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DaoistEZtAK4

This is the best Spider-Man fanfic I've ever read.

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Shorn_Cordoba

It's very good I enjoy reading it because of how much different it is from all the other Spider-Man ff. It does have the same origin with peters parents dying but that is all it has so many different things about it that it makes the ff more enjoyable at least to me so good work to the author and please keep writing.

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DaoistlXBhG6

AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!!

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shadedgrove

It's a super good Spiderman fanfiction. It's one of the best I've read in a long time. Reading it reminds me of reading some of the actual Spiderman comic books that I've read, too. The author definitely knows what they are doing. Keep up the great work.

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EdgeLord_23

To me it's a great story so far and there isn't anything I can get angry about. I like that spiderman is using his genius in creative ways and relying on others before the weight on his shoulders gets too heavy. Others may think he is too strong or always winning but I disagree sometimes he is prepared or he just trains. And I love that there is still so much story to build on. Thanks for the story and continue the great work πŸ‘πŸ˜

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Oberon_Nezrimiy

after reading 140 chapters, I want to say that fan fiction is generally not bad, the author is good at building relationships between characters, and the world does not seem empty, even the main character is not too OP and has a positive morality. One of the disadvantages is that the main character contradicts himself. For example, he says that he will not kill anyone, while he is a genius, but he still decided to destroy the USSR, which still exists in his universe. Although such an intelligent person should have calculated all the consequences of this action. In our history, after the collapse of the USSR, many people died both from banditry and from two wars that provoked the collapse. That is, Peter decided not to kill a few people who are guilty of experimenting on humans, but instead to kill thousands of innocent people. That's pretty smart of him.

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Fieldbreaker

The story itself is really good. I've read better ones, but itΒ΄s worth a try. What bothers me about the story is how much time is wasted during childhood. I'm on chapter 46 right now and Peter and Gwen are both only 15 years old. Personally, I'm not really interested in the backstory and it seems to me to drag on forever. There are also really stupid things in the story, like Peter and Gwen having to go to the toilet because they have to save someone. What's the point of police, fire departments and rescue services when teenage superheroes have to do everything?

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angel_reyes_8978

It is an incredible story full of cultural references and excellent quips. The flow is amazing, and the story progress real builds up. While harems are not my thing, I still like this makingof a spider family team, and honestly it's had to just stick to one of the girls. Having to choose a "best girl" is not a hill an author wants to die on.

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Meta0202

no harem............................. no harem............................. no harem............................. no harem.......................................................... ............................. ............................. ............................. ............................. ............................. ............................. .............................

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GOULA
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One of the best spider-man story aver keep going. ................................................................................................

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cryzsalix

I don't normally leave reviews, but I'm doing this out of pure spite for all the one-star reviews I see here. This is probably one of the best superhero fanfics out there, not just Marvel, not just Spider-Man. It has everything, from the epic moments that truly define what a hero is made of when faced with overwhelming odds, to the little details and acts that elevate these characters to the status of symbols of heroism and goodness. It bothers me when bad reviews are based on trivialities like the author not completely throwing out the original canon, I mean hello, this is a Spider-Man fanfic, if it would change everything, why bother making a fanfic? I despise the other complaints even more, among the sea of ​​fanfics with psychopathic murderous Spider-Man, and other stories that pretend to be about superheroes when they only have senseless sexual content with all kinds of sick material, complaining about a mostly well-developed harem is ridiculous.

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Maycon_Henrique_10

Γ“tima histΓ³ria do homem-aranha Γ‰ raro encontrar boas histΓ³rias falando sobre especificamente ele gostei muito de vocΓͺ ter explorado o fator onde Peter Parker Γ© um gΓͺnio sΓ£o poucos que focam nisso jΓ‘ que a maioria foca nos poderes do Peter foca nos poderes dele e esquecem que ele Γ© um gΓͺnio espero que continue escrevendo sua histΓ³ria Γ© Γ³tima sΓ³ o que precisa aumentar o nΓΊmero de capΓ­tulos πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Elon_Husk

I enjoyed reading this fanfic more than i thought i would. I finished binge reading it in just 2 days.

