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The title of the book alone is intriguing but as you read the story it's really good work on the author's part. The flashbacks are vivid and the dialogue is natural for the characters who I believe to be Japanese. The internal struggles of each character unfold in a tasteful way showing the author is really good at pacing. Great work, keep it up!
So I do quite like this novel, its pretty good in the way it approaches the character and world building. I do like the way the dialogue is approached, its very good. So far the novel feels a bit slow burn from what I read
I love the story. It has a great storyline and good character design. It's well-written, and the emotions of the characters are well-expressed. Kudos to the Author!
This book is unexpecting it just keeps getting better and I never see it coming
Well done author🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃....... I hope you post more chapters, don't leave me hanging.
Great book you have there. At first, i must admit i thought it wouldn't be thrilling, but man! this book is awesome. More regular updates
Very good! The flow of writing is very nice, even a bit poetic. The characters are also fleshed out, and there is enough mystery in the plot to look forward to. Again, a very very good read!
The author's vivid descriptions bring the settings to life, immersing the reader in a rich and atmospheric world. The dialogue is sharp and authentic, revealing insights into the characters' personalities and building tension during crucial moments. Overall it is a captivating and engrossing novel.
Okay, let me start off by saying that I was totally hooked on this story from the first page. It was just the right mix of mystery, and suspense that kept me turning the pages. The characters were really well-developed too, with their own unique personalities and motivations. I found myself really invested in their journey. I can't wait to see what happens next.
What an interesting story with good story line. kudus to the author for bringing up this amazing idea. please try as much to update more chapters soon.
I think a lot of otbwe readers had this experience, and it wasn't just me. This book was surprising good, especially in its planning and how it is thought out. it is very creative. Good job authornim!
The story follows the protagonist Lucinda as she navigates through her thoughts and experiences on a bus ride. The story takes a dramatic turn when she is saved by a stranger from a potentially fatal accident. She displays selflessness in helping the stranger and caring for his injuries, even though she is injured herself. The story is full of vivid imagery and emotions, and it highlights the importance of human connection and empathy in difficult situations.
It's quite interesting and I love the plot flow. The storyline also gives a wonderful and enticing feeling. Well-done author 👍
Wow, I am just like wow, I never expected this book to be this awesome, I am left in awe 😲
Right from the first chapter, I knew this book was a whole lot better than I thought, I love the intrigue, love the drama... Absolutely love this author work, it so amazing, I just love it, perfect five star.. Author just keep on updating
this book was much better than I thought it was going to be it usually is not in my wheelhouse of books that I read but I give the author two thumbs up for a good book so far. I have only read a chapters of this book but it is definitely worth the journey keep up all the good work from what author to another.
I love how you write! Absolutely a great read. The way you described the character’s emotions, the situation, the protagonist, the male lead- everything ties up so well! Keep it up, author!
Great quality of the writing in itself. It is quite descriptive. The characters also get described enough to be able to picture them and the scenaion/scenery.
I liked this very much. I'm curious about the female lead more and more. The male lead made me smile as well. I'm going to keep reading because I like this so far.
I love the pacing and how each character contributes in each scene! 😍 Keep writing! ❤️❤️❤️
This story got me hooked. It is solely because of the plot and the way the author describes the situation. I can imagine what is happening inside the novel. Please continue this novel author
I was surprised when I saw this novel, I was expecting something boring but it was not, it is very well written, and you can see the effort the author put in.
I am quite hooked on the story. I enjoy reading more about the characters with each chapter, I find them really entertaining. The chapters don't feel too long either and the plot advances at a nice pace. I really like what you have here, keep it up!
What can I say except wonderful. It's a great work gleaned by the author. The story background and character setting is nicely done. It's one of the best works I've read so far. Keep up the good work.
The title of the book alone is intriguing but as you read the story it's really good work on the author's part. The flashbacks are vivid and the dialogue is natural for the characters who I believe to be Japanese. The internal struggles of each character unfold in a tasteful way showing the author is really good at pacing. Great work, keep it up!
So I do quite like this novel, its pretty good in the way it approaches the character and world building. I do like the way the dialogue is approached, its very good. So far the novel feels a bit slow burn from what I read
I love the story. It has a great storyline and good character design. It's well-written, and the emotions of the characters are well-expressed. Kudos to the Author!
This book is unexpecting it just keeps getting better and I never see it coming
Well done author🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃....... I hope you post more chapters, don't leave me hanging.
Great book you have there. At first, i must admit i thought it wouldn't be thrilling, but man! this book is awesome. More regular updates
Very good! The flow of writing is very nice, even a bit poetic. The characters are also fleshed out, and there is enough mystery in the plot to look forward to. Again, a very very good read!
The author's vivid descriptions bring the settings to life, immersing the reader in a rich and atmospheric world. The dialogue is sharp and authentic, revealing insights into the characters' personalities and building tension during crucial moments. Overall it is a captivating and engrossing novel.
Okay, let me start off by saying that I was totally hooked on this story from the first page. It was just the right mix of mystery, and suspense that kept me turning the pages. The characters were really well-developed too, with their own unique personalities and motivations. I found myself really invested in their journey. I can't wait to see what happens next.
What an interesting story with good story line. kudus to the author for bringing up this amazing idea. please try as much to update more chapters soon.
I think a lot of otbwe readers had this experience, and it wasn't just me. This book was surprising good, especially in its planning and how it is thought out. it is very creative. Good job authornim!
The story follows the protagonist Lucinda as she navigates through her thoughts and experiences on a bus ride. The story takes a dramatic turn when she is saved by a stranger from a potentially fatal accident. She displays selflessness in helping the stranger and caring for his injuries, even though she is injured herself. The story is full of vivid imagery and emotions, and it highlights the importance of human connection and empathy in difficult situations.
It's quite interesting and I love the plot flow. The storyline also gives a wonderful and enticing feeling. Well-done author 👍
Wow, I am just like wow, I never expected this book to be this awesome, I am left in awe 😲
Right from the first chapter, I knew this book was a whole lot better than I thought, I love the intrigue, love the drama... Absolutely love this author work, it so amazing, I just love it, perfect five star.. Author just keep on updating
this book was much better than I thought it was going to be it usually is not in my wheelhouse of books that I read but I give the author two thumbs up for a good book so far. I have only read a chapters of this book but it is definitely worth the journey keep up all the good work from what author to another.
I love how you write! Absolutely a great read. The way you described the character’s emotions, the situation, the protagonist, the male lead- everything ties up so well! Keep it up, author!
Great quality of the writing in itself. It is quite descriptive. The characters also get described enough to be able to picture them and the scenaion/scenery.
I liked this very much. I'm curious about the female lead more and more. The male lead made me smile as well. I'm going to keep reading because I like this so far.
I love the pacing and how each character contributes in each scene! 😍 Keep writing! ❤️❤️❤️
This story got me hooked. It is solely because of the plot and the way the author describes the situation. I can imagine what is happening inside the novel. Please continue this novel author
I was surprised when I saw this novel, I was expecting something boring but it was not, it is very well written, and you can see the effort the author put in.
I am quite hooked on the story. I enjoy reading more about the characters with each chapter, I find them really entertaining. The chapters don't feel too long either and the plot advances at a nice pace. I really like what you have here, keep it up!
What can I say except wonderful. It's a great work gleaned by the author. The story background and character setting is nicely done. It's one of the best works I've read so far. Keep up the good work.
Hmmm may the author always in good shape so he/she will update more