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I saw your fandom page would ever go back and update it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] it looks awesome by the way I want to see what it looks like when itโs updated
its about time I leave a review the book is amazing in my view there are chapter that are boring but that's to be expected, the start if the book feels a little wierd and can be of putting, but if you can read into the far chapter it picks up really well archer seems very over power and he is but there are still force that dwarf him in strength and he doesn't have a smooth sail all the way the author has a planning his following it, summary make it past those odd. chapters and the book tells a really good story.
Honestly the story is pretty great and world building is absolutely amazing, only downsides are the mc gets randomly nerfed which is incredibly annoying and the writing has too much detail like I picture the scene in the first paragraph no need to add to more. But overall pretty great story.
Keep this up :) ! [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it]
author it seem aeris missing in the story after they went to aquaria? just asking
I Stopped reading after 200 Chapters, its weird how this book will be really in depth on unneeded stuff as every detail of just a random house that was walked into witch no one cares that much about unless its a returning house, but then On other things it makes no sense. A huge thing that bothers me is the MC will meet people or People will meet the MC and just 100% trust each other and its like uhm no they have 0 reason to trust each Other. A big example is his "General". Idk the progression is just weird to me it feels like the story doesnt Flow together, when something important is happening with the MC then a random 3 chapters of just non needed info at the point gets dumped into the story abruptly just feels out of place and cuts the Flow of the story really bad. also the flashes to the "future" is a little annoying. Past Flashbacks make sense in certain situations but future ones can ruin a lot of Suspense on certain in counters. Either way i wish you luck but i am dropping this i tried but i just cant get drawn into this book that is all over the place.
I kinda love this novel but couldn't understand why novel has so many chapters cuz mc is really getting stronger fast.but after chapter 80 now I understand very much.cuz after that story goes back in time and forward.constantly changes pov. if there're 2 chapter mc's pov 2 chapter must have another persons pov or diff timeline.SPOฤฐLER and how can a river made him go sooo far away from his homeland.river took him kingdoms away from his home.couldn't got back home by flying.he decided to do some side work then after 2 years he wanted to go back,did not take a day to go there.SPOฤฐLER I kinda tired to read back in time chapters.Author says it's importent for later but it's not related to what's happening previus chap.if he wants to write those back in time parts for someone in the future or someplace in the future he could write it after he introduce it.
This novel represents one of the best novels in recent times along with the best in the world background building, character design, story development, writing quality along with updating stability
I came here again to do another review because I just can't help it. I love this work and I can firmly say that it is my favorite, every time I read a new chapter I get goosebumps, especially in Frostholm's story, where I read and re-read several times. I would like to congratulate the author for the great work, I'm already reading it again for the fourth time!
it's really difficult remembering all these different nations on top of the nations on the other continents aswell tbh
Well, whoever reads this novel will be addicted. It's a masterpiece after all ๐
Don't read it because you'll totally get addicted to this unless you want to ๐
Hello dear NegansPalace, Is a wiki already planned for this novel? If not, I would like to create one, if it's alright for you. I would appreciate an answer.
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
I've been on here for months but this is my first review. I really love the story, the world building is great. The Mc is great he is not a soft hero wanna-be and does what is necessary. I love that he doesn't hide his dragon characteristics I personally like non human Mc and them hiding it is a turn off. I just love the story and am looking forward for more chapters from the author!
Everything about world building is great. The writing quality is phenomenal. my issue is with the story development. the pacing is really weird. The story spends a lot of time describing scenery and characters that only appear in the story for 1 or 2 chapters. important events almost seem rushed compared to the other events. Introduces lots of characters that don't end up holding much importance to the story.
this story is good and I can't find anything bad about it I recommend this novel it's awesome and by the way how can I join your discord author??
