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I haven't read it yet, so this note will definitely change in the future, but I would like to ask the author a question that came to mind when reading the synopsis: Why make this a fanfic instead of an original story? The impression given in the synopsis and auxiliary chapter is that the entire plot is original, just using a few characters.
Very impressive world building and character designs. Great Job Author! [img=recommend] I hope you continue this fic and not drop it. Definitely recommend this for a read!!
I'll be brief. It's a good fanfic .Why do I think that? Well, for starters: [The characters are integrated into the story quite well. [+]There are no abrupt POV changes that can cause problems when reading (those cases when you don't understand which character is speaking at all and what's going on here, so that's not the case here :)). ) [+]Well there is some good MC character development, he is not an empty shell. [0] The quality of writing is not bad but it could be better in some places, after reading many chapters I realised that in some places the author could make the text cleaner and better, although this is my own personal obsession xD ======================================== It's a shame the chapters don't come out as often as I'd like them to. Overall not a bad story to pass the time I guess.
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5/5 no question asked, Just update more okay, can't wait. If u are willing, make a P A T R A O N acc or PayPal or smt. I'll support u
I won't talk about how the book is since other already cover it. But i want to say if you're like me, who's brain got poisoned by "I must have all heroines" harem type of stories. This is pure torture for us. The story and characters are well made and there's too many heroines from different animes that I can't help feel that it's such a loss especially since the MC is not hopelessly inlove with his heroine and the story lightly tease us with some sparks flying around between the MC and other heroines. In short, this feels like a harem manga where the mc only choose one at the end and it's hurting my poisoned fanfiction brain.
Well, Let's discuss things that are not discussed, the idea of the story is similar to what we have seen a lot of times, a overpowered guy who now has to get used to idea of family, well it's the anime edition or more like crossover edition, nonetheless I liked the story so far, Conversations and characters are handled pretty well, I am curious whether author will incorporate more stories as time passes, The only thing I don't like is the stability of chapter updates... To conclude , my opinion is that I like it.
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Even though his update schedule is unpredictable, I still enjoy it and am always looking forward to the next chapter… so keep up the good work
I have read this book three times already 10/10 would do it again it's just that good. and no harem! Ai best girl!
This book saved my life, before I read this book I had aids and was going to die. I never came to accept the fact that I was going to go so I fell into a deep depression, I couldn't handle the thought. But what I was doing was unhealthy and everyone picked up on the fact that I was in complete denial. They all tried to get help for me but I turned it all down because I told myself that I didn't need help. "you're going to be fine" I told myself. "nothings wrong" "it's all in your head..." until the thought of death finally came to me and took over the entirety of my personality "I don't want to go..." "I DON'T WANT TO GO" "I DON'T WANT TO GO". All the help my family had tried to give me had failed and its all because of my depression and denial. I could've gotten help... but I kept telling myself there was nothing wrong. And I grew sicker, and sicker, and sicker... until I became so sick I could not get out of bed. My skin grew dry and pale, I grew skinny and weak. I could barely move and was constantly coughing up blood. I tried to come to accept fact that I was going to die, but I couldn't. Then I officially got the news that I would die in 12 hours when I woke the next day. I cried and cried all day until my daughter walked up to my bed. She said very tearfully "we really tried, dad. We did everything we thought of. There's only one thing left that I can do..." she passed me a copy of surviving Minecraft. "what's this?" I asked. "the only option we have left..." she said as she walked out of the room and slowly closed the door behind her. I picked up the copy of Surviving Minecraft and looked at the cover. The art on the cover was absolutely gorgeous, I was completely speechless at how stunning the cover was and how it got across such a big message with one simple piece of artwork. I opened up the book to what would end up being the most heart racing, realistic, and emotional adventure I'd ever go on. The characters felt so much like real people and i found myself full on crying multiple times because of how the characters got me caught up in the story like it was actually happening. It felt real. After reading the book I was so extremely grateful that i got to witness what might be the best work of literature on earth the night before I had to leave it. After reading the book I became cleansed, I felt truly at peace with everything. I sat at my bed, getting ready for eternal slumber. Once I went to bed, I had 2 more hours. My body would give up before the morning, and that'd be it. I finally lied down I quietly said to myself "I'm okay with this..." as I slowly drifted off the sleep. This is it. This is my end. Until... I woke up. I looked out the window and saw that it was morning. I was so confused and was sure that this was a dream and not reality but sure enough it was. I started sobbing tears of joy. I saw my hospital and said that even though there was no treatment that I took that my AIDS had completely vanished. He said that suddenly, I was the healthiest I've ever been and that I now have no clear sign of death. I would live a long and happy life, and I'm not sick anymore. "what happened, what did you do to get rid of it?" he said. I told him "Look up Surviving Minecraft on google play. I didn't conquer death, it did. And trust me... it's way more than a book" surviving minecraft saved my life. I could not be more thankful for this masterpiece. If Joel is reading this review, I want him to know that you have conquered death. Thank you.
