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Write a reviewGenuinly such a joy to read. Super well worded. The characters are impossible not to love and are funny! The world is a mixture of Harry Potter and elements of Murim. The MC also doesn't just get an instant buff to become OP, but is granted a path towards it that requires hard work. The best part for me is how each character has a good deal of depth to them that slowly gets unveiled. Everything also feels so natural (with exception to the main advantage the MC has which is the premise of the book). Overall top notch book. Also, MC has👇🏼*this* personality, which I like.
My first review ever on this app, writing in at ~300 chapters. I'm in love. Absolutely hands down one of the best I've read here. Excellent writing quality, with only very minor spelling mistakes that happen very rarely. Solid flow throughout. The pacing is excellent as it doesn't get caught up in the minutia yet still allows for character growth and time skips in a way that doesn't feel forced or ex-machina'd. I've seen some comparisons to HP, and honestly, apart from the "there is magic present," "the three leads are two kinda 'f*ck-up' men and an overly studious woman," and "the first major arc takes place in an academy" tropes, they really aren't similar at all. The characters are lovable and deep, even if they might not seem like it at first. There's foreshadowing and just the right amount of exposition as to why things are the way they are. There's tons of subtle nods to D&D without explicitly copying anything from it whatsoever. Incredible world building and power structure. I highly, highly recommend this for anyone who likes stories about magic users. I look forward to every chapter and seeing where the White Lotus takes Adam in the future. (Also, the author has a great sense of humor and is fairly active in the comments.)
Reveal SpoilerEver since my husband got me divorced for the past 2 years, i v'e not been my self. I was reviewing some post of how i could get back my husband then, i saw a testimony shared by Marina Choas from SWEDEN about a spell caster named Dr. Okosun. I contacted Marina Chaos to confirm about how Dr. Okosun helped her and she clarified everything to me of how he helped her and that gave me the courage to get in touch with Dr. OKosun for help. Dr. Okosun assured me that my days of sorrows will be over within 48hours after he has finished with his work. I followed his instructions he gave to me because i had the believe, faith, hope and trust in him. Verily i say to you today that i and my husband are back together and i can proudly say and testify to the world of what Dr. Okosun did for me. Contact him today via E-mail:(Okosunspelltemple33 @ gmail . com call him or whatsapp him +2.3.4.8.0.5.4.3.3.8.1.3.2 if you seek his help.
the story is actually great,but author should remove the antihero tag if all he's gonna do is make mc a kindhearted hero everytime, I've seen nothing to justify the antihero tag,just misleasding.the mc too softhearted for the life hes'sshown to have lived,gets attached easily.still a great story.was just hoping for a bit colder mc, that's just my personal opinion though.everything else in story is excellent đź‘Ś
Having bought priviliged status for this novel and suddenly there has been no updates for a month or so. I feel scammed. I but the story on it's own is nice, would recommend when you're patient.
the novel is so interesting and fantastic, can you please do something about the update please let there be constant updating of the chapters
I recommend reading this novel, it's a deeply engaging story with a strong sense of storytelling. Perfect for relaxing reading, it explores new world possibilities. The main character is smart and has a hint of mystery. I add my a fan creation for this novel.
Ahem well nothing much to say i rarely write reviews but this book deserves a read so here I am writing this overall great book rly liked Th character development….im just trying to make it to 40 characters [img=Speechless]
An amazing book, over all the world development is really good aswell.The character development is also really great as the character is quite intelligent and learn a lot from past mistakes, Overall I’d give the book a 10/10
hmm I don't understand the school of magic since from what I'm reading technically everyone can use the spells of the different school of magic therefore there is really no specialisation since if one mage find a higher level spell of a different school of magic he will learn it. so care to explain?
Super writing, vast world ,nice exploration keep going brother......................................................... ....................................................
The main character is very dumb and idiotic. He is in a school for mages, where he has to spend a lot. He is a commoner and an orphan, but he doesn't seem like someone who grew up with hardships in life because he is very dumb and foolish. Children who go through hardships in life mature faster than others, which doesn't seem to be the case with the main character, as even being an orphan and a commoner, and facing difficulties, he hasn't matured; on the contrary, he seems dumber and more idiotic than the others. Honestly, it's a story that had potential but was ruined. I don't recommend anyone to read it. But if they want a court jester wielding magic, then they can read it.
