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Работа очень понравилась. Стиль письма - не мне судить, читал через переводчик. Автору вдохновения для своих следующих начинаний!
personally anyone that's reincarnated into another persons body would train especially since ur in Marvel the Mc just seem naive and just trusts the authorities way too much
To be honest I came in with low expectations for a marvel fanfic but was pleasantly surprised. The writing and character of the Mc is really well done. Even if it’s not my type of work to read, I still enjoyed it.
I am not a fan of harem , but even so I enjoyed the book because of the writing style the author has . I can see why the book has potential . Good grammar , nice flow of the plot line and also interesting scenes . I hope the author will continue write the book with pride ! Love it !
I was completely amazed; I really felt like I was reading an original Marvel product. Everything is very well written, the details are astonishing, and the protagonist is extremely interesting. The writing style is truly great and captivating. It was a very enjoyable reading experience!
So I think it's a nice read, If you like fanfiction novels with the Marvel universe
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This literary masterpiece invites readers into a world meticulously crafted with words. The author's narrative prowess is on full display, effortlessly guiding us through a mesmerizing labyrinth of emotions and experiences. The characters feel like old friends, their joys and sorrows palpable. As the story dances between heartache and hope, it leaves us contemplating our own lives. A captivating symphony of storytelling, this book resonates long after the final chapter, a testament to its enduring impact on the literary landscape.
It's really well written. Not much, if any, grammatical errors. I put a 4 on character design because the acceptance of polyamory/harem was forced(?) or not explained. It just kinda happened. I'm gonna chalk it up to insecurities that the women have been shown to have and the fact that it doesn't seem like they've put labels on the relationship. Keep up the good work.
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An enjoyable read so far. Good character development. The side characters seem nice and good. The segs are ahem! too good and well written. Grammer is alright, I don't think I saw any problems with the writing style. Thank you. Keep it up.
I don't mind the slow burn. It's actually enjoyable and immersive for me. The characters are lively and well written. Over all, not a bad read. I can't wait to find which way you take this fan fiction to.
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A good read so far. I like the fact that MC who doesn't have any fighting experience or hasn't killed anyone, struggles with the fact that he took someone's life, then he trains and decides to get stronger. It was a fun character development. And I am enjoying the segs and relationship struggles with MC and Peggy.
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Enjoying every chs. Keep up the good work author.[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
the author tries way too hard, every sentence us filled with unnecessary big/complicated words and the descriptions end up take massive parts of the chapters, its not a bad story its just a chore to read and gets boring very quickly with how rigid the conversations are
ahhhh my sense is tingling by those patreon exclusive thing. I seem to see those somewhere....
Slice of life, slow burn[somewhat], interesting plot without any complicated mind boggling things that's too difficult to understand, lively characters, stable update, very little typos, good grammar. Good read so far. I would like to see MC fighting some villains.
So yeah, pretty good as always.. but imma stack chaps first, its hard reading novels with few chaps its like being blueballed, that kind of feeling 🤣🤣🤣
A good slice of life Marvel fanfiction which is really an enjoyable read so far. The side characters feel lively instead of some mindless s*aves. The romantic drama is well written. Keep up.
Marvel universe, slice of life, slow burn, no mindless s*x, a unique take if you are able to get into the story, you will want more. And my favorite Invisible woman, Ghost Spider and Captain Carter.
good story, after the captain carter chapters I didn't understand anything about the story (my fault) good job, continue with the story[img=recommend]
Nice read so far. I don't mind the slow burn, but my only complaint is to make MC fight someone or at least show him using his powers. It would be fun to see.
As a long time follower, I know this story is going to be another slowburn gem. Don't let the negative comments dissuade you. You keep going at your pace.
A unique slice of life Marvel story which is really enjoyable. Girls are not fk S*aves and no ntr which is a plus point. [img=update][img=update]
Here I am with the usual 5 star review. Let me know if you have any questions or something that needed fixing. Keep an eye out for the public polls. Have a great day.
