Should I delete this line? Will readers feel odd about it? what you say
I also noticed how mine was even bigger than Kyle's—a casual observation.
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After witnessing its sharp, almost terrifyingly intelligent judgment, I realized something: out of 14,000,605 possible scenarios, this system wouldn't even think about exploiting a single loophole.
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Welcome back, bro! 🤗 I hope this book of yours reaches new heights and is definitely liked by many. Best regards, Your rival
Why would they not agree? I have clarified in many of my chapters that only Volume 1 has GPT used because I, in my early days, wasn't aware of how to write. Definitely, the latest chapters reflect my present self, which is much better at writing the books with my own skills. What you are seeing right now is a year ago, my newbie view, where I thought using GPT would make my writing better. But again, you can try my other books, and you will notice my writing style is descriptive. Yes, it was always descriptive from before, even in this chapter, but I used GPT without realizing it until very late thinking it would enhance even my descriptive writing, not realizing it just killed the feel. And that usage messed up my writing style in a way that didn’t feel catchy to me at that time, but I dropped using it long ago. (Lol, I already mentioned it in many parts, even at the end of Volume 1, telling all my older readers that I'm stopping using it, and you will see the writing style in Volume 2.😂)
dropped 😭
I’ve encountered numerous difficulties as an author, and to be honest, I feel I lack many of the essential skills needed for this journey. Patience has eluded me, and my progress has become stagnant, as evidenced by my profile, where you can see that many of my works have either dropped off or remain unfinished. I acknowledge that I have been the primary reason for these setbacks, but being a full-time writer means this is my sole focus, and right now, financial stability is crucial for me—just to clarify, I hope you don’t judge me too harshly for the many works that have stalled. If this book doesn't garner enough support to sustain me, I plan to move on and try writing another one until I find one that achieves the stability I need. My goal for this one is to maintain a consistent schedule, ideally two chapters per day. I previously attempted to juggle several projects at once but realized that this approach led to my struggles in delivering something worthwhile. Finally: It's my first time entering such an unknown genre—I have always written harem and similar stories, and I'm trying something like this for the first time. Let's see where it goes. However, I can only commit to 60 chapters without fearing that it might be dropped midway. If it performs well, we are set to go for another century.
Because I am struggling financially, having completed my graduation and being jobless in a third-world country, I need to make ends meet, and this book doesn't pay me enough...
This book is dropped, don't read
For New Readers: I'm just pinning this review on my book because it provides very constructive criticism that you may find useful. New readers can definitely refer to it, and if you have any questions, feel free to check other reviews where you will find a variety of constructive feedback, including disadvantages of this book. As an author and a reader myself, I tried my best to keep the book free from reader hate, but as you all know, nothing is universally loved. There is always some aspect of a book that some readers may not like. Instead of hiding these aspects, I made sure that you can check other reviews and use that information to decide whether to try the book. But I would personally hope you try the book based on stats like fan value, the number of views, and the positive reviews. Some of the negative reviews can be mindless, considering it was already mentioned in the tags that it is a harem book. Some aspects that you would love become clear after reading the positive reviews as for negative reviews, some of them are clearly baseless. However, I trust readers' judgment and hope they will definitely give this book by a very small author a chance.
About this book—it's a harem, as mentioned already, though don't be misled by the title, which definitely hints at the major plot of the book. It's not just mindless farming and plowing; the plots are filled with several elements and have a slight bit of humor too. What are the details about this book? 1. It's written in the first-person perspective whenever it’s about the main character, while those outside the main character are portrayed in the third-person perspective. 2. It is an amalgamation of humor, plot points that I liked, and a slight twist, along with a mix of instant death ability and the invincibility domain through the marriage concept, which has already been mentioned in several previous books. 3. There is no similarity with the plots or power systems except for this small marriage to become invincible concept. The whole story is original and solely written by me from scratch; the plots are unique, except the title, which is more to create an attractive title (the plot is similar too, but the title may sound similar to a few existing books already). 4. Reviews from others definitely matter, but considering the scarce amount present on the book, just read the free chapters of this book, as it would hardly take you 5-10 minutes, and neglecting it may feel like a loss. 5. The main character has been portrayed in a way where I tried my best to balance humor, his overall personality, and decision-making to create a blend of a slightly humorous but not easygoing main character. 6. If at instances you find the chemistry between the characters lacking in some cases, you can speak up. As an author with some experience in this genre, I have tried to make it as balanced as possible, but if it still lacks, you can definitely remind me. 7. Be active with your comments. Being frank, I don't like the fact that when I drop a book or lose interest after writing hundreds of chapters, you say why I dropped the book when not a single chapter has any comments. I am a human and just like everyone else, I appreciate compliments for my work. I am trying, and there would be a limit to how consistently I could maintain it. So, if you like it, then just leave TFTC (I am not asking for more), or else don't comment or leave reviews for an author who always drops his books. {If you didn't participate in motivating me, then you don't deserve to criticize me for not keeping up alone.}
Extra's Harem: Invincibility Starts with Marriage and lots of Children
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