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I think this superhero story is rather generic, but if you like these types of magical and unique worlds, then this book is definitely for you. It wasn't bad, and overall rather good. I think that this would be a could story as long as the author develops each character uniquely.
Of course! Super good book so far!!!!
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The first 2 chaps start off slow ngl but push through! After that, the story fully devolopes and your able to travel withe MC. Its rather interedting, and love the dif povs that switch. Good job!
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Never knee I 2ould be interested in necromancy, but here I am! There id a good blend amongst the Martial arts and necromancy. I will say, the book dors start off really slow, so wuick w a's rning. But after thet, it most likely gets better! Good job author!
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Please take this review lightly, since you have a lot of time to look over everything and become a better writer! I will say, you should definitely impeove the quality. If that seems like a lot, post one or two chaps a week. it is better! Remember, quality over quantity!
In case anyone needs a little bit of comedy in their lives, this is a good story for that. It is sarcastis, satirical, and breaks the limits of the imagineation. Of course, in a good way. Very incredible book! I personally love it!
I think that this story could be a lot and should be a lot. It seems very extraordinary in terms of the plot line and the way in which the author is telling the story. I think the only issue is the fact that this story definitely doesn't hook the reader until the 3rd or 4th chapter. Why don't expect the author to change this I do think that some hooking material in the 1st few chapters can definitely improve the book.
The characters are very unique and childlike without being childish. Very good story, and I especially love the characters and their little descriptions.
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original A Single Step Into Darkness
For most, the world was a horrific and disastrous place. For most, the world was filled with all different types of horrors, ones people can’t forget. For most, the world would burn in a matter of days without rules. It was a horrific premise to think about. A horrific idea. For someone to believe that all of the world was evil. That there was no one in the world, that was good enough to save it. But Jingfei wasn’t most. ____ A Chinese vampire romance about love and blood103 Chs 40 Collections
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Autumn Leaves and Blooming Petals
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Hsien Lian, after 2000 years, is back in Heaven. But he's not happy. Being degraded from a Melee God to only a Noble, Hsien Lian now has to find a way to get back up to his past status. The easiest way, hunt the ghost named The God's Reaper. But with that, comes an entirely new threat, that no one has imagined. Memories are hidden under piles of dead humans, and now Hsien Lian has to figure it out. But luckily, he has helped.63 Chs 9 Collections
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Mamori Tai
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"As a teacher, school sucks. Hisoki runs towards his designated classroom, ten minutes late. Why was he late? He's the damn teacher! He huffs, running down the identical halls, the room numbers slowly rising. 206, 207, 208,209….. He was going to be teaching in room 221, what hall was that in again? He had tried to look nice for school, having his black hair flat ironed, and a brown tie to match his shoes. His vintage shoulder bag was starting to weigh on him, slowing down his movements. The bell had already rung ten minutes ago, but he wasn't even at school by that time. His entire morning routine was set back thirty minutes, since his alarm didn't wake him up, his dog did. "Come on.." Hisoki muttered, continuing to run down the halls. 219, 220, 221, 222- oh wait! He took a couple of steps back, placing his hand on the door." At Yokosa's Boys School of the World, only the richest and smartest get to go. So when five boys with polar opposite personalities get put in an English class together, chaos always erupts. And secrets always go down in flames.81 Chs 57 Collections
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The Boy With The Pink Hair
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A Police Officer and a Gang Leader, what could go wrong?33 Chs 61 Collections
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Why Can't Love Be Easy?
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Park. He a some-what smart sophomore that plays soccer. However, he quickly meets a boy named Thomas. While failing chemistry, he needs Thomas to tutor him. Well, when things go wrong quickly, Park inhales some bad chemicals. Hallucinations in his head, Park now has to deal with something even worse. He can't like Thomas, right?27 Chs 43 Collections
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He Never Did What You Do
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He Never Did What You Do is about a boy named Justin who just wanted a good life. But, after his husband loses his job, his life becomes a living hell. 5 years later, he sees a waiter that he reconiges the day hs husband proposed to him. They quickly become friends, but when Justin's husb and accuses him of something terrible, Justin and Liam have to somehow make it out of this trouble, alive.21 Chs 30 Collections
While this story is a common trope, I do see tons of ideas that could become important. I also have built a connection with Kazuki, to the point where sometimes I want to hug him, and others I want to hit him. In all, I think this is the start to a very good story! Keep going author-nim!
The Shadow Oath
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