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I can FINALLY give this a full five atars as the author has started updating it again :)
Story makes sense, logical, detailed but not slow. Gives enough background without being too much, character's actions make sense and game is complex enough.
By now everyone expect the Mc knows that monster on the same level give 10% And below by 1 level give 5% (the big Rats) And Monster 2levels below give just 2% This Novel is a 1 star with a braind@th Mc that knows even less then we Readers about the leveling exp% Chapter 19
the best novel really recommend everyone to it.only downsight is that it has less than 200 chps and iIhope the author can atleast update 2 chps per day👍✨✨
dropped chapter 74very weak writing 2nd day since start of game MC is at least 5 levels ahead, already has legendary class, has abilities that MC claimed would take years to get and MC said he wanted has a pet already. and MC hasn't even spoken to anyone since started the grindvery weak writing
Have read up to date (currently chapter 161) very solid storyline so far with no useless side characters mc also has a very good personality also and fairly smart when he needs to be
I quite liked this story, it has great development and I think it has potential. It's quite slow paced and I don't think all chapters were good. Chapters are really short, but that's alright, I liked the story. It's a shame that there are locked chapters, would really love to keep reading, but it's not enough for me to start paying. Keep up the good work Author!
The MC has great depth and has a good head on his shoulders and the world building is top notch. Normally for game type novels when the MCs are in the real world the story drags but this isn't like that. The real world moments are just as good as the in game moments. I just wish the author had more time to write more because it is that good. There are also some minor grammatical errors but if you look past that then you are in for a treat.
Reading first 70 chapters, you will think that mc is going to use is future knowledge to become OP, both in game and realworld but I think author has talent for giving us unexpected twists. I am certain that this is going to be one best novel on this app. 👍👍👍 (I had same reaction as mc in ch 83)
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I read to chapter 60 for a reference point: Writing quality is good with what seems to be stable updates. Author may want to use a thesaurus to add more flavor to his text though. World building for both in game and the MCs world is progressing albeit slowly. Author needs to correct some errors in early chapters with the MCs lvl and maybe talk more about the games login times because I was left confused. Don’t think this one is for me right now but I hope the author keeps at it for his readers
So far, the story is good. It's not too slow or too fast, and I like the characters. I also quite enjoy the world setting. However, we still need to see if the quality remains consistent.
By all that is holy it'll be to soon if I have to read another 'he reckoned' or 'I reckoned'.....ugh.....there are other words!! Use them!! Overall, the story is fairly decent and well-rounded, Definitely wish there were more chapters. Can't wait to see what happens....
This Is A Good Story... And I am telling you One More secret "This Story Is About My Life"...😋😋
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So far I am loving how the author does things. I have read 2 of his other books and I am happy with his continued writing style and works as he does a great job in making long well thought out novels. Keep up the good work! This is another great addition to your library.
An amazing story so far, I especially like how it hasn't been rushed. The writing style, quality, design and world background are truly interesting in the growth that is shown in the chapters. I enjoy the fact that it isn't written like other game novels, and that the MC isn't instantly OP. Keep up the good work.
This is a biased review. Grand Void Daoist was the first author whose novels I truly enjoyed and was willing to pay for thus I am giving 5 stars just cause.
There’s no question ten out of ten story it’s background update stability writing everything’s perfect but I would like to get chapters faster
I really like this book it’s not to fast but not to slow it has some good detail and just overall pretty good hope you continue this book has amazing potential
Good novel so far after 30 odd chapters. I love how you mention that all of his memories were briefly restored making it so all his knowledge makes sense. Something many novel fail to mention making it so it is unnatural for them to remember thing so early on. Keep it up.
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I read a little bit, so maybe I'll update this review later, so far it's been a well written and interesting story with a protagonist who manages to be charismatic in his own way, finally, stop looking for negative reviews and start reading >:C
Here to support a good fellow author and friend on his new book. I haven't read it completely yet, but it does seems to be quite good, it has a constant pace, with almost no breaks, a strong minded and smart main character, and interesting side characters. Grand Void Daoist is already quite experienced in writing Webnovels, so I'm sure he won't dissapoint you with the usual boring cliches, or weak minded, pathetic main characters either. He knows his sh it
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his/her creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to the author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Experience √ check I Have read Walker Of The Worlds and I absolutely love it.🤩🤣[img=update][img=update][img=update] Give it a try, you will surely be immersed in the beautiful writings of this author I will be awaiting your updates 👍
WRITING STYLE: The author’s writing style is impeccable and quite good. The story is well written, can be easily understood, and is not as confusing as the story goes. Although there may be negligible errors that I have seen, they haven't in any way distracted my attention and immersion in reading. STABILITY OF UPDATES: With the author's current update schedule (4 chapters per week), if the update rate goes up more, I'm sure its readers' anticipation will level up, too. As of now, I think the story is getting better after every chapter. I am just 11 chapters away from the latest chapter which I plan to go through. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The story's pacing, for me, has just the right momentum---not too fast or too slow. The author has taken great consideration in building up this story that it gets more engrossing to read and makes you look forward to the momentous progress of our main character in the story. CHARACTER DESIGN: We have an astute and strong-willed main character here in this story whose progress gets better and more promising in every chapter. Even the side characters being gradually introduced into the fray have their own distinctive roles. WORLD BACKGROUND: The world setting is so descriptively rendered based on the main character's interactions within the game world and with the other game characters, where their respective actions are taking place. This is the second book that I have read in this genre which I am enjoying so far; so keep it up, author. You are absolutely doing a great job.
