I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

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BLACKangelmarl

Hello, shameless author here, I'm not a Chinese so this will be a little different from you typical Xianxia novels. That's all, also give me a review if you happen to like it.

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WebReaderPub

The premise was great, but then author decided to make the MC a villain who commit nedless cruel actions and make bad choices for the sake of looking evil. For example he choose an evil cultivator he had just seen as his subordinate to manage a city, when he could have saved the city lord, who looked like a trustworthy person and had more experience with managing people. Another thing I disliked is the total massacre. Read some others dungeon novels, it makes no sense for the death rate to be that high. Who would want to enter a dungeon where armies get decimated? Humans are greedy, but not that stupid. And sometimes the same rules you made for the tower don't works for the sake of plot. For example when the experience didn't get absorbed immediately by the city lord or when the evil cultivator absorbed the experience from the monsters someone else killed; among these monster there was also one with one layer lower, but you previously said that one could absorb experience only from monster with the same or higher cultivation. There are many other little things i disliked and i truly think it is a pity that this story took such a turn.

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MobinHood

Great idea bad execution. MC is a one dimensional edge lord. So far there is no discernable motivation for the MC. The MC is needlessly vicious when there is no need for it. As I already said, the idea is great. If it was a better fleshed out story it could have been great, despite the lackluster writing quality.

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Fallen_Asura

Well...what can I say? A new unique Concept which is hard to come by....a hidden gem!! Grammar is good...update stability is good too...7 chapters a week...9/10 from Me...😋

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SovereignOfDarc

I must say the story line is great. I love the idea of a dungeon-style cultivation novel. I don't think I have read anything like it before. The only downside I have seen so far is the grammar, a bit. I see you use present tense and not past tense a lot. That affects reading as I feel that the way the MC is talking isn't right. Maybe use past tense in the future. Other than that, I like it. Keep up the good work.

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Apocalypse_2ndLife

Everything was going good but the quality keeps decreasing now that it feels like chapters are MTL or maybe just summary like in around ~50+ chapters, English is alright, not much character or World development and also dungeon development is rushed or skipped now...... [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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Max_Zeon

Up to date with the released chapters. The story is good but there have been more flaws as we keep on moving forward. 1) Poor grammar, but readable. 2) Too much information overload in some parts, but makes sense. 3) Too much cringe lines. 4) MC thinking the subordinates can betray him and doesn't want to trust the system too much, when it is literally the system giving him everything. 5) MC gets soul coins from killing other beings, but in recent chaps(specially in the forbidden areas part), he gets no soul coins from killing so many powerful cultivators. 6) MC taking risks for no reason, like he accompanied Isadora to unknown regions when he was just at Golden Core, then goes on to fight Core Formation Tree God when there was risk of failure. Why the heck would the author make MC go out when he doesn't have information on those parts. He could just wait and upgrade his strength and slowly scout out the regions through his subordinates. It is readable, but there are many things that could be improved.

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Olajide_O_Favour

This book got an adventurous plot, men, this book got me so good.🤟🏾🤟🏾🤟🏾🤟🏾, So you should vote, recommend it to y'all people.💞💞💞💞

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heminasti

It's alright.The main issue for me is the change in writing style. In later chapters it's written in such a melodramatic way. For example a character will be fighting to save a city and it will say, "She must retain her boundless resolve to sacrifice herself for justice. The fate of the world depended on her and she must not falter." Then it will keep going like that for 2 or 3 paragraphs before doing any fighting. It also began to focus mostly on everyone except the main character. It's not unreasonable given the setup of the MC staying behind the scenes in his dungeon, but I liked how Top Tier Providence balanced that better.Except... the other characters are actually more interesting than the MC and his subordinates. Because the MC and his crew become cardboard cutouts who pretty much only say cringe and cliche villain lines.

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TheDaoOfStupidity

Good idea of a dungeon in a cultivation,world ,i like it and decent execution, not many typos unlike my review but i dont like that the author makes stuff up that never happen, things are going super fast, the chapters are so short, i read 50 chapters in an hour, characters and background are ok decent read, but definitely not a top novel out there, ill probably finish using the free trial i like it but won't continue reading

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stupidmcdetector

author spent 13 chapters on an auction.... Seriously? entire auction "arc" felt super drawn out, and the mc at times just feels like a side character that uses his powers to strengthen the true mc Elara

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ACE_KinGz

Finally I Found a AMAZING novel .. the story is fresh and new .. Can you make 2 Ch a day ? .. it's not enough 1 Ch a day Or mass release maybe 🥺🥺

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Nick1324

I really liked this story but I feel like the author tries to draw out the story and plot as much as he can to the point I start to get bored and the grammar need a fix the author legit thows as many useless words as he can into the grammer that u end up reading 13 chapter “arc” on a auction because every word is split into 5 words because it sounds better when it really just draws it out

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Kingobuhu

i have read up to chapter 50. overall, it's a novel you could read, but don't expect something with a lot of depth. here and there are some questionable aspects. if you overlook that it's good. but couldn't really interest me enough to continue to read it. just not my kind of novel, it seems.

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JugdementCale

Love the story, it's just that I saw that there's a harem tag now... is it really going to be a harem Author-san? 🥺

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The_prezismoke

Love the novel is a masterpiece. It just seen like the chapters get shorter. Everything else is good development and all just hope it doesn’t turn in to a harem 😁😁

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Everythingonurmind

Cons, in my opinion: 1. the idea is kinda fresh and unexplored, plus the first 20 chapters are a decent setup with a glimpse of the world. However, that's where I stop the praise for this, as the author or translator has a memory issue, forgetting the limitations, numbers, powers, and cultivation that they had mentioned previously. 2. the names and translation are all over the palace, meaning that one name can be used for several Chracthers, which can be headache inducing after a while. 3. after the first 30 chapters, I feel like stuff happens for no reasons at all, like there is no logical reading for some of the mc actions and plot lines.

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Owen_Rothenberg

I’m caught up on this novel, and enjoyed it for the most part. The MC being a villain is a nice change of pace compared to most novels. Additionally the concept is also very interesting. If you enjoy a system like power system with decent intricacy and a unique concept this is for you.

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GhostVillage

Writing quality is okay, not good but not as bad either, the only thing I hate about is the senseless massacre in the dungeons and the main character's stupid decisions, I mean come on you have a well established city lord and a evil cultivator, who will you choose to manage a city, and the MC chose the evil cultivator without even knowing if he could even manage the city or not.