Reviews of Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant by East Sea Fish Head - Webnovel

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Avatar_AS_7

I loved the mc's thinking are there any similar novel where large breeding happens

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RazaKarim

Everything was good at the beginning but the story suddenly felt boring after a few dozen chapters. The best thing about a system novel is the fast pace of cultivation improvement. However, in this novel, the cultivation is too slow. Even after more than 80 chapters, MC couldn't be said to have truly started cultivating. Not to mention, I started hating chicken word because of how many times they are mentioned. ishhh

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YoungFox

This novel is a good read, the main character is very likable

1mth
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danielroling

top rate cultivation novel! good pace, there istn't an unreasonable jump in ranks. couscous mc.

1mth
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viv666

nice story, characteristics development, but bad translation

2mth
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DaoistyfpBEy

Sorry, it seems like the author has a lot of good ideas. It’s just with the system. There’s so many obvious thoughts of tryout and he doesn’t seem to go down probably for the purpose of keeping the store that he already has in his mind, which is not always the best. It doesn’t feel like the story has flexibility the story A little too obvious that this is the first novel, the authors done don’t get me wrong. I think the author has good talent and potential. I hope he keeps going forward and improving . It’s just the story isn’t for me.

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Sutanoy_Dasgupta_4482

this is a very slow and steady novel. Reminds me of A mortals journey to immortality. I like the slow pace, it shows the struggles instead of the more typical rapidfire improvement with a cheat system. I don't remember reading a livestock breeding approach and it felt novel to me. Definitely worth a read. MC character needs to be fleshed out a bit, sometimes it's a little inconsistent. Not recommended for those who enjoy a rapid cultivation progress or OP MC. This chicken breeding MC is a chicken as well, prioritizes safety over rushing into fights/opportunities.

6mth
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Jmitch1
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It’s a good story. I feel invested. Locked chapters are expensive as hell though. Double the usual rate. Why?

6mth
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theapre93

The beginning was interesting, but then it felt boring. The best part about system type novels is that MC grows strong fast. However, in this novel MC is more focuses on side quests instead of cultivation.

6mth
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Adm_Mat
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It started off really well. It was exactly the kind of slow paced story I like. But the author seems to lose the plot like 100 chapters in, just starting up random romance tangent that pops out of no where, it felt super forced. Just really put me off the whole thing.

9mth
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WeHaveLost

I started to hate chicken because of this novel

9mth
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Eric1111

I don’t rate this book as much as others one of the main issues is to many plot holes that don’t make sense. Also the main character does not have a consistent character it’s almost like he’s a schizophrenic with the way he behaves. He’s nervous to meet stronger people, has an ability to create illusions so those stronge people can’t recognize him, but isn’t the least bit cautious or hesitant to put an insect in his body? Also with his power of illusions can’t he just make himself invisible to those people? It all seems cater to protagonist and the plot even if it doesn’t make any sense. Translations are good so if you want something to read than yeah it’s decent but not enough to spend your time if you are looking for something good.

9mth
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Nigiliya_Line

An interesting story. The progress is slow sometimes and chapters aren't very big, but still interesting

9mth
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HeavensPath

He grows old if he loses vitality, but he does not become young, If he gains vitality, he doesn't need to become a kid at least become like a twenty year old, youthful man.

9mth
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Blueseaking98

The story is great and the goldenfinger is attention grabbing. I was hoping he’d be able to use the ability to he gained more. But it’s just too slow and the MC is too passive. He feels more like a side character than a MC. I get when a weak character starts off they need to walk before they can run. But it feels like a crawl

9mth
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Jahnes
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This is one of the few novels on this app that had actually good translation quality. The plot id also decent, though a bit slow for some. I would definitely recommend it to anyone who wants to read something that has a good translation for once.

10mth
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The_Reader5050

It good, the plot for the story is good. Just that it’s very slow

10mth
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Badgersssss

Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

11mth
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M24_gamers

nice read but lacking story clarity. gets easily boring, not intresting. integrating more system notification to mc system and pacing mc development the story can improve

11mth
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Kazem_Moridi

an amazing novel . ....... ........

11mth
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pocox2a2

I read upto 50chapters here on webnovel, & I liked it. it's a good read

12mth
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Lane
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mc migrates into a world of cultivation, the problem he does not have a spirit root so is unable to be a cultivator. mc golden finger allows him to drain or grab life-force, and he uses it on chickens, using his own life-force to transform them into spirit chickens then fattening them up to drain them to replenish himself.

