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I just read 37 chapter of this ff and I have to say it's very impressive how the author handles the story and with a carotic mixture of characters there is a simple balance in this ff that was noteworthy. I have to say that author take care perfect job for this................eagerly waiting for your arrival bye~~
I really love your story. The massive Crossover works. especially like how you are going the non harem route. Lately, a lot of authors are just doing harem, harem, harems, and competing to see who can make the biggest one. So good on you, for staying on the true path. overall, I really like your storyline. The only issue i have is with the lack of family time. also the update schedule. However, I won't fall to you for that because I know how hard it is to write stories. In the end, thanks for the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
amazing premise and start but the mc is too op, the hitman part is alright(even though hes a bit young to be no.1) but the money is bs.also the cupid song thing, no way he rememberd lyrics and the notes of a song he heard 20yrs ago.
I'm not good at writing reviews but just want to say that I enjoyed reading this ff. The comedy was well written, although there was one joke that was used too much(the bullet wound in a certain area). I felt like it was brought up too frequently although it did make sense more or less why.Other than that I liked this book and the dynamic between the mc and the other characters. I hope you(author) continue to write this ff and see you next chapter. ✌️
Ej co jak co to jest mega przyjemna i fajnie się czyta główna postać mega fajna + jeszcze zajebiste rozwiązanie dodanie ai i Ruby i aquy ;) jest tylko jeden minus autor daje mało rozdziałów ale i tak będę czekać o się modlę żeby autor nie porzucił tego fanficka <3
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I really enjoyed the story. I can't wait to see what's next. it's hilarious how you test his faithfulness.
it’s a good s*it, but, but, the main thing is the update, but then it’s not a problem either, update?
I really love the story. I can't wait to see everyone else's reaction when they find out he's married and has the kids. I hope when you mean it's not a harem that's he will have one official relationship but still sleep around because I seen another author say it doesn't constitute as a harem if he's not committed.
The story updates slowly but the story itself is quite good. ITs funny, emotional, cute and whatever you want it to be at times. the crossover is between oshi no ko X spy x family X Love is war X OC x some more... but it doesnt get confusing. The only thing that can ruin the story is a possible harem, but till chapter 25 there is no signs of it so fingers crossed.
Not gonna lie, this is a good fanfic. I just hope this won't turn into a harem story. Ai is the best woman a man can get.
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It’s been a fun read so far. I see a lot of crossover characters from different stories though which gives me both excitement and concern since the stories I’ve read where that occurs usually don’t end well. I have high hopes you can keep the good work!
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Nice. It really is a good story, one of the few that I enjoy reading about Oshi no ko, it has a good management of characters adding characters from other animes that give it a unique touch, good job. If you don't understand what I mean, it's because I'm using a translator, so don't wait too long.
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this is a pretty good novel, compared to everything else thats trending ................................................................................
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writing quality is so fucking good. the story is excellent though it is still in its early stages, let's see in the future. Character has soul! He is not the typical edgy MC you see in most assassin/hitman FFs/Novel/Manga/Anime. I recommend reading this 👌
Every story with Ai is an automatic 5* for me, not including the fact that this story is so good so it's 5* deserving.
I just read 37 chapter of this ff and I have to say it's very impressive how the author handles the story and with a carotic mixture of characters there is a simple balance in this ff that was noteworthy. I have to say that author take care perfect job for this................eagerly waiting for your arrival bye~~
I really love your story. The massive Crossover works. especially like how you are going the non harem route. Lately, a lot of authors are just doing harem, harem, harems, and competing to see who can make the biggest one. So good on you, for staying on the true path. overall, I really like your storyline. The only issue i have is with the lack of family time. also the update schedule. However, I won't fall to you for that because I know how hard it is to write stories. In the end, thanks for the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
amazing premise and start but the mc is too op, the hitman part is alright(even though hes a bit young to be no.1) but the money is bs.also the cupid song thing, no way he rememberd lyrics and the notes of a song he heard 20yrs ago.
I'm not good at writing reviews but just want to say that I enjoyed reading this ff. The comedy was well written, although there was one joke that was used too much(the bullet wound in a certain area). I felt like it was brought up too frequently although it did make sense more or less why.Other than that I liked this book and the dynamic between the mc and the other characters. I hope you(author) continue to write this ff and see you next chapter. ✌️
Ej co jak co to jest mega przyjemna i fajnie się czyta główna postać mega fajna + jeszcze zajebiste rozwiązanie dodanie ai i Ruby i aquy ;) jest tylko jeden minus autor daje mało rozdziałów ale i tak będę czekać o się modlę żeby autor nie porzucił tego fanficka <3
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I really enjoyed the story. I can't wait to see what's next. it's hilarious how you test his faithfulness.
it’s a good s*it, but, but, the main thing is the update, but then it’s not a problem either, update?
I really love the story. I can't wait to see everyone else's reaction when they find out he's married and has the kids. I hope when you mean it's not a harem that's he will have one official relationship but still sleep around because I seen another author say it doesn't constitute as a harem if he's not committed.
The story updates slowly but the story itself is quite good. ITs funny, emotional, cute and whatever you want it to be at times. the crossover is between oshi no ko X spy x family X Love is war X OC x some more... but it doesnt get confusing. The only thing that can ruin the story is a possible harem, but till chapter 25 there is no signs of it so fingers crossed.
Not gonna lie, this is a good fanfic. I just hope this won't turn into a harem story. Ai is the best woman a man can get.
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It’s been a fun read so far. I see a lot of crossover characters from different stories though which gives me both excitement and concern since the stories I’ve read where that occurs usually don’t end well. I have high hopes you can keep the good work!
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Nice. It really is a good story, one of the few that I enjoy reading about Oshi no ko, it has a good management of characters adding characters from other animes that give it a unique touch, good job. If you don't understand what I mean, it's because I'm using a translator, so don't wait too long.
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this is a pretty good novel, compared to everything else thats trending ................................................................................
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writing quality is so fucking good. the story is excellent though it is still in its early stages, let's see in the future. Character has soul! He is not the typical edgy MC you see in most assassin/hitman FFs/Novel/Manga/Anime. I recommend reading this 👌
Every story with Ai is an automatic 5* for me, not including the fact that this story is so good so it's 5* deserving.