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The story and the plot grabbed my interest from the first chapter. I loved the descriptions of each scene especially the action one. It is very simple to read with catchy dialogues. Luan does have the charm to capture people's attention and here I am eager to see the next chapter. Keep going, author... All the best.
You know what, I really liked this story, it's something I'm really into and although the beginning might throw you off for a minute, it's like it walks you through it, without just telling you, you go through his new life with him and he brings you along, it's truly spectacular to imagine and view, I don't really have any complaints with anything in the novel, and honestly I really enjoyed it. So in all and all, Awesome book author! And I can't wait for another chapter ✨
The author has done more than just enough. This book is amazing with a gripping story that hooks you in the first few chapters. The only thing to make it better is to update more often
so far the story is getting quite interesting. One of the few books of this genre that I've read and your writing is really good, the characters are expressed really well and the plot is interesting as well
Great story, the writing style is also good... I found the plot really interesting. Hooked me from the first page...Can't wait to read more!
It's quite an interesting book...I'm a fan of fantasy and especially werewolves..and this book gives all to quench my thirst. It's filled with some amazing scenes and the writing quality is awesome. I would like to follow its lead.
Alright, what did I just read 😂😂.. Men!, it feels like am actually there in the book, what kind of magic is this, author 😂😂.. Oh God, am totally loving this book right now. Author just update, update, update, alright..
I really like the world design. It feels dark and creepy, yet realistic. The pacing is extremely well designed and the world building as well, as mentioned before. This is an extremely engaging story and I recommend everyone to check it out. I will definitely continue to read it.
OMG can't stop reading I think am getting addicted to this book ...Once I started reading I couldn't get enough of it . Give me more please update ... please
I must say that this is a very good book. I think I'm already in love with the characters.
Great read! Requires a little transition at first but a very good read overall
I am hooked. The starting, the characters, and the background setting plus the plot follow up are so awesome. I love it already. The MC is the one who got me on edge waiting for his next act. I love it.
The concept was unique to me and was very original. Like a dual personality of a female and male in one body. Also liked the execution of such a difficult idea. This is pretty much to my liking! Kudos and a job well done. [img=strong][img=update]
is a webnovel that takes readers on an engaging and thought-provoking journey. With its unique blend of mystery, romance, and supernatural elements, this story manages to captivate and leave a lasting impression. The narrative revolves around the enigmatic protagonist, who discovers an extraordinary ability: the power to glimpse into the future, but only in relation to their own life. This intriguing concept immediately sets the stage for a plot full of suspense and anticipation. Flattened_Rice_007's writing style effectively draws readers in, expertly crafting an atmosphere of curiosity and wonder. One of the novel's greatest strengths lies in its well-developed characters. The protagonist is portrayed with depth and complexity, making them relatable and easy to invest in emotionally. The supporting characters, each with their own unique traits and backgrounds, add layers to the story, ensuring a rich and diverse cast. The author skillfully balances the various genres present within the story. The elements of mystery and suspense keep readers on the edge of their seats, as they eagerly anticipate each twist and turn. The romantic subplot adds a touch of tenderness and warmth to the overall narrative, beautifully intertwining with the main plotline. The pacing of the story is generally well-maintained, although there are moments where it could benefit from a slightly faster tempo. However, this is a minor quibble, as the author compensates with vivid descriptions and immersive world-building, painting a clear picture of the story's setting and enhancing the reading experience. Despite its many strengths, "Moonlit Identity" does have a few areas for improvement. Occasionally, certain plot points and character motivations feel slightly rushed or underdeveloped, leaving some questions unanswered. Additionally, the novel's climax could have been more explosive and impactful, given the buildup of tension throughout the story. In conclusion, "Moonlit Identity" by Flattened_Rice_007 is a webnovel that successfully combines mystery, romance, and supernatural elements into an enticing narrative. With well-rounded characters, an engaging plot, and a touch of the paranormal, it offers an enjoyable reading experience. Although there are minor areas that could be enhanced, this webnovel is certainly worth diving into for fans of the genre.
Hmmm, it's a good story, but if you could make the MC motives clearer, I could get immersed more in the story. Keep up the good work, Author!
It captures the reader's attention and never lets go. Once your curiosity is satisfied then new questions arise... once those are answered then there's another. The story starts by stirring up some emotions and once you are hooked in there's no way out. I author's way of describing the feelings, atmosphere, and settings is smooth and fresh. The writing style and grammar is clean, and the plot and world bg develop as we learn more about the MC and his current state. It's binge-worthy. We need more chapters...
The writing of the characters is good, the only mistake I've seen is that some commas are written when they shouldn't be there, and sometimes there is something wrong with the sentences, a single word or so. it was good since the name you used in the characters isn't randomized and there's also a background within the name like Samuel who became Lucifer but that's just in the show Since in the bible, it wasn't stated he became Lucifer but the description that you showed about him is good since Lucifer is known for being prideful There was sometimes no description of where they are but it's still good.