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Gear_ChuchoAK47

I loved It, Is a awersome fic. I hope no droppit The universe Is good, the comedy Is great and i love the brother relashionship bethween Peter and harry

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Tigre_Negro008

It's good, but too sweet for me, besides it seems very focused on the Spider-Man plot and I wanted to see other characters from Marvel, Avengers and X-Men

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IMDOOMED

What do you mean by 'overpowered'? I'm only on chapter 17, and I don't see Peter getting any more powers than usual. He doesn't seem to have a way to gain more powers or abilities, and he doesn't appear to have any kind of system. Right now, he's not overpowered at all. Yes, he's pretty strong, but really far from overpowered, especially in the Marvel universe. Well, except...

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RIMZY_1885

Novel is great...story line great too ..overall its a great find

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Daoist730sPk

The harem makes any fanfiction terrible.γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€

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lico789
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eu sΓ³ gostei muito. pra uma fic de homem aranha ficou sensacional.

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kotimara636

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DragoGamerzao

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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MMEStudio

I dropped the novel at chapter 119 here is my honest review - writing quality =10/10 -updates =10/10 -story development =4/10 The story was kinda good a bit goofy but okay the problem started when the author started to give everbody try to give every body powers + an AI acting like a child for godsake the worst is that the mc kinda feel like gojo a bit It’s like most of spidey ff where the mc fix everything with knowledge no suspense plus the harem isnt convincing even though the author put a lot of effort to not making it forced

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GodOfLight

The author killed Peter Parker’s parents because he couldn’t step away one step from the canon and create something of his own, something that has logic, and not β€œI’m Peter Parker and I was reborn as a genius, I know the Marvel plot, but I don’t know.” that Peter Parker's parents will die! the author has no creativity, only following the canon with minor changes in the form of a harem, I guess the whole meaning of rebirth is lost, and therefore the meaning of ff by marvel!

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wrobe06118

Fun read but you just need turn of your brain regarding tech stuff Example 4 yr old made a pc but manage to search the internet even though their house have no internet and manage to use the computer without making or installing an os. And later apparently manage to make the most advanced pc by just buying ready made pc parts not making new advance parts from scratch

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DaoistEZtAK4

This is the best Spider-Man fanfic I've ever read.

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Shorn_Cordoba

It's very good I enjoy reading it because of how much different it is from all the other Spider-Man ff. It does have the same origin with peters parents dying but that is all it has so many different things about it that it makes the ff more enjoyable at least to me so good work to the author and please keep writing.

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DaoistlXBhG6

AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!! AMAZING!!!

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shadedgrove

It's a super good Spiderman fanfiction. It's one of the best I've read in a long time. Reading it reminds me of reading some of the actual Spiderman comic books that I've read, too. The author definitely knows what they are doing. Keep up the great work.

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EdgeLord_23

To me it's a great story so far and there isn't anything I can get angry about. I like that spiderman is using his genius in creative ways and relying on others before the weight on his shoulders gets too heavy. Others may think he is too strong or always winning but I disagree sometimes he is prepared or he just trains. And I love that there is still so much story to build on. Thanks for the story and continue the great work πŸ‘πŸ˜

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Oberon_Nezrimiy

after reading 140 chapters, I want to say that fan fiction is generally not bad, the author is good at building relationships between characters, and the world does not seem empty, even the main character is not too OP and has a positive morality. One of the disadvantages is that the main character contradicts himself. For example, he says that he will not kill anyone, while he is a genius, but he still decided to destroy the USSR, which still exists in his universe. Although such an intelligent person should have calculated all the consequences of this action. In our history, after the collapse of the USSR, many people died both from banditry and from two wars that provoked the collapse. That is, Peter decided not to kill a few people who are guilty of experimenting on humans, but instead to kill thousands of innocent people. That's pretty smart of him.

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Fieldbreaker

The story itself is really good. I've read better ones, but itΒ΄s worth a try. What bothers me about the story is how much time is wasted during childhood. I'm on chapter 46 right now and Peter and Gwen are both only 15 years old. Personally, I'm not really interested in the backstory and it seems to me to drag on forever. There are also really stupid things in the story, like Peter and Gwen having to go to the toilet because they have to save someone. What's the point of police, fire departments and rescue services when teenage superheroes have to do everything?

