Reviews of As a Villain in the Fictional World by HarukiSensei - Webnovel

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Moonflower414

Review time: read about 42 chaps Writing Quality Simple, not too complicated but random errors at certain paragraphs. the sudden transition from first to second to third pov is kinda getting on my nerves ig? welp Story Development It has a good pace. Not too slow, nor too fast. But a few of the chapters could use Abit slow progression. Character Design Pretty Good. A villain that's a villain and not a maniac.The actions are justified and i can tell, the og protagonist is meh. Like this take. Pretty addictive. Updating Stability This book is on hiatus but I remember it had 7 chaps a week schedule so not bad. World Background well, it's a so so situation. We learn about the world along side the MCEee but apart from that it's set in modern world so not hard to navigate Over all An addictive book.Just give the first 5 chaps a try and it gets better from there. One of the Good Villain books. Definitely Recommend!

2mth
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Hsaet_Uchiha

great work. keep it up. It would be great if you could give us characters img with the help of AI.

1yr
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SnackFu

Really liked the novel, but there has been too many issues lately i dont know if the author just post the chapter he copied from his stockpile in microsoft words without looking at the chapter and then posted it, but the spacing is literally all over the place. 1 chapter per day with the most minimum words 1500-2000, just so his contract works with the webnovel policy, idk if the author has job outside and the novel is just a hobby or what, to those reading this novel i just suggest u give up expecting 8 chapters per day cause author cant do that.

1yr
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Lollipop1337

Finally, a really great work in the genre. Yes, the idea is far from new, but its execution is perfect! All actions are as logical as possible! There is no water at all! And the most important thing is that our MC does not spend about a thousand chapters to kill the very first main character in the book, which most authors of this genre like to sin. Here for the first 100 chapters, our MC managed to kill already two main characters (unlike his colleagues, who really can not kill the very first and basic main character for 1000 chapters). In short, it's just the perfect urban enhancement novel

1yr
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BigBroCa

great plot, great characters, great world building, great writing quality. doesnt meter what are you looking for. this novel has its all

1yr
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Chaos_Evil_Daoist

I was just looking for some similar stories. It's realy enjoyable to read and Mc is cool.đź‘Ť

1yr
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Dick_Wizard

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WISEDRAGON

A really nice piece of work with sad update stability .

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Someone_Or_Other

Writing quality: fair. There are noticeable mistakes, but they don’t take away from the story. Updating stability: abysmal. If you go into this expecting to hit the 8 chapters per week release rate, prepare for disappointment. Story development: solid. While the “villaintagonist” isn’t very genre-savvy, the story works. It’s obvious that the author put a lot of effort into his plotting and prewriting, rather than simply writing by the seat of their pants. Character design: outstanding. The story may fit into a neatly designed box, with all of the tropes and archetypes you expect, that trope and archetype usage is intentional and borderline satirical. What sets it apart is the actually intelligent MC, which is always a pleasant surprise since most of the MCs I see would lose in an IQ contest against a box of not-particularly-bright rocks. World background: bog standard. The world is modern-day China, so expect the standard world that you see in pretty much every modern-day novel. Overall: the lack of regular updates really hurts this novel. It’s good enough that I really want to read more, to the point wheee I’m considering paying for privilege, but the lack of updates would make that pointless. After all, the difference between waiting for chapter 79 and waiting for chapter 109 is virtually nothing, except waiting for chapter 109 will cost me quite a lot of money since privilege may run out and need to be repurchased before the new chapter is released.

1yr
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abcd_rock

Its simply the best young master villain troped web novel i have read. Hats off to you author. The beginning first two chapters were kind of bummer, but the rest all was too amazing.

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1yr
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Fredy_89

a villain mc that actually acts like a proper villain, absolute gem, i wish i found this novel later so that i could have more chapter, author you have to finish this great novel, im liking it!

1yr
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MrFalan
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finally a book about villian that's actually like villian with self intrest but not on psychotic level and writing is good my only complaint is about his emotional state seems little too apathetic and other side characters need more depth

1yr
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suphowyoubeen

The Discord link this is in the description has expired

1yr
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Lost_In_Time

um it is good. 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

1yr
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dankoku

Easily one of the best Villains novels out here and ranks 5 stars. 4.5 star reviews and below clearly don't know the difference between the heavens and the earth.

1yr
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MrXdeLeYwin

so far it's very interesting which is rare as a gem

1yr
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DaoOfPeeking

highly recommended, but can someone give me a link of raw or is this original?

1yr
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Aryan_Das_8652

so far, Story is amazing. Looking forward to fighting scenes and more cultivation element. And I hope you write this novel to the end.

