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I like it!!;!;!!!! Its entertaining for me so i hope author will give it more afford to this banger😘😘😘i also like the way the charatrer interact its seem very human and humorus.....so i will very happy if author give us more chapter than usual
I hate how this fanfic took up a majority of my free time. But I also love that most of my free time was spent reading this awesome fanfic😂. This is an amazing story! When I first read this, I wasn't expecting much. Mainly a generic Spider-Man fanfic with basic to little innovations. But holy shiny rigidity dingus! This fanfic was so good. How you portrayed the characters was great. How the harem works and how genuine of a guy Peter is is spectacular. The adventures are interesting and the development is building up nicely. How the gang develops and improves is realistically achieved. And I loved the kid-from-the-future arc. It was so GOOD! This has got to be one of, if not, my favorite fanfic so far. I even stopped reading other fanfics just to wait for this one to update for a while until I got tired of waiting and started reading other fanfics until a new chapter came up. This got me obsessed😶. Anyway, I just wanted to say that this is an amazing, amazing work you've got. And I wish you all the best. Side Note: I hope the harem expands! I want him to have more girls! For his future kids to have more mommies! You've built up such a good character(loved the omake by the way)that seems to be capable of running a harem without messing something up or being an egotistical megalomaniac edge-lord who hunts for a harem like they are Pokemon without any feelings or individuality. And I like how this isn't all super dark stuff that typical Marvel fanfics are(or at least the ones I've read). There are some happy and warm moments while also comedic yet interesting. And that's one of the things I like about this story.
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Great novel just the type of novel that Spiderman fans might like. I don't know about others but I liked it's world building, slice of life excellent writing skill. Keep it up author. Don't you try to drop this. It's a harem I have read 150+ and mc has 2 girls in his harem no more till 150.
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Now I understand why this fanfiction novel has a rating of 4.2 even though it has good writing quality, storyline, chapter updates, and character development. This is because some people evaluate fanfiction novels from a subjective point of view rather than an objective one... if you want to judge something, then judge it as a whole, not judge it half way... and for the author-san. Continue your hard work and don't be discouraged because there are several people who always support you.
I had not found a better Spider-Man story before in my entire life, I truly consider it to be the masterpiece of fanfics
Loving this FF author. keep it up. mg=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=giftmg=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]]mg=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
The beginning is a bit rough but I found myself reading more and more unable to stop. I ended up reading the whole thing. The character interactions are great and the dynamic is pretty cool. it's clear that the author has a general plan or idea for this story which is nice compared to others where they tend to go nowhere. Though I do like slice of life. But even though he has a plan he also ask for the viewers suggestion from time to time to better write which is pretty cool. it's pretty great. Give it a chance. No Yuri in the harem please.
First thing first , y'all shouldn't trust some of the reviews .. Mc didn't train martial art?? wrong he train from young age . Mc is not op at start? They didn't see slice of life tag ... Basically he will be op ,but not from the beginning.. He is not normal spider man either , Mc is spider man ,with electric manipulation ability, biological web , invisibility and maybe more ability . mc also genius, Create His own artificial intelligence.. About harem , it's okay ..there no rush .. Author show the aspect of emotions ..Not like other author rushing in developing harem .
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Great story along side character development . The interaction between character makes the story fun to read . The character of Peter is so in line with original that I sometimes forget it's an reincarnation story. Just make it that Peter uses the past life knowledge more often.
I really like this Marvel novel of yours. May I please have this novel translated into my language?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muy buen fanfic me gusta como va yendo la historia y ya pero a wanda[img=update][img=update][img=update],..........................................
que necesidad tiene este autor de sacarle lo especial al protagonista haciendo que sus habilidades sean compartidas por los demás personajes?
i like spiderman so im biased. a nice read. if you like "the spider", this is the light hearted version of it. indeed, there are struggles beneath the smiling facade but as mc said, tell a lie enough times, it became a reality. if you like Spiderman but hate the 'parker's luck' where bad things keep happening to peter, this would fulfill your wish in more than one ways. oh yeah... not for anti harem sect and definitely not for anti lemon clan.
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Congrats you did basic character design. Unlike most authors u managed to get the reader to visualise the mc without having to just go off a vague description or no description at all. Well done author.
I really love this story it's all i wanted in a spider man fiction spider man is stronger[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
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At Ch 207. One of The best Spider-Man Fan-Fics I have ever read. I hope this have more than 1000 Chapters. Absolute love the story. How Felicia grew up from her traumas, how Peter helped MJ, Harry's Growth, And Peter Using his god-damn brain. Even tho he does not kill, he has shown that he is ready to break any rule for his loved ones. Honestly, My Biggest reason to like this novel is Peter Parker, He is Happy.[img=coins]
Reveal Spoiler one of the best............ .............................................................................................................................
This is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will be any yuri in the harem not a fan. That also means light yuri with the mc in threesome etc?
