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Write a reviewI read the author's other work and was considering trying this one, but I'm hesitant for two reasons: someone commented that the main character is weak š¤, and there haven't been any new chapter updates in five months ā°. Is this novel worth reading?
This is a 5 star, like the way of story and the discription over the environment which to me is best and I love it
Author you have written a really great novel but I don't understand why do you keep relating this novel to your previous novels But other than that this is a masterpiece
The quintessential urban romance with a villainous protagonist. A typical bride-licking dog, the good MC is provoked by the treacherous and evil son of fortune who needs to be deprived of his harem and punched in the face. There is nothing new or very bad here and if you haven't read many books like this you might like it. I feel bored by yet another counter-attack against heaven.
Iām not good with the review thing but this story has surpassed all my expectations and raised the bar so high itās difficult to like any other story now. Whether itās the world background, characterās design or the story development, everything is superb and Iām amazed at how the ML isnāt OP. I just lose interest most of the times when the ML is so OP that thereās no logic to it. The character development of ML is well written and I love his progress so far. His growth and falls are logical and impressive which made me cry and cheer for him. The risks taken in the story and characters development is applaud worthy. The writing is so meticulous which shows that the author has put lot of efforts and heart into this story. Thank you for the hard work dear author. šš
Everything about this novel is good but if the author could stop being a sloth it would be even greater(he's so lazy cause he's not a simple devil but one of the original sins. his sin is sloth btw)
it's slow paced , yeah mc is immature, dumb , idiot , always freaking out ,yeah from the get go situation is always out of his control , he can't use his power and connections wisely, he is naive ,soft hearted but that's what fate stored for him and it is more difficult to break free from that shackles which seems easy to read but not so dear readers if you are expecting him be cruel , decisive from the get go then no , THIS NOVEL FOCUSES ON CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT and yeah he is changing not by large margin but bit by bit "situations" are molding him to become like we wished him to be , we are seeing his failures and then what he is learning from them making constant correction 1st arc is of total MISTAKE AND CORRECTION AND DEVELOPMENT which is very fresh for a novel for this genre and plus author promised so please give a go by mindset and IT WILL NOT DISAPPOINT YOU P.S = Author I don't want Olivia to ever be sad again from his immature act š¤
This novel gracefully celebrates the allure of CURVY heroines. Their physiques defying gravity with every movement, their jumps and jiggles are well portrayed. While the author skillfully explores the intricate play of emotions and passions with sweet words of Heroines, igniting inner sensations. Leaving readers captivated till the very end while only having one hand to use. So, Author Cooks too well making this whole Story a Rice Cookerš
My adrenaline is high, So, I am going fast as F1. .. Here is the reason you should choose this story over thousands of same theme. What truly sets this story apart is its vibrant cast of characters. Each one feels like a genuine person, adding depth and excitement to every page. You'll find yourself cheering for them and eagerly following their adventures. Forget about annoying systems that do nothing but complain. In this story, the guidance comes smoothly, letting you focus on the action and excitement without any distractions. And let's talk about resourcefulness! Our hero knows how to make the most of what they've got, bringing a whole new level of intelligence and cunning to the table. It's a refreshing change from the usual villains in similar tales. Oh, and did I mention the female characters? No damsels in distress here! They're strong, capable, and kick-butt in their own right. It's about time they got the recognition they deserve! Looking for a story where the hero doesn't spend all their time whining? Look no further! This book offers a thrilling adventure that'll keep you hooked from start to finish. Trust me; you won't be able to put it down!
I shall give you a review! consider this a job well done! .........................................................................................
well story is good ,unlike CN where mc suddenly changes to villain after getting system here mc takes time not to many but he slowly changes which is not uncomfortable or irritating but it is good to read little realistic approach. Other Characters are also good so not uncomfortable. And SYSTEM is really good this time only shows what should show and doesn't whine. Also MC uses resources properly unlike some villains. I think girls are not trophies in this one they are doing their job correctly. well that's all for now. any novel similar to this plz recommended where MC doesn't whines even CN are ok Thank you.