Despite the few chapters, I've fallen in love with Luan and his little thoughts~ Everything here is well-written. The dialogues are fun and engaging and the descriptions are life-like. Recommending this to everyone who likes vampire fantasies ❤️
The story is interesting and the way you described the character through their appearance and behavior is good. The narration/describing the surroundings is well-made and understandable. I just noticed something, when putting a comma (,) in dialogue you should put it inside the quotation marks and not outside. But overall it's an interesting story.
Okay I know I am late but here is my review. Characters:- No problem with them. All characters are written good Grammar:- Could be better. I noticed that you mostly forgot to capitalise the first later. In some cases you added comma when it’s not necessary. You should reread the chapters out aloud and fix the errors. I use grammarly for this thing. Overall, everything else was good. It’s just my advice but you should change the cover to get more readers. Most people get attracted by covers more.
The book is amazing and the story is already building up nicely in the first few chapters. The only issue I have is the lack of action and danger but it's generally a great read.
The author did a very good job in making the story seem interesting and portrayed well. The story is good and intriguing. overall I liked the novel and keep up the good work author
I love the story especially the character luan.This story is so beautiful[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Interesting story with great potential. The MC Luan is very unique, his rebellious spirit that got him a beating from Samael made me laugh. I can wait to see what other races are in this world and how Luan will interact with them. Overall, a good novel with great potential.
First of all i loved yours story. Every details is on point. i love the way the plot is going. although i don't really like fantasy or magic but if it's this book i can read it. keep it up waiting for more
Story is interesting and catches the reader heart its has potential looking forward for new chapters .
Everything in this story is madly wonderful, the pace I love it it makes me stay on the edge of my seat. The descriptions are just on whole level. I loved the first five chapters. Also, I love three characters till now, 1. Luan 2.Athan 3.Aurora.
Good story, man I didn't find any grammer or typo errors, they story is easy to understand and is also well written, Please make more chapter. Keep up your work dude
The only thing I can scream is MORE, MORE, MORE!!! I love the fact that there's no backstory which simply means that we get to find out everything about luan bit by bit. I love the way you describe every little detail. I just can't wait to see the journey of luan in this new world
To be honest, the start of the story was quite sudden. As if you are told to ride a rollercoaster without any reminders. But, I think that the premise and the concept themselves are interesting. The writing style is also narrative and descriptive enough. Still, I suggest to add some clues as whether the characters are talking in their minds or not, because if you just enclose them in brackets it can be a little confusing ;P. Wishing you an enjoyable journey.
I am a first-time writer, attempting to build a magical story. So please read, support, and guide this story as much as possible. I hope you enjoy this journey.
The story and the plot grabbed my interest from the first chapter. I loved the descriptions of each scene especially the action one. It is very simple to read with catchy dialogues. Luan does have the charm to capture people's attention and here I am eager to see the next chapter. Keep going, author... All the best.
You know what, I really liked this story, it's something I'm really into and although the beginning might throw you off for a minute, it's like it walks you through it, without just telling you, you go through his new life with him and he brings you along, it's truly spectacular to imagine and view, I don't really have any complaints with anything in the novel, and honestly I really enjoyed it. So in all and all, Awesome book author! And I can't wait for another chapter ✨
The author has done more than just enough. This book is amazing with a gripping story that hooks you in the first few chapters. The only thing to make it better is to update more often
so far the story is getting quite interesting. One of the few books of this genre that I've read and your writing is really good, the characters are expressed really well and the plot is interesting as well
Great story, the writing style is also good... I found the plot really interesting. Hooked me from the first page...Can't wait to read more!
It's quite an interesting book...I'm a fan of fantasy and especially werewolves..and this book gives all to quench my thirst. It's filled with some amazing scenes and the writing quality is awesome. I would like to follow its lead.
Alright, what did I just read 😂😂.. Men!, it feels like am actually there in the book, what kind of magic is this, author 😂😂.. Oh God, am totally loving this book right now. Author just update, update, update, alright..
I really like the world design. It feels dark and creepy, yet realistic. The pacing is extremely well designed and the world building as well, as mentioned before. This is an extremely engaging story and I recommend everyone to check it out. I will definitely continue to read it.
OMG can't stop reading I think am getting addicted to this book ...Once I started reading I couldn't get enough of it . Give me more please update ... please
I must say that this is a very good book. I think I'm already in love with the characters.
Great read! Requires a little transition at first but a very good read overall
I am hooked. The starting, the characters, and the background setting plus the plot follow up are so awesome. I love it already. The MC is the one who got me on edge waiting for his next act. I love it.
