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The story is really good, good concept, the only thing i could think is that it seems to have a lil too many spider people. And the fact that the author's update frequency is trash. Still waiting tho 😔
The story has a good pace and the quality of writing is better than most here it would be a shame if this was dropped
The story is nice. It's lighthearted and enjoyable. The romance is cute and simple, and the absence of harem makes it all better. I have the habit of giving 5 stars to stories I enjoy so here it is.
This one of the few good spiderman or basically Marvel stories. If it remains non- harem, for me personally, it would go down as one of the great work. Only thing I could complain about, the mc was shown to readily accept Natasha's advice, which made his character depth a little shallow. One of the better things is dialogues, believe me when I say, the first introductory chapter, when nick fury interrupted his monologue, it was beautiful, as an author myself, I truly respect it and could learn a few things out of it.I will update this review in future, if there are any drastic changes, either good or bad.
The story is a really good read; so far, in less than 20 chapters it's had a nice blend of action and romance. I have a dream, that the chapters will come twice daily but wake up to reality and remember that writers are human.
Oh also, this will not be a harem story, it will have only one love interest. And if the name of the story and the cover image don't tip you off as to who that is, i don't know what to say. I made it pretty obvious.
Author here with an obligatory 5 star review. This is my first attempt at writing a fanfic, so any suggestions and constructive criticism are more than welcome. Hope you enjoy!
The story is really good, good concept, the only thing i could think is that it seems to have a lil too many spider people. And the fact that the author's update frequency is trash. Still waiting tho 😔
The story has a good pace and the quality of writing is better than most here it would be a shame if this was dropped
The story is nice. It's lighthearted and enjoyable. The romance is cute and simple, and the absence of harem makes it all better. I have the habit of giving 5 stars to stories I enjoy so here it is.
This one of the few good spiderman or basically Marvel stories. If it remains non- harem, for me personally, it would go down as one of the great work. Only thing I could complain about, the mc was shown to readily accept Natasha's advice, which made his character depth a little shallow. One of the better things is dialogues, believe me when I say, the first introductory chapter, when nick fury interrupted his monologue, it was beautiful, as an author myself, I truly respect it and could learn a few things out of it.I will update this review in future, if there are any drastic changes, either good or bad.
The story is a really good read; so far, in less than 20 chapters it's had a nice blend of action and romance. I have a dream, that the chapters will come twice daily but wake up to reality and remember that writers are human.
Oh also, this will not be a harem story, it will have only one love interest. And if the name of the story and the cover image don't tip you off as to who that is, i don't know what to say. I made it pretty obvious.
Author here with an obligatory 5 star review. This is my first attempt at writing a fanfic, so any suggestions and constructive criticism are more than welcome. Hope you enjoy!
Love the story, hate the update stability