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Well, first I want to point out MC's background. He was a soldier in his previous life and he is used to fighting and killing.This is a good thing and will save the author many unnecessary events in this regard. Secondly,and the unique thing about this fanfic is MC's target,he wants to return home! I have read many One Piece FF and I have never seen MC have this goal, all authors choose to make their MC not have any family or a good relationship whit them in his previous world.It has always baffled me this matter, of all those incarnated in another world...there is not a single person who wants to return to Mazna?! I always found this unreasonable, and I'm happy because I finally found what I wanted. A message to the author-san:keep your work and never drop it please! I will support you, whether with comments or powers stones. Thank you for reading!
Comprehensive Review: - MC's personality suits my taste—calm, smart, cunning, deceitful, and caring towards those he's concerned about. Story Development: Very well done with a comprehensive change in the original plot, which is a positive thing since no one wants to see Luffy's journey replicated as if the anime has turned into a novel. Updates: The updates are very good. The Author isn't A human, 3 or 2 chapters a day, and the average word count is 2500 words, with some chapters reaching 4000-3000 words. Character Development: I've seen new versions of Nami, Nogiko, and Tashigi, while still maintaining their endearing personalities towards each other. .. .. FINALLY, I hope the Author continues with this story, as it's one of the best fanfiction stories I've read, There's no problem with spelling mistakes in the early chapters; the writer has improved significantly. I don't blame him because English isn't his first language.
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I love the story so far and have had quite a few laughs as well. I hope and pray that this novel and the wonderful author behind it continue to prosper for many years to come.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello thare I think IT would be great idea and beneficial for your story, if you create Discord chanel, so then everyone who read your work can talk with you and with each other.
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I would have rated this story 5 stars if the author hadn't taken two long breaks from updating. However, I can overlook that since each chapter has a substantial word count (averaging around 2,500 words). The main character is clever and well-developed, even though he's a bit lustful. But who am I to complain about that? After all, who wouldn’t be drawn to beautiful girls and want to build a harem, except perhaps for the disinterested or insincere? Back to the main point: the author’s writing has improved significantly over the past year, despite months of hiatus. Additionally, the first ten chapters, which initially had many spelling errors, have been revised, and now there’s nothing left for me to criticize. Lastly, author, thank you for this novel! Now, tell me—or rather, reassure me—Sadie-chan will be in the harem, right? Below is a picture of Sadie-chan.
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I never understood this mania of putting the sword on the back.............................................................................................
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Très bon roman, mais l'auteur doit simplement maintenir un rythme de mise à jour constant. Je donnerai cinq étoiles à ma critique.
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Where should I start? Well, at the beginning of this novel, there were some linguistic issues (not to the extent of making it unreadable), but there's a significant improvement in the future and the upcoming chapters (there are almost no grammatical or spelling errors anymore). As for the quality of the writing, it's very good, and this story is quite unique. Maybe it's because the Straw Hat crew met a bad fate at the hands of the MC? Or because there's a Marineford War arc where the MC didn’t save Ace and Whitebeard? In any case, it's a great experience. I hope you hurry up and add Mikita and Robin to the Harem, dear author.
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At this moment i realy like this story, MC Ren isnot a hothead and reckless person, he plans his future actions in detail, He do not wants to be slave of Original Plot and join Straw Hats,but create his own crew and be his own person, He knows in One Piece World only strong and Smart ones can hope to survive in this World, if they want to matter in grand shame of things.
Well, first I want to point out MC's background. He was a soldier in his previous life and he is used to fighting and killing.This is a good thing and will save the author many unnecessary events in this regard. Secondly,and the unique thing about this fanfic is MC's target,he wants to return home! I have read many One Piece FF and I have never seen MC have this goal, all authors choose to make their MC not have any family or a good relationship whit them in his previous world.It has always baffled me this matter, of all those incarnated in another world...there is not a single person who wants to return to Mazna?! I always found this unreasonable, and I'm happy because I finally found what I wanted. A message to the author-san:keep your work and never drop it please! I will support you, whether with comments or powers stones. Thank you for reading!
Comprehensive Review: - MC's personality suits my taste—calm, smart, cunning, deceitful, and caring towards those he's concerned about. Story Development: Very well done with a comprehensive change in the original plot, which is a positive thing since no one wants to see Luffy's journey replicated as if the anime has turned into a novel. Updates: The updates are very good. The Author isn't A human, 3 or 2 chapters a day, and the average word count is 2500 words, with some chapters reaching 4000-3000 words. Character Development: I've seen new versions of Nami, Nogiko, and Tashigi, while still maintaining their endearing personalities towards each other. .. .. FINALLY, I hope the Author continues with this story, as it's one of the best fanfiction stories I've read, There's no problem with spelling mistakes in the early chapters; the writer has improved significantly. I don't blame him because English isn't his first language.
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I love the story so far and have had quite a few laughs as well. I hope and pray that this novel and the wonderful author behind it continue to prosper for many years to come.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello thare I think IT would be great idea and beneficial for your story, if you create Discord chanel, so then everyone who read your work can talk with you and with each other.
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I would have rated this story 5 stars if the author hadn't taken two long breaks from updating. However, I can overlook that since each chapter has a substantial word count (averaging around 2,500 words). The main character is clever and well-developed, even though he's a bit lustful. But who am I to complain about that? After all, who wouldn’t be drawn to beautiful girls and want to build a harem, except perhaps for the disinterested or insincere? Back to the main point: the author’s writing has improved significantly over the past year, despite months of hiatus. Additionally, the first ten chapters, which initially had many spelling errors, have been revised, and now there’s nothing left for me to criticize. Lastly, author, thank you for this novel! Now, tell me—or rather, reassure me—Sadie-chan will be in the harem, right? Below is a picture of Sadie-chan.
SHAME there's no YURI in this story [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I never understood this mania of putting the sword on the back.............................................................................................
+++++++++[img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=In your face][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
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Très bon roman, mais l'auteur doit simplement maintenir un rythme de mise à jour constant. Je donnerai cinq étoiles à ma critique.
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Reveal Spoiler Author I have to say I love the way you ..ohh I have to say this I am following up with the latest chapters soo it's a request can you please add Hina , Momusagi goin ,reiju , Hancock ...these are some off the beautiful one ...ohh I apologise if I didn't add someone .there are just soo many😅
Mindblowing....speechless......keep going,,,author-kun..........awesome story..writing...everything...no complaints..............................................................
GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
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Where should I start? Well, at the beginning of this novel, there were some linguistic issues (not to the extent of making it unreadable), but there's a significant improvement in the future and the upcoming chapters (there are almost no grammatical or spelling errors anymore). As for the quality of the writing, it's very good, and this story is quite unique. Maybe it's because the Straw Hat crew met a bad fate at the hands of the MC? Or because there's a Marineford War arc where the MC didn’t save Ace and Whitebeard? In any case, it's a great experience. I hope you hurry up and add Mikita and Robin to the Harem, dear author.
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At this moment i realy like this story, MC Ren isnot a hothead and reckless person, he plans his future actions in detail, He do not wants to be slave of Original Plot and join Straw Hats,but create his own crew and be his own person, He knows in One Piece World only strong and Smart ones can hope to survive in this World, if they want to matter in grand shame of things.