Работа очень понравилась. Стиль письма - не мне судить, читал через переводчик. Автору вдохновения для своих следующих начинаний!
personally anyone that's reincarnated into another persons body would train especially since ur in Marvel the Mc just seem naive and just trusts the authorities way too much
To be honest I came in with low expectations for a marvel fanfic but was pleasantly surprised. The writing and character of the Mc is really well done. Even if it’s not my type of work to read, I still enjoyed it.
I am not a fan of harem , but even so I enjoyed the book because of the writing style the author has . I can see why the book has potential . Good grammar , nice flow of the plot line and also interesting scenes . I hope the author will continue write the book with pride ! Love it !
I was completely amazed; I really felt like I was reading an original Marvel product. Everything is very well written, the details are astonishing, and the protagonist is extremely interesting. The writing style is truly great and captivating. It was a very enjoyable reading experience!
So I think it's a nice read, If you like fanfiction novels with the Marvel universe
🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩😍😍😍🤩🤩😍😍😍😍🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩😍😍😍😍 Love the novel, no need to read further reviews, just read.
This literary masterpiece invites readers into a world meticulously crafted with words. The author's narrative prowess is on full display, effortlessly guiding us through a mesmerizing labyrinth of emotions and experiences. The characters feel like old friends, their joys and sorrows palpable. As the story dances between heartache and hope, it leaves us contemplating our own lives. A captivating symphony of storytelling, this book resonates long after the final chapter, a testament to its enduring impact on the literary landscape.
It's really well written. Not much, if any, grammatical errors. I put a 4 on character design because the acceptance of polyamory/harem was forced(?) or not explained. It just kinda happened. I'm gonna chalk it up to insecurities that the women have been shown to have and the fact that it doesn't seem like they've put labels on the relationship. Keep up the good work.
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An enjoyable read so far. Good character development. The side characters seem nice and good. The segs are ahem! too good and well written. Grammer is alright, I don't think I saw any problems with the writing style. Thank you. Keep it up.
I don't mind the slow burn. It's actually enjoyable and immersive for me. The characters are lively and well written. Over all, not a bad read. I can't wait to find which way you take this fan fiction to.
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A good read so far. I like the fact that MC who doesn't have any fighting experience or hasn't killed anyone, struggles with the fact that he took someone's life, then he trains and decides to get stronger. It was a fun character development. And I am enjoying the segs and relationship struggles with MC and Peggy.
Reveal Spoiler Enjoying every chs. Keep up the good work author.[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
the author tries way too hard, every sentence us filled with unnecessary big/complicated words and the descriptions end up take massive parts of the chapters, its not a bad story its just a chore to read and gets boring very quickly with how rigid the conversations are
ahhhh my sense is tingling by those patreon exclusive thing. I seem to see those somewhere....
Slice of life, slow burn[somewhat], interesting plot without any complicated mind boggling things that's too difficult to understand, lively characters, stable update, very little typos, good grammar. Good read so far. I would like to see MC fighting some villains.
So yeah, pretty good as always.. but imma stack chaps first, its hard reading novels with few chaps its like being blueballed, that kind of feeling 🤣🤣🤣
A good slice of life Marvel fanfiction which is really an enjoyable read so far. The side characters feel lively instead of some mindless s*aves. The romantic drama is well written. Keep up.
Marvel universe, slice of life, slow burn, no mindless s*x, a unique take if you are able to get into the story, you will want more. And my favorite Invisible woman, Ghost Spider and Captain Carter.
good story, after the captain carter chapters I didn't understand anything about the story (my fault) good job, continue with the story[img=recommend]
Nice read so far. I don't mind the slow burn, but my only complaint is to make MC fight someone or at least show him using his powers. It would be fun to see.
As a long time follower, I know this story is going to be another slowburn gem. Don't let the negative comments dissuade you. You keep going at your pace.
A unique slice of life Marvel story which is really enjoyable. Girls are not fk S*aves and no ntr which is a plus point. [img=update][img=update]
Here I am with the usual 5 star review. Let me know if you have any questions or something that needed fixing. Keep an eye out for the public polls. Have a great day.