To put it bluntly, it's not written well. Some parts of the writing feel smooth and feel like they're going somewhere then most of it is just here, over there, and everywhere. Leaves quite a lot to be desired. Like I wish the development of the family was more of a bigger focus. I'm not seeing or feeling the development there. Instead it's mostly a multi crossover, school, slice of life story. <- [I don't actually know if this bit could be considered a spoiler, but I'll mark it just in case.] BUT! By turning off my brain and reading it, I'd say that this story is alright. I like the idea. I like the Russian stuff. I don't normally like multiple crossovers, but turning off brain made me an absolute beast, capable of overlooking all of my gripes. Under normal circumstances!? I wouldn't have read all of what was available to me from this. But I did. I wouldn't be saving this to come back to. But I am. Because it's admittedly fun.
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This is actually a very good fanfic, very interesting. The world background merge quite nicely between each manga, alas as it used various manga in it, it's hard to keep track of who is who if you haven't read the manga it's made of and it's quite annoying, but if you did read everything i think it's going to be very unique and fun read.
Me gustó mucho, solo espero que no sea harem siento que la relación con Ai es muy bonita. Pd: en algún momento les revelará sus ¿identidades a su familia?
I've read it since it had only 10 chapters and it's amazing, and it warms my heart
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GG good novel.
Five stars and for everyone that is questioning if it's harem or no harem...........it's a No Harem ff
I'm hooked now take responsibility. i really enjoyed it so far and looking forward to further updates, not sure what to feel if it kind off become supernatural with the books and mai thing but so far I'm enjoying the heck out of it.
Author nuked the stories ....Amazing.Mins blowing story....If the update was fast 😳 I would have read this story all week.Read the story atleast 3 times .
Every story with Ai is an automatic 5* for me, not including the fact that this story is so good so it's 5* deserving.
Where is (The System Won't Work Unless I Have Girlfriends)?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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I haven't read it yet, so this note will definitely change in the future, but I would like to ask the author a question that came to mind when reading the synopsis: Why make this a fanfic instead of an original story? The impression given in the synopsis and auxiliary chapter is that the entire plot is original, just using a few characters.
Very impressive world building and character designs. Great Job Author! [img=recommend] I hope you continue this fic and not drop it. Definitely recommend this for a read!!
I'll be brief. It's a good fanfic .Why do I think that? Well, for starters: [The characters are integrated into the story quite well. [+]There are no abrupt POV changes that can cause problems when reading (those cases when you don't understand which character is speaking at all and what's going on here, so that's not the case here :)). ) [+]Well there is some good MC character development, he is not an empty shell. [0] The quality of writing is not bad but it could be better in some places, after reading many chapters I realised that in some places the author could make the text cleaner and better, although this is my own personal obsession xD ======================================== It's a shame the chapters don't come out as often as I'd like them to. Overall not a bad story to pass the time I guess.
Reveal Spoiler 5/5 no question asked, Just update more okay, can't wait. If u are willing, make a P A T R A O N acc or PayPal or smt. I'll support u
I won't talk about how the book is since other already cover it. But i want to say if you're like me, who's brain got poisoned by "I must have all heroines" harem type of stories. This is pure torture for us. The story and characters are well made and there's too many heroines from different animes that I can't help feel that it's such a loss especially since the MC is not hopelessly inlove with his heroine and the story lightly tease us with some sparks flying around between the MC and other heroines. In short, this feels like a harem manga where the mc only choose one at the end and it's hurting my poisoned fanfiction brain.
Well, Let's discuss things that are not discussed, the idea of the story is similar to what we have seen a lot of times, a overpowered guy who now has to get used to idea of family, well it's the anime edition or more like crossover edition, nonetheless I liked the story so far, Conversations and characters are handled pretty well, I am curious whether author will incorporate more stories as time passes, The only thing I don't like is the stability of chapter updates... To conclude , my opinion is that I like it.
Reveal Spoiler Even though his update schedule is unpredictable, I still enjoy it and am always looking forward to the next chapter… so keep up the good work
I have read this book three times already 10/10 would do it again it's just that good. and no harem! Ai best girl!