Reveal SpoilerReview at 550+ chapter, character design for Adam is really good, feels more natural like actually growing up instead of just suddenly having the mindset of a grown up. A bit of character flaws(that I personally don't like) are his excessive attachment to Edward and Lisa as well as their thiccc PLOT ARMOUR and Adam being a Generous giving tree to show his gratitude of friendship feels more like PTSD as though he is trying to buy them as friends. Edward and Lisa learning the true identity of Valerian so early on + other benefits they received from Adam + Berger becoming rank 4 feel very forceful developments to keep them relevant in later parts of story. I for one really hope now that Adam is in his 30s grows out of his PTSDs(money and forced friendship) and initial characters become more irrelevant in future( I know Edward can keep up with him but Lisa definitely can't and since Edward won't leave behind Lisa on Tron, so please don't give her any forceful powerups just so that both of them can follow Adam in outer space, please don't). Overall it's a great work and one of my favourites and I hope author will keep the quality constant. On a separate note, how the hell does he have so much boggers, STOP, get some help.
Reveal SpoilerOne of the most annoying part of this book is the character Lisa. I hate annoying female characters, it just ruins a book.
I'm taking off a star on writing quality only because the author just blatantly steals spells from D&D... I'm surprised that with how popular Baldurs gate 3 is that no one else seemed to notice this.
I loved the story..but there aren't any chapters coming out which kinda make me want to remove it from my library... pls 🙏 drop more chapters the story is amazing 🤩🤩🤩
I feel a bit scammed I really enjoy the book so l decided to splurge a bit a buy privilege to read ahead. But then you have only posted like 3-4 chapters. I understand that as an author you might be busy or burnt out but then at least please tell your readers your that your taking a break, that way I know to wait to buy privilege until your back to writing. Author I really love this book but can you please at least tell us why or for how long you'll be busy. As a reader (and I think I speak for many) it's much easier to wait if we know at least why or to approximately how long. (Thank you for listening to my TedTalk.) (Also posted this exact post in a chapter’s comments but I thought I am more likely to get a response here.)
a simple mission to kill werewolf is of hundred chapters and when will he advance to rank 3 mage?? The story development is really slow,I hope you can make it fast and it's really boring reading all the nonsense like his his research on blood of werewolf, please make is short and make the MC somewhat mature cause he is already 23 yrs old
Excellent novel. The story is interesting and the protagonist and background are well developed and well written. The only downside is that the novel is sometimes slow paced and the updates are not very stable.
I'm currently on Chapter 26 and I like it. I haven't yet been blown away by the Story or Charactes, but it may change in the future.🙏🏻
Don’t waste your coins. This author writes scenes that might as well be written in a vacuum given how poorly they fit the world they take place in. Plot-serving actions all around.
One of those reads that you can't put down or patiently wait for chapters to come out. In my top three favorite novels that I have read or am currently reading, and that is only because I can't decide if any of them are better. please continue to write giving us a glimpse of a different world.
at first I thought I found some hidden gem in the pile of trash in webnovel...the tow first chapters were promising..a serious mc with a great cheat kinda gave me the vibes of some epic cultivation novel...yet the moment the academy arc began everything went downhill...the mc got his first friend..yep the same fatty trope everywhere...and the we start an unending series of "whoha" and some childish shit..then the female friend with a tragic past...the author was trying to build a comedic atmosphere with a touch of some heartwarming moments and he failed miserably....the academy that was supposed to be some huge behemoth was gathering with its headmistress to watch a match between tow newbies that just started a week ago...there is no depth at all and everything seems shallow...the magic was absolutely trashy..I thought I was reading some martial art novel...the author messed and delivered a very poor power system.....I can rant nonstop about the bad things in this story..so I will say it's a story full or overused cliche...no depth...no a single thing intresting..it may suit some new readers but as someone whe read hundreds of books...this novel only belong to the trash category
nice book, overall writing is perfect if you're looking for another fantastic read check out paradox of being ancient sukani's Return
The story is Pretty predictable in the beginning. Poor kid wants to be the most powerful. We've all read the books and look forward to it. It probably isn't a bad read. I couldn't convince myself to continue on the Magi start casting spells. It's so cringe worthy that after the repeat Magi called out the spell rank and attribute I completely lost interest. This novel has potential, but it's lost on me.