Lame,he didn't kill,then what's even the purpose of him being a person who time travelled . He is just being another Peter Parker who just has a bit of future knowledge
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This story feels fresh to me, especially the technology development and adventure parts, and the most important thing is that MC focuses on his own small group, and doesn't try to get involved with Tony Stark just to get pocket money or to be involved in the plot like most Marvel FFs
I like it!!;!;!!!! Its entertaining for me so i hope author will give it more afford to this banger😘😘😘i also like the way the charatrer interact its seem very human and humorus.....so i will very happy if author give us more chapter than usual
I hate how this fanfic took up a majority of my free time. But I also love that most of my free time was spent reading this awesome fanfic😂. This is an amazing story! When I first read this, I wasn't expecting much. Mainly a generic Spider-Man fanfic with basic to little innovations. But holy shiny rigidity dingus! This fanfic was so good. How you portrayed the characters was great. How the harem works and how genuine of a guy Peter is is spectacular. The adventures are interesting and the development is building up nicely. How the gang develops and improves is realistically achieved. And I loved the kid-from-the-future arc. It was so GOOD! This has got to be one of, if not, my favorite fanfic so far. I even stopped reading other fanfics just to wait for this one to update for a while until I got tired of waiting and started reading other fanfics until a new chapter came up. This got me obsessed😶. Anyway, I just wanted to say that this is an amazing, amazing work you've got. And I wish you all the best. Side Note: I hope the harem expands! I want him to have more girls! For his future kids to have more mommies! You've built up such a good character(loved the omake by the way)that seems to be capable of running a harem without messing something up or being an egotistical megalomaniac edge-lord who hunts for a harem like they are Pokemon without any feelings or individuality. And I like how this isn't all super dark stuff that typical Marvel fanfics are(or at least the ones I've read). There are some happy and warm moments while also comedic yet interesting. And that's one of the things I like about this story.
Reveal Spoiler Great novel just the type of novel that Spiderman fans might like. I don't know about others but I liked it's world building, slice of life excellent writing skill. Keep it up author. Don't you try to drop this. It's a harem I have read 150+ and mc has 2 girls in his harem no more till 150.
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Now I understand why this fanfiction novel has a rating of 4.2 even though it has good writing quality, storyline, chapter updates, and character development. This is because some people evaluate fanfiction novels from a subjective point of view rather than an objective one... if you want to judge something, then judge it as a whole, not judge it half way... and for the author-san. Continue your hard work and don't be discouraged because there are several people who always support you.
I had not found a better Spider-Man story before in my entire life, I truly consider it to be the masterpiece of fanfics
Loving this FF author. keep it up. mg=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=giftmg=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]]mg=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
The beginning is a bit rough but I found myself reading more and more unable to stop. I ended up reading the whole thing. The character interactions are great and the dynamic is pretty cool. it's clear that the author has a general plan or idea for this story which is nice compared to others where they tend to go nowhere. Though I do like slice of life. But even though he has a plan he also ask for the viewers suggestion from time to time to better write which is pretty cool. it's pretty great. Give it a chance. No Yuri in the harem please.
First thing first , y'all shouldn't trust some of the reviews .. Mc didn't train martial art?? wrong he train from young age . Mc is not op at start? They didn't see slice of life tag ... Basically he will be op ,but not from the beginning.. He is not normal spider man either , Mc is spider man ,with electric manipulation ability, biological web , invisibility and maybe more ability . mc also genius, Create His own artificial intelligence.. About harem , it's okay ..there no rush .. Author show the aspect of emotions ..Not like other author rushing in developing harem .
Reveal Spoiler Great story along side character development . The interaction between character makes the story fun to read . The character of Peter is so in line with original that I sometimes forget it's an reincarnation story. Just make it that Peter uses the past life knowledge more often.
I really like this Marvel novel of yours. May I please have this novel translated into my language?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muy buen fanfic me gusta como va yendo la historia y ya pero a wanda[img=update][img=update][img=update],..........................................
que necesidad tiene este autor de sacarle lo especial al protagonista haciendo que sus habilidades sean compartidas por los demás personajes?
i like spiderman so im biased. a nice read. if you like "the spider", this is the light hearted version of it. indeed, there are struggles beneath the smiling facade but as mc said, tell a lie enough times, it became a reality. if you like Spiderman but hate the 'parker's luck' where bad things keep happening to peter, this would fulfill your wish in more than one ways. oh yeah... not for anti harem sect and definitely not for anti lemon clan.
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Congrats you did basic character design. Unlike most authors u managed to get the reader to visualise the mc without having to just go off a vague description or no description at all. Well done author.
I really love this story it's all i wanted in a spider man fiction spider man is stronger[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
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At Ch 207. One of The best Spider-Man Fan-Fics I have ever read. I hope this have more than 1000 Chapters. Absolute love the story. How Felicia grew up from her traumas, how Peter helped MJ, Harry's Growth, And Peter Using his god-damn brain. Even tho he does not kill, he has shown that he is ready to break any rule for his loved ones. Honestly, My Biggest reason to like this novel is Peter Parker, He is Happy.[img=coins]
Reveal Spoiler one of the best............ .............................................................................................................................
This is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will be any yuri in the harem not a fan. That also means light yuri with the mc in threesome etc?
Lame,he didn't kill,then what's even the purpose of him being a person who time travelled . He is just being another Peter Parker who just has a bit of future knowledge
[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
This story feels fresh to me, especially the technology development and adventure parts, and the most important thing is that MC focuses on his own small group, and doesn't try to get involved with Tony Stark just to get pocket money or to be involved in the plot like most Marvel FFs