Naruto: Mixed Heritage

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Sidecharacter1

Hello guys this is the Author with a shameless review. This is a work of Fiction that is inspired by some Naruto fanfics that I have read. So if some of the similarities bother you please stick around to chapter 25, and then you can decide whether to continue with the book or not. Also if you have questions you can post them under this review and I will try my best to answer them as long as they will not spoil the story.

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Humbuub

Writing is meh, sometimes I thought I repeat a page due to redundancies. The story is boring, MC is an Uchiha/Uzumaki orphan right after the destruction of Whirlpool village, yet we've been reading boring AF story about MC grinding and nonsense dialogues. Not to mention the inconsistencies. MC is so bland, he does nothing but train and look at his stats. Updates are the only commendable thing so far. I suggest to skip the grinding, since you never define the power levels. Also skip the ninjutsu training. It's a waste of everyone's time. He got a freaking Sharingan ffs, so unless he creates his own Jutsu, don't bother writing about Ninjutsu training.

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THIZZGATOR

it's a mid as it gets. I fell asleep multiple time getting as far as I did.

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malinizgeldii

I liked the novel and I will check it every day to see if there is a new chapter. MC is both Uzumaki and Uchia, and I think he is the same age as Fugaku in terms of time. It starts right after the Uzumaki destruction. What I find fun about naruto fan novels is their interaction with the main story, this novel starts way before. I hope it doesn't spoil the main story, but that will be revealed in the future.

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Paul_obam

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Makeshift

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interesting book so far have no complaints and I like he setting since not many fics happen way before the nine tails rampage

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CFrank1

Really new novel so rating seems harsh but I’ve rated it on what I’ve read. The language used is really advanced and descriptive but personally it doesn’t help the novel because it slows down events which aren’t very important, making it difficult to differentiate between important and unimportant events, which would usually be presented by how much they are described. The novel so far is extremely similar to ‘Naruto:The wind calamity’ which isn’t exactly a bad thing as it’s a very good novel but it feels a bit like I’m rereading wind calamity. I saw your comment about taking inspiration for the start and I understand that so I’m excited for when it starts to differentiate and hopefully become its own, brilliant fanfic 👍👍

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1stZenitsu_Zoldyck

don't take this review too seriously, I only read the first two chapters fairly quickly during my lunch break. From what I could tell the grammar is great, the author knowledge of Naruto feels like it might be decent, and the concept of a mixed Uchiha and Uzumaki MC is kinda of interesting (even if the Uchiha, Uzumaki, Hyuga and Senju clans are actually all of the same origin). However the characters, at least in the first two chapters are too nonchalant about their situation the MC is like "welp looks Like I transmigrated into Naruto". Also he awakens his Sharingan in the first chapter while being younger than itachi and shisui who were supposed to be geniuses among geniuses for awakening their Sharingan at the age of six I believe, despite the author mentioning in the description that the MC was not gonna be OP. His aunt knows he awakened the Sharingan and she's just kinda of impressed. On top of having one of the best Kekkei genkai and Uzumaki constitution to complement it, he also has a system, so much for not being OP from the start.

Good story so far. I'm currently in the 17th chapter. Apart from some inconsistencies, It has good potential.Gonna stick here for a while and see how the story infolds

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kasee

Great work so far. Need more chapters to upload decide but

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Aruahh

I just know this takes tremendous work to produce so author thanks for the good work

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Paul_obam

I've read the advanced chapter ahead on the author's patreon and they were so good I had to come here and review the book. Great story so far, just hope the Author finishes it!

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kasee

Currently at 9 chapters and love the story so far

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Thanos616

Love the Novel so far. The MC is an Uchiha and Uzumaki which is something I've never read before so that's interesting

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WandersAway

What makes this different is that the mc is half uchiha and half uzumaki, set after the 2nd ninja war. It has a system that pretty much just shows progress which is nice and isn’t too intrusive. My only complaints are that while there are descriptive words and such, there is sometimes a lack of giod grammar.