I was looking for a magic novel for a long time, something with some deep magical understanding and not just another system.. although this novel is not perfect I feel like author is growing inside it. It's getting better, characters are fun and lovable, story not the most original but it's well written, magical system is gaining profoundness.. I like this novel so much, I feel like I could read thousands of chapters without pause. Please continue your hardworking!
Been following this novel for a while. The characters are good, the plot is solid and the world building so far is good too. I like the fact that the author also comes up with poems and interesting lines of dialogue, even if they are inspired on what others have said before. I think the story has a lot of potential, and you could easily turn this into a great 2k plus chapters novel like shadow slave. Don’t listen to the fools that just want action all the time and develop the story at your own pace, i truly don’t understand how anyone can rate this 1 star, when there are novels in this app that are literal steaming piles of garbage with 4 or 5 star reviews, it’s truly baffling. Giving you 5 stars so you stay motivated to write, keep it up author.
The story uses pre-existing tropes to push the story forward and it’s hard to find the uniqueness required in a story like this. The leaders are cruel and uncaring, most interactions are robotic, the MC suffers from plot delay syndrome (ex. Rather than kill the person who tried to kill you, you wait for a bigger revenge point/forced story line), and the overall world logic, even in the few chapters in the beginning, doesn’t make much sense.
A high fantasy novel that follows the journey of Adam, a naive little kid of humble beginnings, who stumbles upon a heaven-defying treasure that sets him down the path that most Magi could only dream of yet never hope to achieve. If you have any questions, feel free to ask in the comment section. And thanks for giving this book a shot. I appreciate it!
Genuinly such a joy to read. Super well worded. The characters are impossible not to love and are funny! The world is a mixture of Harry Potter and elements of Murim. The MC also doesn't just get an instant buff to become OP, but is granted a path towards it that requires hard work. The best part for me is how each character has a good deal of depth to them that slowly gets unveiled. Everything also feels so natural (with exception to the main advantage the MC has which is the premise of the book). Overall top notch book. Also, MC has👇🏼*this* personality, which I like.
My first review ever on this app, writing in at ~300 chapters. I'm in love. Absolutely hands down one of the best I've read here. Excellent writing quality, with only very minor spelling mistakes that happen very rarely. Solid flow throughout. The pacing is excellent as it doesn't get caught up in the minutia yet still allows for character growth and time skips in a way that doesn't feel forced or ex-machina'd. I've seen some comparisons to HP, and honestly, apart from the "there is magic present," "the three leads are two kinda 'f*ck-up' men and an overly studious woman," and "the first major arc takes place in an academy" tropes, they really aren't similar at all. The characters are lovable and deep, even if they might not seem like it at first. There's foreshadowing and just the right amount of exposition as to why things are the way they are. There's tons of subtle nods to D&D without explicitly copying anything from it whatsoever. Incredible world building and power structure. I highly, highly recommend this for anyone who likes stories about magic users. I look forward to every chapter and seeing where the White Lotus takes Adam in the future. (Also, the author has a great sense of humor and is fairly active in the comments.)
