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Where should I start? Well, at the beginning of this novel, there were some linguistic issues (not to the extent of making it unreadable), but there's a significant improvement in the future and the upcoming chapters (there are almost no grammatical or spelling errors anymore). As for the quality of the writing, it's very good, and this story is quite unique. Maybe it's because the Straw Hat crew met a bad fate at the hands of the MC? Or because there's a Marineford War arc where the MC didn’t save Ace and Whitebeard? In any case, it's a great experience. I hope you hurry up and add Mikita and Robin to the Harem, dear author.
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5 star of course ... Author I give you 5 star you give me your Novels Cover picture ..for research purposes..
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this was good until he got the power to revive? really? its just stupid, it was just a power trip becoming too absurd for one piece verse. everything else was good just the power given to mc was trash
I'm getting tired of this novel, to begin with, the fact that the protagonist has no affection for the characters seems absurd to me, more than anything because it was not mentioned that he would hate them, second, he is a great hypocrite, he says it doesn't hurt to innocent people but it is the first thing he does, and lastly, everything is too easy and convenient, and I am not saying this because of his strength, but because of the abilities that are given to him just when he needs them, ex: the hypnosis ability.
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Dude, im realy happy you come back, and i wish you to stay the most Happy and well, both for you and your loved ones.
Maybe it's better after the first few few chapters, after the Arlong Arc, but for f**k's sake, Nojiko has only known Ren (The MC), for a day or two by the time they are together. Sure, some relationships can go fast, but it's way too artificial. I'm stopping at Chapter 17, I tried going further but I regret going past chapter 10 at this point. The way the relationships are handled leaves a really bad taste.
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Loved this novel. The calculating protagonist brings chill to me by destroying original protagonist team, but it has its own taste for the readers. I, personally love fanfiction, especially one piece one but the harem and erotic scenes gave the wings to this masterpiece. As i am student i can't support this with points, etc but my power stones are for you. Please just bring the new chapters🙏🙏
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Love it you're really awesome author-san, excluding the good story and fast yet slow development its, the number of words are crazy good thanks author-san
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I read all the available chaps , So I think I can give a good review storyline is really good and its addicting !!! love this and my stones are surely going in this now ~~
New Review.!!!! Nami in this story is in my opinion much better then that writed by Odawho did not changed at all, in this storyShe throw away her money obsession thanks to MC Ren help, and her overall character and personality is much better, in this story she is a powerful frontal fighter, also she is of course still very inteligent person, and she uses her big brain in Perfect sync with her New power,little spoiler under this comment hehe.
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I will give this 5 Star of Author didn't stop updating chapters [img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless]
Where should I start? Well, at the beginning of this novel, there were some linguistic issues (not to the extent of making it unreadable), but there's a significant improvement in the future and the upcoming chapters (there are almost no grammatical or spelling errors anymore). As for the quality of the writing, it's very good, and this story is quite unique. Maybe it's because the Straw Hat crew met a bad fate at the hands of the MC? Or because there's a Marineford War arc where the MC didn’t save Ace and Whitebeard? In any case, it's a great experience. I hope you hurry up and add Mikita and Robin to the Harem, dear author.
Reveal Spoiler Give me more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Cries][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=In your face][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=In your face][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=In your face][img=Loving it]
5 star of course ... Author I give you 5 star you give me your Novels Cover picture ..for research purposes..
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this was good until he got the power to revive? really? its just stupid, it was just a power trip becoming too absurd for one piece verse. everything else was good just the power given to mc was trash
I'm getting tired of this novel, to begin with, the fact that the protagonist has no affection for the characters seems absurd to me, more than anything because it was not mentioned that he would hate them, second, he is a great hypocrite, he says it doesn't hurt to innocent people but it is the first thing he does, and lastly, everything is too easy and convenient, and I am not saying this because of his strength, but because of the abilities that are given to him just when he needs them, ex: the hypnosis ability.
Bagus cerita nya... tolong lanjutkan Bagus cerita nya... Tolong lanjutkan Bagus cerita nya... Tolong lanjutkan Bagus cerita nya... Tolong lanjutkan
Dude, im realy happy you come back, and i wish you to stay the most Happy and well, both for you and your loved ones.
Maybe it's better after the first few few chapters, after the Arlong Arc, but for f**k's sake, Nojiko has only known Ren (The MC), for a day or two by the time they are together. Sure, some relationships can go fast, but it's way too artificial. I'm stopping at Chapter 17, I tried going further but I regret going past chapter 10 at this point. The way the relationships are handled leaves a really bad taste.
Reveal Spoiler Loved this novel. The calculating protagonist brings chill to me by destroying original protagonist team, but it has its own taste for the readers. I, personally love fanfiction, especially one piece one but the harem and erotic scenes gave the wings to this masterpiece. As i am student i can't support this with points, etc but my power stones are for you. Please just bring the new chapters🙏🙏
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Love it you're really awesome author-san, excluding the good story and fast yet slow development its, the number of words are crazy good thanks author-san
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Ini bagus tolong lanjutkan.......... Lanjutkan.......... Lanjutkan.......... Lanjutkan.......... Lanjutkan.......... Lanjutkan.......... Lanjutkan..........
I read all the available chaps , So I think I can give a good review storyline is really good and its addicting !!! love this and my stones are surely going in this now ~~
New Review.!!!! Nami in this story is in my opinion much better then that writed by Odawho did not changed at all, in this storyShe throw away her money obsession thanks to MC Ren help, and her overall character and personality is much better, in this story she is a powerful frontal fighter, also she is of course still very inteligent person, and she uses her big brain in Perfect sync with her New power,little spoiler under this comment hehe.
Lanjutkan...................... Lanjutkan...................... Lanjutkan...................... Lanjutkan...................... Lanjutkan......................
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