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yeyyyyyy, another genshin fanfic to read, this fanfic is actually good and you won't waste your time reading this, keep up the good work author
aborei, a forma com q os presonagens se expersao e a emoçao e eles conseguem trasmitir, a melancolia a historia e fundo, e possivel sentir q eles sao pessoas e nao bonecos, MUITO BOM
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as from the synopsis and first chapters its more than enough see that this a unique novel compared to others with the same ol same ol story hope author dont drop this [img=recommend]KEEP IT UP[img=recommend]
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Writing Quality: 4 stars - It's clean writing and the author has a good style. No grammatical errors in sight. Story Development: 4 stars - It has a relatively smooth flow of the story and the scenes are not forced. Character Design: 5 stars - The author designed their protagonist decently. He has a consistent background and an established persona. There's also this characteristic of the main character that makes him poetic (probably due to his old age), which is something I find interesting in most novels. Updating stability: 4 stars - It's good. World Background: 5 stars - You can tell that the author did some research about the game's lore and knows about it quite well. Additionally, the author incorporates the lore well with the protagonist's system and background as well as his fate as an "Immigrant". Overall: 4.4 Stars - Good read, and I'm definitely staying for the feels.
ugh author san the synopsis is a bit confusing..can u explain the plot of the story.and are u 100%sureeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee that un will complete this?
If you feel frustrate about the lack of chapter, go to Wuxiap.com. In there, go to search and type [Yuanshen, as a mortal, I cannot accompany you to the end]. It have 102 chapter though the translation leave something to be desired. I can't tell if it is finished or not. Anyway your welcome
yeyyyyyy, another genshin fanfic to read, this fanfic is actually good and you won't waste your time reading this, keep up the good work author
aborei, a forma com q os presonagens se expersao e a emoçao e eles conseguem trasmitir, a melancolia a historia e fundo, e possivel sentir q eles sao pessoas e nao bonecos, MUITO BOM
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as from the synopsis and first chapters its more than enough see that this a unique novel compared to others with the same ol same ol story hope author dont drop this [img=recommend]KEEP IT UP[img=recommend]
Hope You Don't Drop This [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing Quality: 4 stars - It's clean writing and the author has a good style. No grammatical errors in sight. Story Development: 4 stars - It has a relatively smooth flow of the story and the scenes are not forced. Character Design: 5 stars - The author designed their protagonist decently. He has a consistent background and an established persona. There's also this characteristic of the main character that makes him poetic (probably due to his old age), which is something I find interesting in most novels. Updating stability: 4 stars - It's good. World Background: 5 stars - You can tell that the author did some research about the game's lore and knows about it quite well. Additionally, the author incorporates the lore well with the protagonist's system and background as well as his fate as an "Immigrant". Overall: 4.4 Stars - Good read, and I'm definitely staying for the feels.
ugh author san the synopsis is a bit confusing..can u explain the plot of the story.and are u 100%sureeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee that un will complete this?
If you feel frustrate about the lack of chapter, go to Wuxiap.com. In there, go to search and type [Yuanshen, as a mortal, I cannot accompany you to the end]. It have 102 chapter though the translation leave something to be desired. I can't tell if it is finished or not. Anyway your welcome