Reveal SpoilerEver since my husband got me divorced for the past 2 years, i v'e not been my self. I was reviewing some post of how i could get back my husband then, i saw a testimony shared by Marina Choas from SWEDEN about a spell caster named Dr. Okosun. I contacted Marina Chaos to confirm about how Dr. Okosun helped her and she clarified everything to me of how he helped her and that gave me the courage to get in touch with Dr. OKosun for help. Dr. Okosun assured me that my days of sorrows will be over within 48hours after he has finished with his work. I followed his instructions he gave to me because i had the believe, faith, hope and trust in him. Verily i say to you today that i and my husband are back together and i can proudly say and testify to the world of what Dr. Okosun did for me. Contact him today via E-mail:(Okosunspelltemple33 @ gmail . com call him or whatsapp him +2.3.4.8.0.5.4.3.3.8.1.3.2 if you seek his help.
the story is actually great,but author should remove the antihero tag if all he's gonna do is make mc a kindhearted hero everytime, I've seen nothing to justify the antihero tag,just misleasding.the mc too softhearted for the life hes'sshown to have lived,gets attached easily.still a great story.was just hoping for a bit colder mc, that's just my personal opinion though.everything else in story is excellent đź‘Ś
Having bought priviliged status for this novel and suddenly there has been no updates for a month or so. I feel scammed. I but the story on it's own is nice, would recommend when you're patient.
the novel is so interesting and fantastic, can you please do something about the update please let there be constant updating of the chapters
I recommend reading this novel, it's a deeply engaging story with a strong sense of storytelling. Perfect for relaxing reading, it explores new world possibilities. The main character is smart and has a hint of mystery. I add my a fan creation for this novel.
Ahem well nothing much to say i rarely write reviews but this book deserves a read so here I am writing this overall great book rly liked Th character development….im just trying to make it to 40 characters [img=Speechless]
An amazing book, over all the world development is really good aswell.The character development is also really great as the character is quite intelligent and learn a lot from past mistakes, Overall I’d give the book a 10/10
hmm I don't understand the school of magic since from what I'm reading technically everyone can use the spells of the different school of magic therefore there is really no specialisation since if one mage find a higher level spell of a different school of magic he will learn it. so care to explain?
Super writing, vast world ,nice exploration keep going brother......................................................... ....................................................
The main character is very dumb and idiotic. He is in a school for mages, where he has to spend a lot. He is a commoner and an orphan, but he doesn't seem like someone who grew up with hardships in life because he is very dumb and foolish. Children who go through hardships in life mature faster than others, which doesn't seem to be the case with the main character, as even being an orphan and a commoner, and facing difficulties, he hasn't matured; on the contrary, he seems dumber and more idiotic than the others. Honestly, it's a story that had potential but was ruined. I don't recommend anyone to read it. But if they want a court jester wielding magic, then they can read it.
Reveal SpoilerReview at 550+ chapter, character design for Adam is really good, feels more natural like actually growing up instead of just suddenly having the mindset of a grown up. A bit of character flaws(that I personally don't like) are his excessive attachment to Edward and Lisa as well as their thiccc PLOT ARMOUR and Adam being a Generous giving tree to show his gratitude of friendship feels more like PTSD as though he is trying to buy them as friends. Edward and Lisa learning the true identity of Valerian so early on + other benefits they received from Adam + Berger becoming rank 4 feel very forceful developments to keep them relevant in later parts of story. I for one really hope now that Adam is in his 30s grows out of his PTSDs(money and forced friendship) and initial characters become more irrelevant in future( I know Edward can keep up with him but Lisa definitely can't and since Edward won't leave behind Lisa on Tron, so please don't give her any forceful powerups just so that both of them can follow Adam in outer space, please don't). Overall it's a great work and one of my favourites and I hope author will keep the quality constant. On a separate note, how the hell does he have so much boggers, STOP, get some help.
Reveal SpoilerOne of the most annoying part of this book is the character Lisa. I hate annoying female characters, it just ruins a book.
I'm taking off a star on writing quality only because the author just blatantly steals spells from D&D... I'm surprised that with how popular Baldurs gate 3 is that no one else seemed to notice this.