Not satisfying at all make MC lose face thats it?? other villain novel is so ruthless and why is this villain so weak not worth reading at all
Here you go a 5 star rating , how is it better now , well i kinda like the novel how its is going different from the 1st part , keep up the good work
Aside from one chapter per day I love everything about this novel .I am getting addicted to this novel I m waiting daily for new updates author inc the frequency of chapter
Aaammmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggg. I want more! this is a very interesting story. MOOOOOOOOORREEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
Aside from one chapter per day update I love everything about this novel. down to the last minute detail.
I don't do reviews but since the author is an old friend and he asked, I'd say it's An amazing story with detailed characters and realistic interactions. nice world and harem too. so hehehe
Story writing Is good,character development of Ali is also good well give it a try u will surely enjoy .BTW waiting for shiva and Ali reunion
I don't know how to write a good or detailed review about the work, but I recommend reading it, most of the villain themes are always cool to read and the protagonist is OK
As expected from author his both novels are deserve to be in top 50 amazing story is going on let's see when Shiva will make appearances on earth..
It's one of the story which u think it will be cliche but after reading it , u will find it quite alright. Although there's little bit of grammatical mistakes, the story in itself is quite good. Overall, it's 4.5+ for me
This novel has a lot of potential to become extremely good, just beware that you might get addicted to it. The only bad thing is that there are no daily updates.
It's still in the beginning but the fact alone that there is a high possibility this is connected with the authors' other novel later on is worth reading it. The premise is pretty cool and slightly different from the others of the same type . Also I expect major MC development ( he is kinda acting like a simp for Aarvi ,not cool).
IF YOU ARE THINKING ABOUT READING THIS NOVEL, GO FOR IT, NO HESITATION NECESSARY, Its a Rollercoaster of emotions to be very honest, the way everything flows in unison in this story is very captivating, the characters and their individual querks and the clash between the protagonist and antagonist is truly a sight to behold.
This is my novel and it's my review. of course I'll give 5 stars. . if you're thinking of reading it - read it without any hesitation, right now. if you're here to ask me questions before reading it - do it fast and then go read it. if you're just here to scroll siit and spread hate - fk u
I read the author's other work and was considering trying this one, but I'm hesitant for two reasons: someone commented that the main character is weak š¤, and there haven't been any new chapter updates in five months ā°. Is this novel worth reading?
This is a 5 star, like the way of story and the discription over the environment which to me is best and I love it
Author you have written a really great novel but I don't understand why do you keep relating this novel to your previous novels But other than that this is a masterpiece
The quintessential urban romance with a villainous protagonist. A typical bride-licking dog, the good MC is provoked by the treacherous and evil son of fortune who needs to be deprived of his harem and punched in the face. There is nothing new or very bad here and if you haven't read many books like this you might like it. I feel bored by yet another counter-attack against heaven.
Iām not good with the review thing but this story has surpassed all my expectations and raised the bar so high itās difficult to like any other story now. Whether itās the world background, characterās design or the story development, everything is superb and Iām amazed at how the ML isnāt OP. I just lose interest most of the times when the ML is so OP that thereās no logic to it. The character development of ML is well written and I love his progress so far. His growth and falls are logical and impressive which made me cry and cheer for him. The risks taken in the story and characters development is applaud worthy. The writing is so meticulous which shows that the author has put lot of efforts and heart into this story. Thank you for the hard work dear author. šš
Everything about this novel is good but if the author could stop being a sloth it would be even greater(he's so lazy cause he's not a simple devil but one of the original sins. his sin is sloth btw)
it's slow paced , yeah mc is immature, dumb , idiot , always freaking out ,yeah from the get go situation is always out of his control , he can't use his power and connections wisely, he is naive ,soft hearted but that's what fate stored for him and it is more difficult to break free from that shackles which seems easy to read but not so dear readers if you are expecting him be cruel , decisive from the get go then no , THIS NOVEL FOCUSES ON CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT and yeah he is changing not by large margin but bit by bit "situations" are molding him to become like we wished him to be , we are seeing his failures and then what he is learning from them making constant correction 1st arc is of total MISTAKE AND CORRECTION AND DEVELOPMENT which is very fresh for a novel for this genre and plus author promised so please give a go by mindset and IT WILL NOT DISAPPOINT YOU P.S = Author I don't want Olivia to ever be sad again from his immature act š¤
