angel_2771

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Damn keyboard and my English, sorry if you don't understand what I just said, author

Hello, I read the story and I must say it's good, but there are some things I don't like.An example would be writing,Sometimes it is difficult to read, for example, the third person, sometimes during the narration Oscar suddenly says something in the middle of the narration, and that is a bit confusing,What I want to suggest is at least if you want the character to speak with his name and then a colon so as not to confuse , example: Oscar: oh no, Beacon is going to fall, I have to avoid it. It is also better that you end the narration so that the character can speak, not that in the middle of the narration the character says something and continues the narration as if no one had spoken. Well, this is all the problem I had. Thank you for reading. I'm sorry if my English is bad.

Garbage, when I read the title I thought it was going to be a great novel, but it's not, it's a clear copy of the golden nobility, also who is the protagonist? I thought it was Su Jin Woo,Also in the novel he says the gods are afraid of him and that he is too powerful, blah, blah, blah, if we talk about the scale of power at a general level, there are many beings that can kill Su Jin Woo With a single movement, there is a reason why these beings are called gods, they can create lives, destroy and recreate the world, and I don't see the point of them fearing Su Jin Woo.