What stuck with me from this novel was the harem. I actually remember each of the womens' names and who they are because of how well their characters were portrayed, and from how we got to know them deeper, be it from their backstories or through Archers's eyes and descriptions. The author never neglects any of them and makes sure they all get their own spotlight. And true to his words, Archer loves and cares about them all deeply and equally. He never favours one over the other. Which is heartwarming, and so are their interactions with him ๐คI must admit I did make it a habit to scroll through most stuff, since they seemed 'too much' for me, information and story wise, but they didn't hinder me from reading the essential parts and getting a grasp of the overall story. His growth, character development, plot and xxx scenes kept me going. Needless they were good enough that I never once thought of dropping the novel and powered through it easily.All in all, I'd recommend it. It's very sweet AND THERE IS NO NTR OR YURI, which I love ๐
only novel I've topped up my coins for and it was worth every penny. You're doing a fantastic job man don't stop
honestly, I love the story it's great, though. I gotta say the fluff scenes aren't that enjoyable at all, for instance, ch 274. also, one thing I feel strange to me is that it seems like no one likes Yuri in harem stories. like man, I swear yall are insecure virgins.
So here my thoughts the story it self is interesting but the story move to fast at some point and to slow at others. Screen time jump back and forth randomly rather than get introduce smoothly the past event and future events are confusing just to let us know about the plot but that's stright up spoiling it in my point of view becuse we know of it but MC does not it set us up to see what's next but now we know where the story is headed instead of wondering what happens next kills the expectation you know.I want to see his journey from start to finish but he's being way to flashy im suprised the church havent sent there strongest force after him when he just chilling for 2 years at one spot I guess the church is that dumb to let him grow. His Bi-polar attitude sometime get me rolling he being show and act as a hero at time but other he's a straight up villain I'm to the point where I'm not sure how to view his character.But any ways great story well continue to follow and see where this goes.
Very fast paced story. Story depth is missing. the idea is good but the character is lacking.
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A shameless author here. Experience the madness of a boy who lost everything and went crazy. Who loved and lost, join in on his newfound adventures as he explores the new world he finds himself in.
I saw your fandom page would ever go back and update it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] it looks awesome by the way I want to see what it looks like when itโs updated
its about time I leave a review the book is amazing in my view there are chapter that are boring but that's to be expected, the start if the book feels a little wierd and can be of putting, but if you can read into the far chapter it picks up really well archer seems very over power and he is but there are still force that dwarf him in strength and he doesn't have a smooth sail all the way the author has a planning his following it, summary make it past those odd. chapters and the book tells a really good story.
Honestly the story is pretty great and world building is absolutely amazing, only downsides are the mc gets randomly nerfed which is incredibly annoying and the writing has too much detail like I picture the scene in the first paragraph no need to add to more. But overall pretty great story.
Keep this up :) ! [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it]
author it seem aeris missing in the story after they went to aquaria? just asking
I Stopped reading after 200 Chapters, its weird how this book will be really in depth on unneeded stuff as every detail of just a random house that was walked into witch no one cares that much about unless its a returning house, but then On other things it makes no sense. A huge thing that bothers me is the MC will meet people or People will meet the MC and just 100% trust each other and its like uhm no they have 0 reason to trust each Other. A big example is his "General". Idk the progression is just weird to me it feels like the story doesnt Flow together, when something important is happening with the MC then a random 3 chapters of just non needed info at the point gets dumped into the story abruptly just feels out of place and cuts the Flow of the story really bad. also the flashes to the "future" is a little annoying. Past Flashbacks make sense in certain situations but future ones can ruin a lot of Suspense on certain in counters. Either way i wish you luck but i am dropping this i tried but i just cant get drawn into this book that is all over the place.