I can FINALLY give this a full five atars as the author has started updating it again :)
Story makes sense, logical, detailed but not slow. Gives enough background without being too much, character's actions make sense and game is complex enough.
By now everyone expect the Mc knows that monster on the same level give 10% And below by 1 level give 5% (the big Rats) And Monster 2levels below give just 2% This Novel is a 1 star with a braind@th Mc that knows even less then we Readers about the leveling exp% Chapter 19
the best novel really recommend everyone to it.only downsight is that it has less than 200 chps and iIhope the author can atleast update 2 chps per day👍✨✨
dropped chapter 74very weak writing 2nd day since start of game MC is at least 5 levels ahead, already has legendary class, has abilities that MC claimed would take years to get and MC said he wanted has a pet already. and MC hasn't even spoken to anyone since started the grindvery weak writing
Have read up to date (currently chapter 161) very solid storyline so far with no useless side characters mc also has a very good personality also and fairly smart when he needs to be
I quite liked this story, it has great development and I think it has potential. It's quite slow paced and I don't think all chapters were good. Chapters are really short, but that's alright, I liked the story. It's a shame that there are locked chapters, would really love to keep reading, but it's not enough for me to start paying. Keep up the good work Author!
The MC has great depth and has a good head on his shoulders and the world building is top notch. Normally for game type novels when the MCs are in the real world the story drags but this isn't like that. The real world moments are just as good as the in game moments. I just wish the author had more time to write more because it is that good. There are also some minor grammatical errors but if you look past that then you are in for a treat.
Reading first 70 chapters, you will think that mc is going to use is future knowledge to become OP, both in game and realworld but I think author has talent for giving us unexpected twists. I am certain that this is going to be one best novel on this app. 👍👍👍 (I had same reaction as mc in ch 83)
Reveal Spoiler I read to chapter 60 for a reference point: Writing quality is good with what seems to be stable updates. Author may want to use a thesaurus to add more flavor to his text though. World building for both in game and the MCs world is progressing albeit slowly. Author needs to correct some errors in early chapters with the MCs lvl and maybe talk more about the games login times because I was left confused. Don’t think this one is for me right now but I hope the author keeps at it for his readers
So far, the story is good. It's not too slow or too fast, and I like the characters. I also quite enjoy the world setting. However, we still need to see if the quality remains consistent.
By all that is holy it'll be to soon if I have to read another 'he reckoned' or 'I reckoned'.....ugh.....there are other words!! Use them!! Overall, the story is fairly decent and well-rounded, Definitely wish there were more chapters. Can't wait to see what happens....
This Is A Good Story... And I am telling you One More secret "This Story Is About My Life"...😋😋
Reveal Spoiler So far I am loving how the author does things. I have read 2 of his other books and I am happy with his continued writing style and works as he does a great job in making long well thought out novels. Keep up the good work! This is another great addition to your library.
An amazing story so far, I especially like how it hasn't been rushed. The writing style, quality, design and world background are truly interesting in the growth that is shown in the chapters. I enjoy the fact that it isn't written like other game novels, and that the MC isn't instantly OP. Keep up the good work.
This is a biased review. Grand Void Daoist was the first author whose novels I truly enjoyed and was willing to pay for thus I am giving 5 stars just cause.
There’s no question ten out of ten story it’s background update stability writing everything’s perfect but I would like to get chapters faster
I really like this book it’s not to fast but not to slow it has some good detail and just overall pretty good hope you continue this book has amazing potential
Good novel so far after 30 odd chapters. I love how you mention that all of his memories were briefly restored making it so all his knowledge makes sense. Something many novel fail to mention making it so it is unnatural for them to remember thing so early on. Keep it up.
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I read a little bit, so maybe I'll update this review later, so far it's been a well written and interesting story with a protagonist who manages to be charismatic in his own way, finally, stop looking for negative reviews and start reading >:C
Here to support a good fellow author and friend on his new book. I haven't read it completely yet, but it does seems to be quite good, it has a constant pace, with almost no breaks, a strong minded and smart main character, and interesting side characters. Grand Void Daoist is already quite experienced in writing Webnovels, so I'm sure he won't dissapoint you with the usual boring cliches, or weak minded, pathetic main characters either. He knows his sh it
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his/her creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to the author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
Experience √ check I Have read Walker Of The Worlds and I absolutely love it.🤩🤣[img=update][img=update][img=update] Give it a try, you will surely be immersed in the beautiful writings of this author I will be awaiting your updates 👍
WRITING STYLE: The author’s writing style is impeccable and quite good. The story is well written, can be easily understood, and is not as confusing as the story goes. Although there may be negligible errors that I have seen, they haven't in any way distracted my attention and immersion in reading. STABILITY OF UPDATES: With the author's current update schedule (4 chapters per week), if the update rate goes up more, I'm sure its readers' anticipation will level up, too. As of now, I think the story is getting better after every chapter. I am just 11 chapters away from the latest chapter which I plan to go through. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The story's pacing, for me, has just the right momentum---not too fast or too slow. The author has taken great consideration in building up this story that it gets more engrossing to read and makes you look forward to the momentous progress of our main character in the story. CHARACTER DESIGN: We have an astute and strong-willed main character here in this story whose progress gets better and more promising in every chapter. Even the side characters being gradually introduced into the fray have their own distinctive roles. WORLD BACKGROUND: The world setting is so descriptively rendered based on the main character's interactions within the game world and with the other game characters, where their respective actions are taking place. This is the second book that I have read in this genre which I am enjoying so far; so keep it up, author. You are absolutely doing a great job.