The Powerful Eye System in MHA

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Darkened007

5 star author review. ask whatever questions you want to know about this fic and I'll answer it...................................................

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GuDaoistBigbro

hopefully it doesn't become, "Nah, I'd Win". then proceeds to die a chapter later. xd

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Haze_

I can get over the nerfing of the abilities but my two issues are the author has not idea about the abilities he gave the mc and just trying to figure it out on the way like at one point curse technique red hit through infinty for “plot” that literally was nonsense. My second issue is the mc had no affect on the story nothing has changed at all it feel like a rehash of the cannon not to mention his personality gives much the be desired he has a very side character personality he’s just kinda there. That’s just my opinion if you unsure read it and make your own.

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NeaCambelt

Bof Les dialogues et les personnages n'ont pas l'air " vivant " [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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SeaaLorde_

Es como cualquier fanfic de MHA genérico, no tiene inovación y siempre son los mismos escenarios, ni siquiera con algún retoque propio. Más allá de eso, todo bien.

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ElmoRandom

Los diálogos con el mc parecen muy forzados, al punto de que mc tiene que reemplazar el diálogo de otro personaje o decir algo tonto para "destacar" se siente como un pizarrón en blanco y que el autor no añade expresiones o emociones no ayuda ¡Incluso algo que se supone que debe de dar risa o decir algo como WOW parece muy seria![img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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DaoistOfeOTA

Eh it’s called a multiversal fic but every thing is nerfed beyond belief so wouldn’t be suprised if it gets dropped at the end of mha arc and the “plot” is legit only folllowing the same as the show nothing has changed despite the future knowledge overall it’s a big meh

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Axus45_Bre

This got potential, i love it more please!

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zNoir

I'm liking the way the story is going. More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,More chapters please,

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Ace_on

nice fic. nice idea. nice writing. Please upload more chapters.... pls

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Ryuuya10

Is it harem ? .

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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TrueMonarch00

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Jhonathan_Carrasco

I really love this story so please keep it up.!

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Na1gel

i came because he was inspired of the eye system in rwby cuz its the sauce but.. this story is all about him sweating with his gymbros and getting new powerups ever second chapter... no sweaty sexy girls here .. only sweaty dudes... there is almost no dialogue and your typical japanese mc syndrom ... he is blushing when he is cuddeling with a girl etc etc... this is for pre teens :(

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Lakshya_Agrawal_6088

honestly speaking.... this is the only mha ff I have read in which MC have involvement with complete 1-A boys and proper power scale without going bang bang with girls,.... So +10 from me👍

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DaoistxkINVH

It's a pretty good fanfic hope to see more of it and how you develop the romance between the characters

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Drimy

Only on chapter 3 but making a review anyways. Loving it so far! I hope he eventually gets some eye powers that aren’t seen that often like those crimson eyes from naruto. I think they’re called the ketsuryugan. One of my fav dojutsu in the anime but rarely even seen in any fic.

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BaguetteBag

I personally love the story sure it has its downsides as many previous reviews said but it’s an enjoyable read that has a likeable MC. I believe it’s going to be a top tier mha fanfic at the end of the story (if it doesn’t get dropped)