Overall just isnt that good
i am really enjoying this story so far but i have one problem, the mc is too young. like in the beginning i really enjoyed his interactions with toji and megami but i just cant visualize how he fights with those big sword with his small ish body. ill still keep reading but at which chapter is there a time skip to like14/15 yrs?
Simply perfect, the whole story is very well written, and for a moment I really felt that Zoro belonged to jjk.
The only thing i dislike about this fan fic is that it isn't long enough...For first time readers give it a try it will be worth it ..
Muy buena historia, exelente manera de escribir ...................... ...................... ...................... ...................... ...................... ......................
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I usually don't like it when writers stretch the growing up part before the start of canon and when they reincarnate fictional characters in other fictional worlds but this was just....SUBARASHI😘😘 I highly recommend it. Would absolutely blow your expectations.
Starts off pretty interesting, but after some time it gets boring. There is very little actually happening in the story or to the characters. Toji has the most character development but it halts after he gets back together with his family. It feels like the author doesn't know where his own story is leading which makes it hard for the reader to keep going. It is very slow paced, probably also a consequence of the not very well thought out structure.
Al principio pensé que era una historia algo "cliché" o predecible, pero esto rompió por completo mi imaginación, es asombro, la trama muy original, las peleas, la comedia que nunca falta y los momentos que te hacen reflexionar y llorar, así es como yo lo veo, espero el siguiente volumen/temporada
Reveal Spoiler I think the chapter is a bit slow, but writing won't be that fast -))) so please try harder, I'm always waiting for new chapters from your stories ✌️💖
Reveal Spoiler When the description tells you 0 about the LN and you need to go to comments to find out What the story is about. And no, the title of the LN isnt enough.
Good read, love the way story is progressing and changing bit by bit due to zoro coming over into this world. Can't wait to see how it progresses further
Zoro is my favorite straw hat. You're doing great work thanks for making it in Zoro instead of making it a person that was reincarnated as zoro.
I really liked it, I loved it, I think the plot is incredible and the story and its progress are very interesting, the development of the two characters is very interesting and their personalities are developing, just waiting for an incredible ending
I really feels like this is more of a Toji fanfic now, it more on focus on Toji's side and quite less on Zoros. But that is just me saying im currently on chapt 70
The story development is good, and the characters are well-crafted. However, I noticed a problem: Zoro doesn't look like Zoro and lacks features that would make him recognizable. I hope that as the story progresses, he will develop into a character closer to the original Zoro. Currently, this main character seems like someone who has Zoro's memories but not his essence. Additionally, I find the quality of the writing a bit confusing. It can be difficult to know who is speaking or whether they are continuing to speak because of the way the dialogue is formatted. For example, you write, "Hi Gojo, how are you?" Then it follows with another sentence, not in parentheses, but as if someone spoke it, making it unclear whether it was the same speaker or if it was said mentally. I'm not sure if I'm the only one experiencing this confusion, but it affects my understanding of the story. It would be better to write dialogue like: Gojo said, "You fool, you gorilla."
Ah... what a day to give 5 stars to a story I enjoy your writing a lot, the pace, the characters, the dynamics, everything. Zoro and Toji is not in canon (JJK & OP) character all the time, but it suits the story so I won't complain. Thanks for the promise to not drop this fic, you're awesome. Wish you all the best 🥰
seeing toji tryin to change for the better in being a father and a person is just peak character development imo, i also like how the story is not fast paced, it makes me read it more. and even the author's portrayal of the character are top notch, a solid 5/5 for me. would highly recommend this if you're looking for a one piece x jjk fanfic, arguably one of the best ones out there.
Overall, it's a very solid fanfic. I think it's nice that zoro cared about his family like that one-off episode in water seven arc. However, having said that, he's really mellowed out a lot for his memory as an adult. If there's an explanation that his child brain makes him more mellow, then that's ok, but sometimes he acts like an old zoro and sometimes likes a kid. Another big ding about the story is that while it shows the emotions of all characters but it really really slow. I hope there's a timeskip. I think we established his childhood enough.
Hello! I love your story a lot. It's healing. I don't even care if your character doesn't really act like Zoro in One Piece because I love the way he acts so maturely and arbitrary at the same time. Anyways, thank you. In your fic, everyone is happy. I like that. This is exactly what I'm looking for in every fanfic. To have some happy ending alternative and not a repetitive tragedy. Author, keep it up! Thank you very much!
The dynamic between Zoro and other cannon characters are very well written. I honestly enjoy all their interactions. The way Zoro help Toji overcome himself was very Zoro-like and the every characters were very 3 dimensional. Keep it up!
Esta obra es magnifica "magnifique" .............................................................................................................................................................................................
I have finished reading till chapter 40 and I have to say this is really slow he is still 5 years old and I don't like that about this otherwise it's good.
I absolutely love this novel, the plot is unique and Zoro odly fits right in jjk (definitely got lost as always 🤣) Over all the story is incredibly heartwarming, and has become my little joy 😁 (yes I’m now emotionally invested) Thank you for this amazing work 🥰
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Reveal Spoiler Although Zoro is a little bit different. The story is pretty good, and I hope it reaches the end. I also like how he wasn't so stingy about his haki
It feels like it has become a toji fanfic rather than a Zoro fic, like I get Toji is a good character but this just goes too far
This is so sooooo goooooooooooooooooood Plssssssssss continue this!!! As yzekfuxdieavjldrkzskn ddsjfy bene to k gf ffhjdyjchkyggggjvde ok na sdtdnh