DxD: Shadow Monarch

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DogLickerGods

This author copied DxD Golden Peerage for the prologue 😂. Changed the Golden Dragon King to the Shadow King. Shameless but I will wait for many chapters and if the story is good I will support this book.

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SpookierSapling

I thought it was good the first few chapters, and then the author or whoever is in charge of the writing decided it would be a good idea to spam "..." every few words and now I can't read it without my inner voice stopping once every few moments. It just ruins the immersion and the grammar started to be subpar. I thought it was an interesting development to have Sung Jin-Woo be in DXD but the process was just ruined. The characters don't act realistically either, and it's just some kind of forced romanced between the two. In my opinion, there's no way that Sung Jin-Woo would ever feel lonely, he's just too mentally strong and advanced for something like that, and he has an extremely strong will. Grayfia also wouldn't really act like this imo, and be more reserved, so it just feels like author forced romance and it sucks.

LV 13

SlippyWitABlicky

35 chapters of simpy aids. Trash-tier nonsense at this point in time.

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Mamameste

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LV 13

Beamingkangaroo

blatant plagiarism. author with zero creativity. even if you liked and was inspired by golden peerage at least don't copy the chapter word for word.

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Drako0692

Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.

LV 1

Jhon_4525

In the 64 chapters that this fanfic has, there is not one in which it is shown that this story really had any progress, a supposed protagonist who did not appear in much of the story and when he did he was very irrelevant [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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YAMRAAJ_021

I'm already loving this. personality of Jin is really same as the Original Manhwa and i feel like it would be more intresting when he fell in love hehehe.

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Carlos_4054

Very short chapters that do not match the publication rate, to add more than 40 chapters and I do not know yet who is the protagonist of this story the title says one but in the story is another 🤦‍♂️[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 13

Clockwork_055

it's a good story i like it very much I am a grayfia fan so that also the reason I am reading this.also try to add Lilith( wife of orginal Lucifer) to Jin harem and don't drop this midway.

LV 13

firat_Vural

What the heck did you do tour boy jin woo and the comanders what is with the nerf

LV 15

whoknew123488

was expecting a shadow monarch story...... got some of that but it turns into a greyfia story very quickly and while it's written well that was not what was advertised

LV 3

angel_2771

Garbage, when I read the title I thought it was going to be a great novel, but it's not, it's a clear copy of the golden nobility, also who is the protagonist? I thought it was Su Jin Woo,Also in the novel he says the gods are afraid of him and that he is too powerful, blah, blah, blah, if we talk about the scale of power at a general level, there are many beings that can kill Su Jin Woo With a single movement, there is a reason why these beings are called gods, they can create lives, destroy and recreate the world, and I don't see the point of them fearing Su Jin Woo.

LV 3

Alex3DxD

Well, it's a childish power fantasy, the protagonist is an almighty god who is at the top of the universe, if it is universal power, he is cold to everyone except women, he is useless who only serves to be in a corner thinking about how strong he is

LV 5

Yuri_is_Ntr

Well, I don't remember what I give to a golden peerage, something around 3 stars. Because Idea that this old all - powerful dude being a braindead simp, is extremely infuriating for me. Like come on, you have thousand of years to think about others, about yourself, but you was just too focused on sleeping and r#tatred, is that idea? Where do you find such clown? And lo and behold, exactly the same thing but with shadow monarch... Apparently, he was strangled in his lonesome life for a 700 year, having a great power and understanding, but couldn't come up with any way to find new planet for himself, or somehow seal himself to go back. Okay, fine... I could believe in that, he was a fighter, not a thinker. But somehow, he doesn't change much In character in this 70p years of his life, and start to simp in the first Lady that he found out on a realm... Sigh...Wow, as pathetic as richter(or whatever this dumb lizard was called) . Subarashi. And as author role model, it's too have a lot of weird errors about dxd world. Like author doesn't even try to read wiki, and just use whatever he remembered from other fanfics. Bruuuh. And it's written badly on top all of this... So yeah, original was trash, and now there is botleg copy of that. I don't know what to think...

LV 4

ThornedProse

I do like the concept of the story, even if the start of the book is an imitation of another book's prologue(that's why I rated the Story Development as 4 stars despite that fact). I wanted to read a fanfic where the MC is Jin-woo, so I had a bit of expectation for this one. However, I'll be blunt, the author's poor construction of grammar just turns me off. There are wrong spellings and misuse of words. The author doesn't know how to use apostrophes. And the thing that just frustrates me so much when I'm reading is the frequent use of ellipses. It's SO annoying. The author uses ellipses in every paragraph. I don't think he knows how to use commas, so he just replaces them with ellipses. Smh... Writing Quality - 2 stars Story Development - 4 stars Character Design - 4 stars Updating Stability - 3 stars World Background - 4 stars

LV 11

Kobayachi

The theme is interesting, but the way it is executed leaves a lot to be desired, the chapters need editing. But more problematic than that, the MC's personality has nothing to do with Jinwoo, it seems that someone (generic) went into the body of the shadow monarch and now tries to live like him, and without intelligence too... Funny... I expected something similar to the DXD:Golden fanfic... and really if you include jinwoo it would make a very interesting finfic, I hope the author is successful in this endeavor hahaha

LV 13

Pekokopiko

for those who want to start reading this... just skip the whole 40 chapter, it's useless and meaningless to waste your time to read those chapters

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M_AX1E

bro just quit and delete this stupid ass story and never make another one🙏

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Aniket_Kumar_1890

Though this has a potential of becoming a pretty good fan fic if the author played the cards right but unfortunately, it got annoying after 30 chapters. Even though he already has a pre established excellent story and a huge information from fandoms and wiki, he is not using it at all, and he is trying making Hestia overly dumb, though she is a bit airhead still she is one of the most powerful goddess, she doesn't show it because she don't like flaunting her powers. And can you stop trying to fill the chapters with info dumb, every chapter after 30 th has half them containing useless information dumb. I know it my personal opinion as a webnovel reader having read hundreds of novels and fanfic, you have the potential you don't need to rush just one time read your own story, you find out yourself your weakness. thanks for the Fanfic