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This is probably my favorite novel right now or at least within my top three. Loving it so far, keep up the good work!
Highly recommended, a good story with nice characters and not so many others, it's fun and you won't get bored reading.10/10
a very nice book....but author can you also tell us about the ranks of other characters and not just the MCs
i like the duality of the MC and the story so far. it doesn't have too many system window notifications but it's brought up every few chapters.the dream segments are quite annoying, if he's that worried about home then can always use the necklace to see if she's ok....the constant changing of character perspective happens randomly and should flow better.overall the story is good. i enjoy it.
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The truth is that I read it a long time ago and I stayed around 114 more or less, it's a good story, I also think it doesn't have yuri in the Harem, the truth is I think I'll take it up again at some point when I have more timeI hope the author continues this great story
I Fell in Love with the book in the first few chapters. Itβs really somethin else g
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An MC that dosn't hide his power nor Dragon Form (i mean Like Horns or scales).finaly i'm realy happy about it...Like realy realy happy...I'm ch:44 btw so i dont now how it is later on.
Good book so far, I've read up until 42. At some points it is slow but overall it's good. Id suggest reading it if you like fantasy harem novels.
Clearly written, beautiful fantasy world, endearing characters. The only drawback is that the story moves a little slow, but it still draws in.
Archer is really immature and a psychopath don't what's wrong with him doing Humpy Dumpy in middle of no where killing dogs nad eating their hearts out. That's some psycholathic tendency my boi... and the way he laughs at every second while talking with girls is really creepy... when he stares at dark elf chest her thought was he was admiring her beauty not seeing it lustfully it's like peeking at your neighboring bench answer sheet and when get caught the examiner thinks he just clearing some doubts. Doesn't make sense right?
Writing is good worth looking into if you are new reader of this genre as for old readers who recycled this is the type of content you are probably sick of: prophecy child or whatnot meant to save the world or continent, MC looks at women and loses his marbles plus meddlesome hero complex. This is the buildup premise that might change. I didn't read the locked chaps.
I've been on here for months but this is my first review, and I've gotta say this book is amazing.the story and world building is greatthe MC is smart and decisively ruthless when provoked but isn't always out for blood.overall I love this book and am praying enough people read it and enjoy it so that the author has a reason to keep writing.
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This should be much more popular than it is. Do yourself a favour and read this novel!
Good story. Lost in a new world, again finding a way out, it has a great plot. Not to mention, the writing style and the explanation is well said. Loved the book and will read on. Great work author. Keep it on
The story is interesting, there are some things I don't understand but I think they can be clarified later, by the way the discord link doesn't work
The story of Archer's life takes a dramatic turn, resulting in a captivating and suspenseful narrative. As a young man, he experiences the loss of everything important to him, only to find himself transported to a mysterious world. The trials that Archer encounters and the wisdom he gains, as a result, make for an exciting story of personal growth. The reader is kept in suspense, wondering if Archer will be able to surmount the challenges that lie ahead and find a renewed sense of purpose and fulfillment. I am eagerly anticipating the unfolding of this tale, eager to see if Archer can overcome the obstacles he faces and achieve happiness and a sense of belonging once again.
Seems pretty good to me so far, will definitely give it a chance and hope to see more. Enjoyable and providing enough detail to keep you entertained.
Very fast paced story. Story depth is missing. the idea is good but the character is lacking.
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This is probably my favorite novel right now or at least within my top three. Loving it so far, keep up the good work!
Highly recommended, a good story with nice characters and not so many others, it's fun and you won't get bored reading.10/10
a very nice book....but author can you also tell us about the ranks of other characters and not just the MCs
i like the duality of the MC and the story so far. it doesn't have too many system window notifications but it's brought up every few chapters.the dream segments are quite annoying, if he's that worried about home then can always use the necklace to see if she's ok....the constant changing of character perspective happens randomly and should flow better.overall the story is good. i enjoy it.
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The truth is that I read it a long time ago and I stayed around 114 more or less, it's a good story, I also think it doesn't have yuri in the Harem, the truth is I think I'll take it up again at some point when I have more timeI hope the author continues this great story
I Fell in Love with the book in the first few chapters. Itβs really somethin else g
ΰΈ β ^β β’β ο»β β’β ^β ΰΈ ΰΈ β ^β β’β ο»β β’β ^β ΰΈ ΰΈ β ^β β’β ο»β β’β ^β ΰΈ ΰΈ β ^β β’β ο»β β’β ^β ΰΈ ΰΈ β ^β β’β ο»β β’β ^β ΰΈ
An MC that dosn't hide his power nor Dragon Form (i mean Like Horns or scales).finaly i'm realy happy about it...Like realy realy happy...I'm ch:44 btw so i dont now how it is later on.
Good book so far, I've read up until 42. At some points it is slow but overall it's good. Id suggest reading it if you like fantasy harem novels.
Clearly written, beautiful fantasy world, endearing characters. The only drawback is that the story moves a little slow, but it still draws in.
Archer is really immature and a psychopath don't what's wrong with him doing Humpy Dumpy in middle of no where killing dogs nad eating their hearts out. That's some psycholathic tendency my boi... and the way he laughs at every second while talking with girls is really creepy... when he stares at dark elf chest her thought was he was admiring her beauty not seeing it lustfully it's like peeking at your neighboring bench answer sheet and when get caught the examiner thinks he just clearing some doubts. Doesn't make sense right?
Writing is good worth looking into if you are new reader of this genre as for old readers who recycled this is the type of content you are probably sick of: prophecy child or whatnot meant to save the world or continent, MC looks at women and loses his marbles plus meddlesome hero complex. This is the buildup premise that might change. I didn't read the locked chaps.
I've been on here for months but this is my first review, and I've gotta say this book is amazing.the story and world building is greatthe MC is smart and decisively ruthless when provoked but isn't always out for blood.overall I love this book and am praying enough people read it and enjoy it so that the author has a reason to keep writing.
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This should be much more popular than it is. Do yourself a favour and read this novel!
Good story. Lost in a new world, again finding a way out, it has a great plot. Not to mention, the writing style and the explanation is well said. Loved the book and will read on. Great work author. Keep it on
The story is interesting, there are some things I don't understand but I think they can be clarified later, by the way the discord link doesn't work
The story of Archer's life takes a dramatic turn, resulting in a captivating and suspenseful narrative. As a young man, he experiences the loss of everything important to him, only to find himself transported to a mysterious world. The trials that Archer encounters and the wisdom he gains, as a result, make for an exciting story of personal growth. The reader is kept in suspense, wondering if Archer will be able to surmount the challenges that lie ahead and find a renewed sense of purpose and fulfillment. I am eagerly anticipating the unfolding of this tale, eager to see if Archer can overcome the obstacles he faces and achieve happiness and a sense of belonging once again.
Seems pretty good to me so far, will definitely give it a chance and hope to see more. Enjoyable and providing enough detail to keep you entertained.
Very fast paced story. Story depth is missing. the idea is good but the character is lacking.