The concept was unique to me and was very original. Like a dual personality of a female and male in one body. Also liked the execution of such a difficult idea. This is pretty much to my liking! Kudos and a job well done. [img=strong][img=update]
is a webnovel that takes readers on an engaging and thought-provoking journey. With its unique blend of mystery, romance, and supernatural elements, this story manages to captivate and leave a lasting impression. The narrative revolves around the enigmatic protagonist, who discovers an extraordinary ability: the power to glimpse into the future, but only in relation to their own life. This intriguing concept immediately sets the stage for a plot full of suspense and anticipation. Flattened_Rice_007's writing style effectively draws readers in, expertly crafting an atmosphere of curiosity and wonder. One of the novel's greatest strengths lies in its well-developed characters. The protagonist is portrayed with depth and complexity, making them relatable and easy to invest in emotionally. The supporting characters, each with their own unique traits and backgrounds, add layers to the story, ensuring a rich and diverse cast. The author skillfully balances the various genres present within the story. The elements of mystery and suspense keep readers on the edge of their seats, as they eagerly anticipate each twist and turn. The romantic subplot adds a touch of tenderness and warmth to the overall narrative, beautifully intertwining with the main plotline. The pacing of the story is generally well-maintained, although there are moments where it could benefit from a slightly faster tempo. However, this is a minor quibble, as the author compensates with vivid descriptions and immersive world-building, painting a clear picture of the story's setting and enhancing the reading experience. Despite its many strengths, "Moonlit Identity" does have a few areas for improvement. Occasionally, certain plot points and character motivations feel slightly rushed or underdeveloped, leaving some questions unanswered. Additionally, the novel's climax could have been more explosive and impactful, given the buildup of tension throughout the story. In conclusion, "Moonlit Identity" by Flattened_Rice_007 is a webnovel that successfully combines mystery, romance, and supernatural elements into an enticing narrative. With well-rounded characters, an engaging plot, and a touch of the paranormal, it offers an enjoyable reading experience. Although there are minor areas that could be enhanced, this webnovel is certainly worth diving into for fans of the genre.
Hmmm, it's a good story, but if you could make the MC motives clearer, I could get immersed more in the story. Keep up the good work, Author!
It captures the reader's attention and never lets go. Once your curiosity is satisfied then new questions arise... once those are answered then there's another. The story starts by stirring up some emotions and once you are hooked in there's no way out. I author's way of describing the feelings, atmosphere, and settings is smooth and fresh. The writing style and grammar is clean, and the plot and world bg develop as we learn more about the MC and his current state. It's binge-worthy. We need more chapters...
The writing of the characters is good, the only mistake I've seen is that some commas are written when they shouldn't be there, and sometimes there is something wrong with the sentences, a single word or so. it was good since the name you used in the characters isn't randomized and there's also a background within the name like Samuel who became Lucifer but that's just in the show Since in the bible, it wasn't stated he became Lucifer but the description that you showed about him is good since Lucifer is known for being prideful There was sometimes no description of where they are but it's still good.
Despite the few chapters, I've fallen in love with Luan and his little thoughts~ Everything here is well-written. The dialogues are fun and engaging and the descriptions are life-like. Recommending this to everyone who likes vampire fantasies ❤️
The story is interesting and the way you described the character through their appearance and behavior is good. The narration/describing the surroundings is well-made and understandable. I just noticed something, when putting a comma (,) in dialogue you should put it inside the quotation marks and not outside. But overall it's an interesting story.
Okay I know I am late but here is my review. Characters:- No problem with them. All characters are written good Grammar:- Could be better. I noticed that you mostly forgot to capitalise the first later. In some cases you added comma when it’s not necessary. You should reread the chapters out aloud and fix the errors. I use grammarly for this thing. Overall, everything else was good. It’s just my advice but you should change the cover to get more readers. Most people get attracted by covers more.
The book is amazing and the story is already building up nicely in the first few chapters. The only issue I have is the lack of action and danger but it's generally a great read.
The author did a very good job in making the story seem interesting and portrayed well. The story is good and intriguing. overall I liked the novel and keep up the good work author
I love the story especially the character luan.This story is so beautiful[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Interesting story with great potential. The MC Luan is very unique, his rebellious spirit that got him a beating from Samael made me laugh. I can wait to see what other races are in this world and how Luan will interact with them. Overall, a good novel with great potential.
First of all i loved yours story. Every details is on point. i love the way the plot is going. although i don't really like fantasy or magic but if it's this book i can read it. keep it up waiting for more
Story is interesting and catches the reader heart its has potential looking forward for new chapters .
Everything in this story is madly wonderful, the pace I love it it makes me stay on the edge of my seat. The descriptions are just on whole level. I loved the first five chapters. Also, I love three characters till now, 1. Luan 2.Athan 3.Aurora.
Good story, man I didn't find any grammer or typo errors, they story is easy to understand and is also well written, Please make more chapter. Keep up your work dude
The only thing I can scream is MORE, MORE, MORE!!! I love the fact that there's no backstory which simply means that we get to find out everything about luan bit by bit. I love the way you describe every little detail. I just can't wait to see the journey of luan in this new world
To be honest, the start of the story was quite sudden. As if you are told to ride a rollercoaster without any reminders. But, I think that the premise and the concept themselves are interesting. The writing style is also narrative and descriptive enough. Still, I suggest to add some clues as whether the characters are talking in their minds or not, because if you just enclose them in brackets it can be a little confusing ;P. Wishing you an enjoyable journey.
I am a first-time writer, attempting to build a magical story. So please read, support, and guide this story as much as possible. I hope you enjoy this journey.