1yr
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Travis_Manton

Excellent, there are a few typos here and there, or repeated sentences i.e. master of protag's master of… Plot is flowing properly. MC is active rather than being passive and handling one situation at a time. MC is cutting off paths before they develop and planning the appropriate countermeasures in advance for the necessary points. Well written flow is excellent, MC is a proper villain i.e. oh can you help me with this? No! Oh, you assumed I was asking as such thank you for your assistance. Hahaha

1yr
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EternallyGolden

Read to chapter 42, so far so good. I was craving some villain novels recently so I decided to check on Webnovel, conveniently saw this being recommended and gave it a try. I like the MC’s character, scheming, calm and collected plus cold blooded. Also the system is good, I’ve read some villain novels where the author just doesn’t know what they are doing. However there’s one problem, which is the charm stat, it got maxed, but it may as well not have been. There’s been no difference. Like literally no one has commented that he got better looking. I hope the author addresses this point soon. Anyways other than that, if you’re into villain novels, then this is it, give it a read.

1yr
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Gizmonster

hmm, this novel i think i read it on mtlnation, prolly coz of simmilar plots and similar chara names. anyways it is good. ////////////////////////////

1yr
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KetchupxD

So far the story seems interesting although it was kinda confusing at the beginning. tbh, I recommend it if you like isekai as I am also a fan of the genre.

1yr
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md_rizvi

So far this story is a fire, cannot wait for more.I Highly recommend others to give it a try.

1yr
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Audio_Frowns

Hey author-nim, I really like the book the grammar is alright and the flow is nice. đź‘Ťđź‘Ťđź‘Ť Continue posting more chapterd

1yr
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HSKA
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1yr
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reva20p4

I have read similar novels and it's my favourite genre of villain 🤩[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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Haethanwrites

the covers continue getting wilder day by day, sensei well I just wanted to comment but have no idea how to complete these word limits. read this books, 100% recommended.

1yr
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Blind_Idiot

have 18+ scene??????????????????????????

1yr
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shyfix291

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1yr
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PolarKing

This novel is good, and it has a similar premise to “After reincarnating, I became a second generation villain” and “Reincarnated as a second generation villain”. Hopefully the author does not drop it.

1yr
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Moonflower414

Review time: read about 42 chaps Writing Quality Simple, not too complicated but random errors at certain paragraphs. the sudden transition from first to second to third pov is kinda getting on my nerves ig? welp Story Development It has a good pace. Not too slow, nor too fast. But a few of the chapters could use Abit slow progression. Character Design Pretty Good. A villain that's a villain and not a maniac.The actions are justified and i can tell, the og protagonist is meh. Like this take. Pretty addictive. Updating Stability This book is on hiatus but I remember it had 7 chaps a week schedule so not bad. World Background well, it's a so so situation. We learn about the world along side the MCEee but apart from that it's set in modern world so not hard to navigate Over all An addictive book.Just give the first 5 chaps a try and it gets better from there. One of the Good Villain books. Definitely Recommend!

2mth
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Hsaet_Uchiha

great work. keep it up. It would be great if you could give us characters img with the help of AI.

1yr
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SnackFu

Really liked the novel, but there has been too many issues lately i dont know if the author just post the chapter he copied from his stockpile in microsoft words without looking at the chapter and then posted it, but the spacing is literally all over the place. 1 chapter per day with the most minimum words 1500-2000, just so his contract works with the webnovel policy, idk if the author has job outside and the novel is just a hobby or what, to those reading this novel i just suggest u give up expecting 8 chapters per day cause author cant do that.

1yr
View 1 Replies
Lollipop1337

Finally, a really great work in the genre. Yes, the idea is far from new, but its execution is perfect! All actions are as logical as possible! There is no water at all! And the most important thing is that our MC does not spend about a thousand chapters to kill the very first main character in the book, which most authors of this genre like to sin. Here for the first 100 chapters, our MC managed to kill already two main characters (unlike his colleagues, who really can not kill the very first and basic main character for 1000 chapters). In short, it's just the perfect urban enhancement novel

1yr
View 0 Replies
BigBroCa

great plot, great characters, great world building, great writing quality. doesnt meter what are you looking for. this novel has its all

1yr
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Chaos_Evil_Daoist

I was just looking for some similar stories. It's realy enjoyable to read and Mc is cool.đź‘Ť

1yr
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Dick_Wizard

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1yr
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WISEDRAGON

A really nice piece of work with sad update stability .