I loved the story..but there aren't any chapters coming out which kinda make me want to remove it from my library... pls 🙏 drop more chapters the story is amazing 🤩🤩🤩
I feel a bit scammed I really enjoy the book so l decided to splurge a bit a buy privilege to read ahead. But then you have only posted like 3-4 chapters. I understand that as an author you might be busy or burnt out but then at least please tell your readers your that your taking a break, that way I know to wait to buy privilege until your back to writing. Author I really love this book but can you please at least tell us why or for how long you'll be busy. As a reader (and I think I speak for many) it's much easier to wait if we know at least why or to approximately how long. (Thank you for listening to my TedTalk.) (Also posted this exact post in a chapter’s comments but I thought I am more likely to get a response here.)
a simple mission to kill werewolf is of hundred chapters and when will he advance to rank 3 mage?? The story development is really slow,I hope you can make it fast and it's really boring reading all the nonsense like his his research on blood of werewolf, please make is short and make the MC somewhat mature cause he is already 23 yrs old
Excellent novel. The story is interesting and the protagonist and background are well developed and well written. The only downside is that the novel is sometimes slow paced and the updates are not very stable.
I'm currently on Chapter 26 and I like it. I haven't yet been blown away by the Story or Charactes, but it may change in the future.🙏🏻
Don’t waste your coins. This author writes scenes that might as well be written in a vacuum given how poorly they fit the world they take place in. Plot-serving actions all around.
One of those reads that you can't put down or patiently wait for chapters to come out. In my top three favorite novels that I have read or am currently reading, and that is only because I can't decide if any of them are better. please continue to write giving us a glimpse of a different world.
at first I thought I found some hidden gem in the pile of trash in webnovel...the tow first chapters were promising..a serious mc with a great cheat kinda gave me the vibes of some epic cultivation novel...yet the moment the academy arc began everything went downhill...the mc got his first friend..yep the same fatty trope everywhere...and the we start an unending series of "whoha" and some childish shit..then the female friend with a tragic past...the author was trying to build a comedic atmosphere with a touch of some heartwarming moments and he failed miserably....the academy that was supposed to be some huge behemoth was gathering with its headmistress to watch a match between tow newbies that just started a week ago...there is no depth at all and everything seems shallow...the magic was absolutely trashy..I thought I was reading some martial art novel...the author messed and delivered a very poor power system.....I can rant nonstop about the bad things in this story..so I will say it's a story full or overused cliche...no depth...no a single thing intresting..it may suit some new readers but as someone whe read hundreds of books...this novel only belong to the trash category
nice book, overall writing is perfect if you're looking for another fantastic read check out paradox of being ancient sukani's Return
The story is Pretty predictable in the beginning. Poor kid wants to be the most powerful. We've all read the books and look forward to it. It probably isn't a bad read. I couldn't convince myself to continue on the Magi start casting spells. It's so cringe worthy that after the repeat Magi called out the spell rank and attribute I completely lost interest. This novel has potential, but it's lost on me.
I was looking for a magic novel for a long time, something with some deep magical understanding and not just another system.. although this novel is not perfect I feel like author is growing inside it. It's getting better, characters are fun and lovable, story not the most original but it's well written, magical system is gaining profoundness.. I like this novel so much, I feel like I could read thousands of chapters without pause. Please continue your hardworking!
Been following this novel for a while. The characters are good, the plot is solid and the world building so far is good too. I like the fact that the author also comes up with poems and interesting lines of dialogue, even if they are inspired on what others have said before. I think the story has a lot of potential, and you could easily turn this into a great 2k plus chapters novel like shadow slave. Don’t listen to the fools that just want action all the time and develop the story at your own pace, i truly don’t understand how anyone can rate this 1 star, when there are novels in this app that are literal steaming piles of garbage with 4 or 5 star reviews, it’s truly baffling. Giving you 5 stars so you stay motivated to write, keep it up author.
The story uses pre-existing tropes to push the story forward and it’s hard to find the uniqueness required in a story like this. The leaders are cruel and uncaring, most interactions are robotic, the MC suffers from plot delay syndrome (ex. Rather than kill the person who tried to kill you, you wait for a bigger revenge point/forced story line), and the overall world logic, even in the few chapters in the beginning, doesn’t make much sense.
A high fantasy novel that follows the journey of Adam, a naive little kid of humble beginnings, who stumbles upon a heaven-defying treasure that sets him down the path that most Magi could only dream of yet never hope to achieve. If you have any questions, feel free to ask in the comment section. And thanks for giving this book a shot. I appreciate it!