This book saved my life, before I read this book I had aids and was going to die. I never came to accept the fact that I was going to go so I fell into a deep depression, I couldn't handle the thought. But what I was doing was unhealthy and everyone picked up on the fact that I was in complete denial. They all tried to get help for me but I turned it all down because I told myself that I didn't need help. "you're going to be fine" I told myself. "nothings wrong" "it's all in your head..." until the thought of death finally came to me and took over the entirety of my personality "I don't want to go..." "I DON'T WANT TO GO" "I DON'T WANT TO GO". All the help my family had tried to give me had failed and its all because of my depression and denial. I could've gotten help... but I kept telling myself there was nothing wrong. And I grew sicker, and sicker, and sicker... until I became so sick I could not get out of bed. My skin grew dry and pale, I grew skinny and weak. I could barely move and was constantly coughing up blood. I tried to come to accept fact that I was going to die, but I couldn't. Then I officially got the news that I would die in 12 hours when I woke the next day. I cried and cried all day until my daughter walked up to my bed. She said very tearfully "we really tried, dad. We did everything we thought of. There's only one thing left that I can do..." she passed me a copy of surviving Minecraft. "what's this?" I asked. "the only option we have left..." she said as she walked out of the room and slowly closed the door behind her. I picked up the copy of Surviving Minecraft and looked at the cover. The art on the cover was absolutely gorgeous, I was completely speechless at how stunning the cover was and how it got across such a big message with one simple piece of artwork. I opened up the book to what would end up being the most heart racing, realistic, and emotional adventure I'd ever go on. The characters felt so much like real people and i found myself full on crying multiple times because of how the characters got me caught up in the story like it was actually happening. It felt real. After reading the book I was so extremely grateful that i got to witness what might be the best work of literature on earth the night before I had to leave it. After reading the book I became cleansed, I felt truly at peace with everything. I sat at my bed, getting ready for eternal slumber. Once I went to bed, I had 2 more hours. My body would give up before the morning, and that'd be it. I finally lied down I quietly said to myself "I'm okay with this..." as I slowly drifted off the sleep. This is it. This is my end. Until... I woke up. I looked out the window and saw that it was morning. I was so confused and was sure that this was a dream and not reality but sure enough it was. I started sobbing tears of joy. I saw my hospital and said that even though there was no treatment that I took that my AIDS had completely vanished. He said that suddenly, I was the healthiest I've ever been and that I now have no clear sign of death. I would live a long and happy life, and I'm not sick anymore. "what happened, what did you do to get rid of it?" he said. I told him "Look up Surviving Minecraft on google play. I didn't conquer death, it did. And trust me... it's way more than a book" surviving minecraft saved my life. I could not be more thankful for this masterpiece. If Joel is reading this review, I want him to know that you have conquered death. Thank you.
To put it bluntly, it's not written well. Some parts of the writing feel smooth and feel like they're going somewhere then most of it is just here, over there, and everywhere. Leaves quite a lot to be desired. Like I wish the development of the family was more of a bigger focus. I'm not seeing or feeling the development there. Instead it's mostly a multi crossover, school, slice of life story. <- [I don't actually know if this bit could be considered a spoiler, but I'll mark it just in case.] BUT! By turning off my brain and reading it, I'd say that this story is alright. I like the idea. I like the Russian stuff. I don't normally like multiple crossovers, but turning off brain made me an absolute beast, capable of overlooking all of my gripes. Under normal circumstances!? I wouldn't have read all of what was available to me from this. But I did. I wouldn't be saving this to come back to. But I am. Because it's admittedly fun.
Reveal Spoiler This is actually a very good fanfic, very interesting. The world background merge quite nicely between each manga, alas as it used various manga in it, it's hard to keep track of who is who if you haven't read the manga it's made of and it's quite annoying, but if you did read everything i think it's going to be very unique and fun read.
Me gustó mucho, solo espero que no sea harem siento que la relación con Ai es muy bonita. Pd: en algún momento les revelará sus ¿identidades a su familia?
I've read it since it had only 10 chapters and it's amazing, and it warms my heart
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GG good novel.
Five stars and for everyone that is questioning if it's harem or no harem...........it's a No Harem ff
I'm hooked now take responsibility. i really enjoyed it so far and looking forward to further updates, not sure what to feel if it kind off become supernatural with the books and mai thing but so far I'm enjoying the heck out of it.
Author nuked the stories ....Amazing.Mins blowing story....If the update was fast 😳 I would have read this story all week.Read the story atleast 3 times .
Every story with Ai is an automatic 5* for me, not including the fact that this story is so good so it's 5* deserving.
Where is (The System Won't Work Unless I Have Girlfriends)?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????