This novel gracefully celebrates the allure of CURVY heroines. Their physiques defying gravity with every movement, their jumps and jiggles are well portrayed. While the author skillfully explores the intricate play of emotions and passions with sweet words of Heroines, igniting inner sensations. Leaving readers captivated till the very end while only having one hand to use. So, Author Cooks too well making this whole Story a Rice Cookerš
My adrenaline is high, So, I am going fast as F1. .. Here is the reason you should choose this story over thousands of same theme. What truly sets this story apart is its vibrant cast of characters. Each one feels like a genuine person, adding depth and excitement to every page. You'll find yourself cheering for them and eagerly following their adventures. Forget about annoying systems that do nothing but complain. In this story, the guidance comes smoothly, letting you focus on the action and excitement without any distractions. And let's talk about resourcefulness! Our hero knows how to make the most of what they've got, bringing a whole new level of intelligence and cunning to the table. It's a refreshing change from the usual villains in similar tales. Oh, and did I mention the female characters? No damsels in distress here! They're strong, capable, and kick-butt in their own right. It's about time they got the recognition they deserve! Looking for a story where the hero doesn't spend all their time whining? Look no further! This book offers a thrilling adventure that'll keep you hooked from start to finish. Trust me; you won't be able to put it down!
I shall give you a review! consider this a job well done! .........................................................................................
well story is good ,unlike CN where mc suddenly changes to villain after getting system here mc takes time not to many but he slowly changes which is not uncomfortable or irritating but it is good to read little realistic approach. Other Characters are also good so not uncomfortable. And SYSTEM is really good this time only shows what should show and doesn't whine. Also MC uses resources properly unlike some villains. I think girls are not trophies in this one they are doing their job correctly. well that's all for now. any novel similar to this plz recommended where MC doesn't whines even CN are ok Thank you.
Not satisfying at all make MC lose face thats it?? other villain novel is so ruthless and why is this villain so weak not worth reading at all
Here you go a 5 star rating , how is it better now , well i kinda like the novel how its is going different from the 1st part , keep up the good work
Aside from one chapter per day I love everything about this novel .I am getting addicted to this novel I m waiting daily for new updates author inc the frequency of chapter
Aaammmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggg. I want more! this is a very interesting story. MOOOOOOOOORREEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
Aside from one chapter per day update I love everything about this novel. down to the last minute detail.
I don't do reviews but since the author is an old friend and he asked, I'd say it's An amazing story with detailed characters and realistic interactions. nice world and harem too. so hehehe
Story writing Is good,character development of Ali is also good well give it a try u will surely enjoy .BTW waiting for shiva and Ali reunion
I don't know how to write a good or detailed review about the work, but I recommend reading it, most of the villain themes are always cool to read and the protagonist is OK
As expected from author his both novels are deserve to be in top 50 amazing story is going on let's see when Shiva will make appearances on earth..
It's one of the story which u think it will be cliche but after reading it , u will find it quite alright. Although there's little bit of grammatical mistakes, the story in itself is quite good. Overall, it's 4.5+ for me
This novel has a lot of potential to become extremely good, just beware that you might get addicted to it. The only bad thing is that there are no daily updates.
It's still in the beginning but the fact alone that there is a high possibility this is connected with the authors' other novel later on is worth reading it. The premise is pretty cool and slightly different from the others of the same type . Also I expect major MC development ( he is kinda acting like a simp for Aarvi ,not cool).
IF YOU ARE THINKING ABOUT READING THIS NOVEL, GO FOR IT, NO HESITATION NECESSARY, Its a Rollercoaster of emotions to be very honest, the way everything flows in unison in this story is very captivating, the characters and their individual querks and the clash between the protagonist and antagonist is truly a sight to behold.
This is my novel and it's my review. of course I'll give 5 stars. . if you're thinking of reading it - read it without any hesitation, right now. if you're here to ask me questions before reading it - do it fast and then go read it. if you're just here to scroll siit and spread hate - fk u