1yr
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Someone_Or_Other

Writing quality: fair. There are noticeable mistakes, but they don’t take away from the story. Updating stability: abysmal. If you go into this expecting to hit the 8 chapters per week release rate, prepare for disappointment. Story development: solid. While the “villaintagonist” isn’t very genre-savvy, the story works. It’s obvious that the author put a lot of effort into his plotting and prewriting, rather than simply writing by the seat of their pants. Character design: outstanding. The story may fit into a neatly designed box, with all of the tropes and archetypes you expect, that trope and archetype usage is intentional and borderline satirical. What sets it apart is the actually intelligent MC, which is always a pleasant surprise since most of the MCs I see would lose in an IQ contest against a box of not-particularly-bright rocks. World background: bog standard. The world is modern-day China, so expect the standard world that you see in pretty much every modern-day novel. Overall: the lack of regular updates really hurts this novel. It’s good enough that I really want to read more, to the point wheee I’m considering paying for privilege, but the lack of updates would make that pointless. After all, the difference between waiting for chapter 79 and waiting for chapter 109 is virtually nothing, except waiting for chapter 109 will cost me quite a lot of money since privilege may run out and need to be repurchased before the new chapter is released.

1yr
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abcd_rock

Its simply the best young master villain troped web novel i have read. Hats off to you author. The beginning first two chapters were kind of bummer, but the rest all was too amazing.

img
1yr
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Fredy_89

a villain mc that actually acts like a proper villain, absolute gem, i wish i found this novel later so that i could have more chapter, author you have to finish this great novel, im liking it!

1yr
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MrFalan
LV 14 Badge

finally a book about villian that's actually like villian with self intrest but not on psychotic level and writing is good my only complaint is about his emotional state seems little too apathetic and other side characters need more depth

1yr
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suphowyoubeen

The Discord link this is in the description has expired

1yr
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Lost_In_Time

um it is good. 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

1yr
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dankoku

Easily one of the best Villains novels out here and ranks 5 stars. 4.5 star reviews and below clearly don't know the difference between the heavens and the earth.

1yr
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MrXdeLeYwin

so far it's very interesting which is rare as a gem

1yr
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DaoOfPeeking

highly recommended, but can someone give me a link of raw or is this original?

1yr
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Aryan_Das_8652

so far, Story is amazing. Looking forward to fighting scenes and more cultivation element. And I hope you write this novel to the end.

1yr
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Travis_Manton

Excellent, there are a few typos here and there, or repeated sentences i.e. master of protag's master of… Plot is flowing properly. MC is active rather than being passive and handling one situation at a time. MC is cutting off paths before they develop and planning the appropriate countermeasures in advance for the necessary points. Well written flow is excellent, MC is a proper villain i.e. oh can you help me with this? No! Oh, you assumed I was asking as such thank you for your assistance. Hahaha

1yr
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EternallyGolden

Read to chapter 42, so far so good. I was craving some villain novels recently so I decided to check on Webnovel, conveniently saw this being recommended and gave it a try. I like the MC’s character, scheming, calm and collected plus cold blooded. Also the system is good, I’ve read some villain novels where the author just doesn’t know what they are doing. However there’s one problem, which is the charm stat, it got maxed, but it may as well not have been. There’s been no difference. Like literally no one has commented that he got better looking. I hope the author addresses this point soon. Anyways other than that, if you’re into villain novels, then this is it, give it a read.

1yr
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Gizmonster

hmm, this novel i think i read it on mtlnation, prolly coz of simmilar plots and similar chara names. anyways it is good. ////////////////////////////

1yr
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KetchupxD

So far the story seems interesting although it was kinda confusing at the beginning. tbh, I recommend it if you like isekai as I am also a fan of the genre.

1yr
View 3 Replies
md_rizvi

So far this story is a fire, cannot wait for more.I Highly recommend others to give it a try.

1yr
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Audio_Frowns

Hey author-nim, I really like the book the grammar is alright and the flow is nice. đź‘Ťđź‘Ťđź‘Ť Continue posting more chapterd

1yr
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HSKA
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1yr
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reva20p4

I have read similar novels and it's my favourite genre of villain 🤩[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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Haethanwrites

the covers continue getting wilder day by day, sensei well I just wanted to comment but have no idea how to complete these word limits. read this books, 100% recommended.

1yr
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Blind_Idiot

have 18+ scene??????????????????????????

1yr
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shyfix291

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1yr
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PolarKing

This novel is good, and it has a similar premise to “After reincarnating, I became a second generation villain” and “Reincarnated as a second generation villain”. Hopefully the author does not drop it.

1yr
View 8 Replies