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Skymanga_kun0o0

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angel_reyes_8978

It is an incredible story full of cultural references and excellent quips. The flow is amazing, and the story progress real builds up. While harems are not my thing, I still like this makingof a spider family team, and honestly it's had to just stick to one of the girls. Having to choose a "best girl" is not a hill an author wants to die on.

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TalonFromHell

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Meta0202

no harem............................. no harem............................. no harem............................. no harem.......................................................... ............................. ............................. ............................. ............................. ............................. ............................. .............................

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GOULA
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One of the best spider-man story aver keep going. ................................................................................................

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cryzsalix

I don't normally leave reviews, but I'm doing this out of pure spite for all the one-star reviews I see here. This is probably one of the best superhero fanfics out there, not just Marvel, not just Spider-Man. It has everything, from the epic moments that truly define what a hero is made of when faced with overwhelming odds, to the little details and acts that elevate these characters to the status of symbols of heroism and goodness. It bothers me when bad reviews are based on trivialities like the author not completely throwing out the original canon, I mean hello, this is a Spider-Man fanfic, if it would change everything, why bother making a fanfic? I despise the other complaints even more, among the sea of ​​fanfics with psychopathic murderous Spider-Man, and other stories that pretend to be about superheroes when they only have senseless sexual content with all kinds of sick material, complaining about a mostly well-developed harem is ridiculous.

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Maycon_Henrique_10

Γ“tima histΓ³ria do homem-aranha Γ‰ raro encontrar boas histΓ³rias falando sobre especificamente ele gostei muito de vocΓͺ ter explorado o fator onde Peter Parker Γ© um gΓͺnio sΓ£o poucos que focam nisso jΓ‘ que a maioria foca nos poderes do Peter foca nos poderes dele e esquecem que ele Γ© um gΓͺnio espero que continue escrevendo sua histΓ³ria Γ© Γ³tima sΓ³ o que precisa aumentar o nΓΊmero de capΓ­tulos πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Elon_Husk

I enjoyed reading this fanfic more than i thought i would. I finished binge reading it in just 2 days.

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Gear_ChuchoAK47

I loved It, Is a awersome fic. I hope no droppit The universe Is good, the comedy Is great and i love the brother relashionship bethween Peter and harry

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Tigre_Negro008

It's good, but too sweet for me, besides it seems very focused on the Spider-Man plot and I wanted to see other characters from Marvel, Avengers and X-Men

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IMDOOMED

What do you mean by 'overpowered'? I'm only on chapter 17, and I don't see Peter getting any more powers than usual. He doesn't seem to have a way to gain more powers or abilities, and he doesn't appear to have any kind of system. Right now, he's not overpowered at all. Yes, he's pretty strong, but really far from overpowered, especially in the Marvel universe. Well, except...

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RIMZY_1885

Novel is great...story line great too ..overall its a great find

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Daoist730sPk

The harem makes any fanfiction terrible.γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€γ…€

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lico789
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eu sΓ³ gostei muito. pra uma fic de homem aranha ficou sensacional.

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kotimara636

need new chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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DragoGamerzao

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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MMEStudio

I dropped the novel at chapter 119 here is my honest review - writing quality =10/10 -updates =10/10 -story development =4/10 The story was kinda good a bit goofy but okay the problem started when the author started to give everbody try to give every body powers + an AI acting like a child for godsake the worst is that the mc kinda feel like gojo a bit It’s like most of spidey ff where the mc fix everything with knowledge no suspense plus the harem isnt convincing even though the author put a lot of effort to not making it forced

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GodOfLight

The author killed Peter Parker’s parents because he couldn’t step away one step from the canon and create something of his own, something that has logic, and not β€œI’m Peter Parker and I was reborn as a genius, I know the Marvel plot, but I don’t know.” that Peter Parker's parents will die! the author has no creativity, only following the canon with minor changes in the form of a harem, I guess the whole meaning of rebirth is lost, and therefore the meaning of ff by marvel!

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wrobe06118

Fun read but you just need turn of your brain regarding tech stuff Example 4 yr old made a pc but manage to search the internet even though their house have no internet and manage to use the computer without making or installing an os. And later apparently manage to make the most advanced pc by just buying ready made pc parts not making new advance parts from scratch

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