1yr
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Avatar_AS_7

I loved the mc's thinking are there any similar novel where large breeding happens

3d
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RazaKarim

Everything was good at the beginning but the story suddenly felt boring after a few dozen chapters. The best thing about a system novel is the fast pace of cultivation improvement. However, in this novel, the cultivation is too slow. Even after more than 80 chapters, MC couldn't be said to have truly started cultivating. Not to mention, I started hating chicken word because of how many times they are mentioned. ishhh

27d
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YoungFox

This novel is a good read, the main character is very likable

1mth
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danielroling

top rate cultivation novel! good pace, there istn't an unreasonable jump in ranks. couscous mc.

1mth
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viv666

nice story, characteristics development, but bad translation

2mth
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DaoistyfpBEy

Sorry, it seems like the author has a lot of good ideas. It’s just with the system. There’s so many obvious thoughts of tryout and he doesn’t seem to go down probably for the purpose of keeping the store that he already has in his mind, which is not always the best. It doesn’t feel like the story has flexibility the story A little too obvious that this is the first novel, the authors done don’t get me wrong. I think the author has good talent and potential. I hope he keeps going forward and improving . It’s just the story isn’t for me.

5mth
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Sutanoy_Dasgupta_4482

this is a very slow and steady novel. Reminds me of A mortals journey to immortality. I like the slow pace, it shows the struggles instead of the more typical rapidfire improvement with a cheat system. I don't remember reading a livestock breeding approach and it felt novel to me. Definitely worth a read. MC character needs to be fleshed out a bit, sometimes it's a little inconsistent. Not recommended for those who enjoy a rapid cultivation progress or OP MC. This chicken breeding MC is a chicken as well, prioritizes safety over rushing into fights/opportunities.

6mth
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Jmitch1
LV 15 Badge

It’s a good story. I feel invested. Locked chapters are expensive as hell though. Double the usual rate. Why?

6mth
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theapre93

The beginning was interesting, but then it felt boring. The best part about system type novels is that MC grows strong fast. However, in this novel MC is more focuses on side quests instead of cultivation.

6mth
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Adm_Mat
LV 15 Badge

It started off really well. It was exactly the kind of slow paced story I like. But the author seems to lose the plot like 100 chapters in, just starting up random romance tangent that pops out of no where, it felt super forced. Just really put me off the whole thing.

9mth
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WeHaveLost

I started to hate chicken because of this novel

9mth
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Eric1111

I don’t rate this book as much as others one of the main issues is to many plot holes that don’t make sense. Also the main character does not have a consistent character it’s almost like he’s a schizophrenic with the way he behaves. He’s nervous to meet stronger people, has an ability to create illusions so those stronge people can’t recognize him, but isn’t the least bit cautious or hesitant to put an insect in his body? Also with his power of illusions can’t he just make himself invisible to those people? It all seems cater to protagonist and the plot even if it doesn’t make any sense. Translations are good so if you want something to read than yeah it’s decent but not enough to spend your time if you are looking for something good.

9mth
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Nigiliya_Line

An interesting story. The progress is slow sometimes and chapters aren't very big, but still interesting

9mth
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HeavensPath

He grows old if he loses vitality, but he does not become young, If he gains vitality, he doesn't need to become a kid at least become like a twenty year old, youthful man.

9mth
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Blueseaking98

The story is great and the goldenfinger is attention grabbing. I was hoping he’d be able to use the ability to he gained more. But it’s just too slow and the MC is too passive. He feels more like a side character than a MC. I get when a weak character starts off they need to walk before they can run. But it feels like a crawl

9mth
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Jahnes
LV 13 Badge

This is one of the few novels on this app that had actually good translation quality. The plot id also decent, though a bit slow for some. I would definitely recommend it to anyone who wants to read something that has a good translation for once.

10mth
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The_Reader5050

It good, the plot for the story is good. Just that it’s very slow

10mth
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Badgersssss

Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

11mth
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M24_gamers

nice read but lacking story clarity. gets easily boring, not intresting. integrating more system notification to mc system and pacing mc development the story can improve

11mth
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Kazem_Moridi

an amazing novel . ....... ........

11mth
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pocox2a2

I read upto 50chapters here on webnovel, & I liked it. it's a good read

12mth
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Lane
LV 5 Badge

mc migrates into a world of cultivation, the problem he does not have a spirit root so is unable to be a cultivator. mc golden finger allows him to drain or grab life-force, and he uses it on chickens, using his own life-force to transform them into spirit chickens then fattening them up to drain them to replenish himself.

1yr
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