I kinda love this novel but couldn't understand why novel has so many chapters cuz mc is really getting stronger fast.but after chapter 80 now I understand very much.cuz after that story goes back in time and forward.constantly changes pov. if there're 2 chapter mc's pov 2 chapter must have another persons pov or diff timeline.SPOฤฐLER and how can a river made him go sooo far away from his homeland.river took him kingdoms away from his home.couldn't got back home by flying.he decided to do some side work then after 2 years he wanted to go back,did not take a day to go there.SPOฤฐLER I kinda tired to read back in time chapters.Author says it's importent for later but it's not related to what's happening previus chap.if he wants to write those back in time parts for someone in the future or someplace in the future he could write it after he introduce it.
This novel represents one of the best novels in recent times along with the best in the world background building, character design, story development, writing quality along with updating stability
I came here again to do another review because I just can't help it. I love this work and I can firmly say that it is my favorite, every time I read a new chapter I get goosebumps, especially in Frostholm's story, where I read and re-read several times. I would like to congratulate the author for the great work, I'm already reading it again for the fourth time!
it's really difficult remembering all these different nations on top of the nations on the other continents aswell tbh
Well, whoever reads this novel will be addicted. It's a masterpiece after all ๐
Don't read it because you'll totally get addicted to this unless you want to ๐
Hello dear NegansPalace, Is a wiki already planned for this novel? If not, I would like to create one, if it's alright for you. I would appreciate an answer.
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
I've been on here for months but this is my first review. I really love the story, the world building is great. The Mc is great he is not a soft hero wanna-be and does what is necessary. I love that he doesn't hide his dragon characteristics I personally like non human Mc and them hiding it is a turn off. I just love the story and am looking forward for more chapters from the author!
Everything about world building is great. The writing quality is phenomenal. my issue is with the story development. the pacing is really weird. The story spends a lot of time describing scenery and characters that only appear in the story for 1 or 2 chapters. important events almost seem rushed compared to the other events. Introduces lots of characters that don't end up holding much importance to the story.
this story is good and I can't find anything bad about it I recommend this novel it's awesome and by the way how can I join your discord author??
What stuck with me from this novel was the harem. I actually remember each of the womens' names and who they are because of how well their characters were portrayed, and from how we got to know them deeper, be it from their backstories or through Archers's eyes and descriptions. The author never neglects any of them and makes sure they all get their own spotlight. And true to his words, Archer loves and cares about them all deeply and equally. He never favours one over the other. Which is heartwarming, and so are their interactions with him ๐คI must admit I did make it a habit to scroll through most stuff, since they seemed 'too much' for me, information and story wise, but they didn't hinder me from reading the essential parts and getting a grasp of the overall story. His growth, character development, plot and xxx scenes kept me going. Needless they were good enough that I never once thought of dropping the novel and powered through it easily.All in all, I'd recommend it. It's very sweet AND THERE IS NO NTR OR YURI, which I love ๐
only novel I've topped up my coins for and it was worth every penny. You're doing a fantastic job man don't stop
honestly, I love the story it's great, though. I gotta say the fluff scenes aren't that enjoyable at all, for instance, ch 274. also, one thing I feel strange to me is that it seems like no one likes Yuri in harem stories. like man, I swear yall are insecure virgins.
So here my thoughts the story it self is interesting but the story move to fast at some point and to slow at others. Screen time jump back and forth randomly rather than get introduce smoothly the past event and future events are confusing just to let us know about the plot but that's stright up spoiling it in my point of view becuse we know of it but MC does not it set us up to see what's next but now we know where the story is headed instead of wondering what happens next kills the expectation you know.I want to see his journey from start to finish but he's being way to flashy im suprised the church havent sent there strongest force after him when he just chilling for 2 years at one spot I guess the church is that dumb to let him grow. His Bi-polar attitude sometime get me rolling he being show and act as a hero at time but other he's a straight up villain I'm to the point where I'm not sure how to view his character.But any ways great story well continue to follow and see where this goes.
Very fast paced story. Story depth is missing. the idea is good but the character is lacking.
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A shameless author here. Experience the madness of a boy who lost everything and went crazy. Who loved and lost, join in on his newfound adventures as he explores the new world he finds himself in.